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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: tabby999
hi
love the story ..
happy to see happy ending..
wish all people get happy ending ..
i like the lines in between ..is this a song ..
plz share the detail ..

Thank u for liking and commenting...I wish same...which lines dear😕

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: tabby999
"A heart breaking isn't always as loud as a bomb exploding.. Sometimes it can be as quiet as a feather falling.. And the most painful thing is, no one really hears it, except you.."

This lines r taken from Goggle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: anupm04
Nice os
Loved it

Thank u for liking and commenting😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet
Beautiful os sweety..
Maaneet were friends from childhood and in college they confessed their love promising each other to be together always..
But Geet's parents fixed her marriage with Rahul and took promise from Maan to make her agreed..
I hate Maaneet emotional scenes..
How can he broke his promise to fulfill someone else promise..
Thank god rahul ran away otherwise Maaneet alag ho jaate..
Lovely epilogue..
Maaneet got married and they told about their love to Geet's parents after their marriage..
Maaneet blessed with a cute doll..

Thank u shona...even I hate Maaneet emotional scene I love them fight and loving...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: mamatha.
Nice story...

Thank u😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: vartekaa

Congrats on ur first os dear...
Loved this emotional update...
Maneet daughter is so cute...
She is really their princess...
I like it when maan said...
Ki ek uska dil hai tusri uski dhadkan...

Do write more beautiful os...
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Thank u for liking and commenting...will try to write more😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

CUTIEE...M VERY VERY VERY VERY ANGRY ON U 😡

U WROTE AN OS WITHOUT EVEN LETTING ME KNW...😲

HAWWW

WOH BHI ITNA ACHAAA and EMOTIONAL OS??

Phele toh maan and geet k pyar k sath shurwat hui..unka pyar hayee...

phir beech mai promise???

uff 🥱

uske baad judai...

agar tum wahi pe end karti toh mai tumse baat hi nahi karti cutie 😆

but thank god u continued...and gave a wonderful ending!!

Thanks to u rahul joh bhag gaya...hahhaha yeh rahul sun k mujhe mere bhai rahul ki yaad aa gayi😆

and honestly sometimes...people just let go of their love...which they shouldn't..!!

Pyar ko pane ki koshish pure shiddat se karo..toh khuda bhi use apni manzuri de deta hai 😳

and the name of the os..well this is my fav from song from kHAMOSHIYAAN...

and i think this went very well with the story line!!

and cutie...thanks for writing this story..i loved it..its ur 1st os and very very special to me...baby!!

U ROCK!!

SUPER JOB CUTIE!!!!

Angly mat ho, main surprise dena chahti thi iss liye nahi bataya...yaare main wahan par end kaise kar deti, jab tak Maaneet ek nahi hote tab toh toh story adhuri hi hai na...tumhara bhai bhi bohot bhagta ya bhagata hai kya😛😆😆...God sweety I love those line sooo much...even this songs is my fav, iss liye to ispe likha and while writing was just praying ki mujhe pehle koi aur iss song pe post na karde😕...Thank u soo mcuh sweety, love u soo much and big hug to u🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

By the way

heyyyaa cutie read the edited epi...hehehhe thank u sooo much baby...

and i hope...ki u write such os's more...ha...

coz i loved reading it!!