The Tough Nut! ( Completed pg.45 27/3)

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

so maan now knows everything about geet and he is sure about she will become one day big doctor.and offer her job, but she didn't took it seriously-

phir kya hua batao ye raat na tham jaye ye raat thum na jaye...

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: kavitha05
interesting story please continue soon

Thanks for reading😳

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
superb update! Well written! that is hw he met her! Maan knew she wld a b great doc! update soon!

Thanks for reading😃

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: idunno
so maan now knows everything about geet and he is sure about she will become one day big doctor.and offer her job, but she didn't took it seriously-
phir kya hua batao ye raat na tham jaye ye raat thum na jaye...

phir tum batao kya hua hoga😉

still typing will post time lage ga😊

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: aparna3011
very nice

Thanks aparna! 😊

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Part #5

Shrill of the alarm woke her up from her peace full sleep... with the rays of the sun she remembered yesterday's events Thanking babaji's to have brought her out of that mess she started her routine switching on some music n putting the milk on her burner she left to have a quick bath...

Suddenly the start of her day turned too much annoying as the next song on her play list started ... no prize for guessing!

Pyaar ki galiyaan, baagon ki kaliyaan

Sab rang raliyaan poochh rahi hain

Geet panghat pe kis din gaayegi tu

Mere sapno ki rani. ...

What the hell babaji if I hear this song again dekhle na I don't even know what I'll do...

Don't know what he's planning yaar it's limit from past to days he is literally finding ways to irritate me...

Babaji I'm going to work now please enjoy ur song alone thank you so much for ruining my day!!

Cursing the traffic the stupid government the traffic police pedestrian to street dogs she reached the hospital in her foul mood...

Even I wonder sometimes that how such a romantic song can annoy a young girl u are right yaar babaji hi jane what will happen if someone truly comes in a black shining car whith a truly romantic proposal. .. ok lets get back to the story

As she stepped into the hospital she forgot all her worries and drowned herself in the worries n issues of people who were already waiting for her

she loved her work the most in her life coz that was only thing which helped her connect to the world outside her circle of babaji's n her..

She never had friends for the obvious reasons of her attitude n she was ok with it... by afternoon she didn't have much to do so she took out her car n started driving... she had her car but rarely used it! It was mainly because the hospital wasn't that far from her house n she didn't go out very often to bring out her car!

After driving for an hour she stood in front of the Khurana's hospitals... it was huge area with people moving in and out walking in n wandering in the corridor looking at the facilities n rooms alloted for the visitors it was all so well maintained clean and hygienic... impressed would have been a small word

I started to doubt her intentions now was it the man inthe portrait or the overflowing wealth that is bringing her again again to the khurana's

If it's just the curiosity then its good but if it crosses that then I wonder who will help u out of the world u would be entering!!

There was a huge garden in the centre surrounded by various blocks of buildings!

On reaching the reception she didn't know y the name of Mr.khurana slipped from her lips and the stunned receptionist stood up from her seat quickly assigned her work to other lead her to the lift with so much respect!

What does she know about her and y was she getting the vip treatment was something she couldn't comprehend

May be she she mistook her to be someone else convincing herself she controlled her heart beat which was beating as if run a marathon

The jerk of the elevator indicating that they reached there floor brought her back to the world around!!

She walked upto the huge glass door which had the name plate Maan Singh Khurana with silver embossing on it!

Punchung some nos she walked in to the open area which was huge with a reception table few couches and few people who were too much engrossed in there work

She asked me to wait and went ahead talking to someone who I think was flirting with her and she was shying turning red then they turned towards me n became all professional and led me to the cabin of Mr. Khurana n left!

Pyaar ki galiyaan, baagon ki kaliyaan

She walked in looking at the interior of the sophisticated office that's when she found someone walking out of the office busy in his phone for some odd reason she rushed behind him

Sab rang raliyaan poochh rahi hain

Ignoring the calls of the girl from the reception... as she reached the ground floor she lost him in the crowd but heard the last few words which she knew was for her

Geet panghat pe kis din gaayegi tu

Mere sapno ki rani kab ayegi tu...

She was sure she saw him it was him for sure if it wasn't him then whatever was happening wasn't good for her career!

Driving back to the hospital she attended rest of the cases n left to her favorite please where her only family lived

The Dargah!

Babaji ab aap ko koun bachayega poor u!

To be continued. ..

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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zornitsa

@zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

superb...👍🏼

loved ..out of story ..dialogue..between lines...

And the song played thru out ...meri sapno ki rani..

while she enters Maan's cabin too..

here you throw light on geet's life too..

liked ...story ..slowly unfolding.. covering..all coners..

so maan is not dead...?

why geet is getting VIP treatment/shocked expression of receptionist?

geet herself is confused...me too...

hope nxt part will relieve...some more..

👏

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chiki143

@chiki143

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Good one dear but still u left it in dilemma if maan is alive or is geet imagining him. Y is evry one treating her with so much respect and y is she so curious orin fact interested in khurana affairs. Poor geet I somewhere feel u r trapping her yaar...😉. Maan and his cheesy lines r alwys at its best in ur ff. M eri sapno ki rani kab ayegi tu...never felt it could be irritating😆Continue...but pls help babaji and dnt make geet trouble him more. Give some more clues yaar...

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: gavin14
hi
superb...👍🏼
loved ..out of story ..dialogue..between lines...
And the song played thru out ...meri sapno ki rani..
while she enters Maan's cabin too..

here you throw light on geet's life too..
liked ...story ..slowly unfolding.. covering..all coners..

so maan is not dead...?
why geet is getting VIP treatment/shocked expression of receptionist?
geet herself is confused...me too...
hope nxt part will relieve...some more..

👏

This was yesterday's part so u will have one or hopefully 2 more parts comming today!

Enjoy reading my non sense😆

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: chiki143
Good one dear but still u left it in dilemma if maan is alive or is geet imagining him. Y is evry one treating her with so much respect and y is she so curious orin fact interested in khurana affairs. Poor geet I somewhere feel u r trapping her yaar...😉. Maan and his cheesy lines r alwys at its best in ur ff. M eri sapno ki rani kab ayegi tu...never felt it could be irritating😆Continue...but pls help babaji and dnt make geet trouble him more. Give some more clues yaar...

Se we aren't doing anything she was called by that yesh guy a day back

she yelled n left!

That's it right... non from the khurana's called her or asked her to visit

Ab wo khud khai me girna chahe tho what can we do😉

and if that khai is the charming maan khurana then???