MG new OS Baatein Yeh Kabhi Naa Tu Bhoolna

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Hi everyone it Adwika, one of the reader on GF, it took me 2 months to complete the whole OS as it's my first time, but I m happy that at least I completed it, but as I said before its my first work toh main aap sabko pehle hi warn kar doon ki isme bohot saari mistakes ho sakti hai and it won't be up to the mark too, but yeh OS main apne saare IF friends ( Sweety, Vani di, Preeti, Cidel, Fariya, Spoorthi , Pooja, Mahi di and Kamna di ) hopefully maine kisi ka bhi naam nahi choda and GF ke awesome writers ko dedicate karna chahungi joh apni life ka ek part humare liye stories likhne me dete hai, thank u all soo much for writing those story which resides in every Geetians heart, u all r fab and hats off to u guys
Ok ab main apni bakwaas band kati hoon and u can start reading the story is u want







( Thank u sooo much Preeti, for such a wonderful thing, muah❤️ )


The Handa Haveli, was illuminated with lights, making the the whole city aware of the grand ceremony, the sangeet ceremony of Handa's one and only daughter Geet Handa, the daughter of one of the biggest and richest businessman, everyone were roaming from one place to another to check decoration and if every thing is perfect for the function, but nobody saw the sad eyes of the bride, she sat between everyone, but she wasn't with them, she smiled with them but she wasn't happy with them, when everyone heard music playing, they saw a man in his late 20's coming towards the couple who was sitting between everyone

Baatein Yeh Kabhi Naa

Tu Bhoolna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

He came towards, them and held their hand and kept in each others hand, Geet looked at Maan who was doing this, seeing his action she was having a layer of tears in her eyes, and slowly took her hand back from the grip of her fianc Rahul, and look at Maan with pain in her eyes, who averted his gaze from her not wanting to see pain in them

Jaaye Tu Kahin Bhi

Yeh Sochna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

Tu Jahaan Jaaye

Mehfooz Ho

Tu Jahaan Jaaye

Mehfooz Ho

Dil Mera Maange

Bas Ye Dua

Maan moved backwards, while other surrounded the wedding couple and pushed them on the dance floor, and a reluctant Geet danced with Rahul while all the time her eyes was on Maan and Maan eyes on hers

Baatein Ye Kabhi Naa

Tu Bhoolna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

Jaaye Tu Kahin Bhi

Yeh Sochna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

Maan was walking out of the hall, not wanting to witness his love to be someone else, he knows, it was his decision, to make Geet marry someone of her status but it hurts, it hurts a lot when u have to scarifies ur love for the trust which her parents shown on him from the time, he entered the haveli, but before he could move out he was stopped by Rano, his Pari maa, she was the one who brought him in this house and with her husband gave him the life which he couldn't have thought of

Humdard Hai

Humdum Bhi Hai

Tu Saath Hai To

Zindagi

He again looked at Geet, who was still in the arms of Rahul, but it was clearly seen in her eyes, how comfortable she was feeling, he remembered, the time they had confessed their love to each other for the first time, it was their college fresher's party, where Geet was knowingly dancing with some random guy to make him jealous, which worker perfectly, and he left the party in anger, thinking she is enjoying the dance seeing her smile, but he didn't understand that, that her smile was bcoz of his anger, which made her happy, after she left, she followed him, and found him standing in the garden near the fountain, the area was isolated, with only dim light and soft music coming from the hall of the party, she went near him and stand by his side

What happened Maan????, she asked innocently, but Maan didn't answered her and ignored her, kya hua, bata toh sahi,she again asked, but the response was same, which on started to anger Geet too, bcoz from the time they r friends they have always shared each and everything with each other and when she has fallen in love with him, she wanted to know about his feeling too, but that was a bit difficult for her, as Maan never gave her any type of signs to confirm her that he too love her but she was lucky enough when she got the hold of his diary, and read his thoughts and feeling, and after reading that she has decided that she will make him confess his love for her, Go to hell, ek toh main tere liye yahan aayi hoon, aur tu hai ki bhaav kha raha hai, isse acchi toh main ander thi, kam se kam, Vishal was giving me attention, but tu toh mujhe ignore hi kar raha hai, she said in anger and turned back when in a jerk Maan pulled her to him and her lips were in his, she was shocked for a moment, but soon started to respond, the kiss which was harsh and was depicting anger had turned into a slow and passionate one from the time Geet

started to respond, he slowly broke the kiss, and look at Geet's face which was flushed and her eyes was closed with her lips still open wanting to feel his

Agar agli baar uska naam liya toh dekh lena, this brought Geet to sense and she looked at him with a fake anger but from inside she was grinning

kya dekh lena, bata, le lungi main Vi..., but before she could complete Maan again started to kiss her

Mana kiya tha na tujhe, he said pulling her more close to him

Aur tu mujhe mana kyu kar raha hai, she said directly looking in his, he hold her hand behind her back and pulled her more close to him

Bcoz I love u, he said, with his eyes having undying and undying love in them for her, listening to this Geet pulled him again for a kiss

Tu Jo Kabhi

Door Rahe

Yeh Humse Ho

Jaaye Ajnabi

He was brought back to the present world, when Geet cousin Kajal pulled him on the dance floor with her, Geet saw him dancing with Kajal and averted her gaze from him seeing them, Maan knows what it meant, he always knew Geet never like Kajal and will only need a reason to start a fight with Kajal, bcoz she tries to hit on him but he didn't gave her any importance to Kajal

Tujhse Mohabbat

Karte Hain Jo

Tujhse Mohabbat

Karte Hain Jo

Kaise Kare Hum

Usko Bayaan

He sang the lines, making Geet look at his way, and making her aware of his love, which won't be lessening bcoz of anything, he had, and will always love her, what ever may come or whatever may happen, his love for her can't be changed and he won't let it changed for anything, he left the dance floor making an excuse of doing work

Baatein Yeh Kabhi Naa

Tu Bhoolna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

Geet looked at Maan, who was doing the work told by her mother, feeling a gaze on him Maan turned to look at Geet whose eyes were filled with the layer of tear he so much wanted to wipe them but he couldn't bcoz he knew somewhere he is the reason behind her tears, he tore his gaze from her and looked other side, while Geet went to past which was filled with their happy moments

Geet was waiting for Maan, but like always he was late, and this was making Geet angry, it was her birthday and here Maan was taking more time than the birthday girl, few minutes later Maan came running towards her and Geet turned her face other side, showing how much angry she is on him

Maan : Sorry sorry sorry, he said standing beside her, but Geet didn't gave any heed to his words, yaar Geet itna kyu gussa ho rahi hai, main sorry bol raha hoon na, he said turning her to face him and held her from her waist

Geet : Tum humesha aisa karte ho, mujhe jaldi bola kar, khud gayab ho jaate ho, and above it aaj mera birthday hai aur tumne mujhe subah se ek gift bhi nahi, gift toh chodo kiss tak nahi kiya, the kiss has become a part of their life form the time they confessed their love, they won't leave each other, sometime Maan would even take risk to kiss her in front of her parent but just a small peck, so that no one could see them, and till now they were succeed in it, they wanted to Geet's parents about each other after Maan is well settled in his life, so it won't have any problem for her parents to think twice on those line, like how can he give their daughter a perfect loife or anything like that

Maan : Ab main kya karoon, jab princess har time kuch hatake chahti hai, toh uski wish toh fulfill karni hi padegi and about kiss, abhi tu mera saath chal baad main tere upar kiss ki baarish kar dunga, he said nuzzling in her neck, while Geet wrapped her hand around him and before Geet can drown in his love Maan broke apart and made a sit in the car and zoomed off

Jaaye Tu Kahin Bhi

Yeh Sochna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

IN present Maan too started to think about the same thing when he had promised her that whatever may happen he would never leave her and his life is for her only, he remember how shocked and happy Geet was when she saw her gift

Maan was driving on a deserted road for a long time and finally the place came, he stopped the car and blindfolded Geet, while Geet was confused with his act but didn't said anything and kept quiet, Maan again started the driving and stopped the car after coming to the place which he desired for, he stepped out of the car and helped Geet out

Geet : Maan, kya main ab yeh khol doon??????, she asked reaching behind for the knot to open it but Maan stopped her

Maan : Nahi, abhi nahi, main khol dunga, but abhi ke liye toh apni sandal khol, he commanded her

Geet : Sandals, kyu??????? she was confused with his demand

Maan : Jitna bola hai utna kar na, he waited for her to remove her sandals and helped her to walk, Geet felt something soft under her feet but she was not able to recognize it, so just kept following Maan's word, after sometime Maan stopped her and opened her blindfold, it took some minutes to Geet to adjust with the light and then she saw a small but beautiful house in front of her, which was covered by the surrounding of trees and she can hear the sound of waterfall near by, she was surprised with the beautiful place in front of her

Geet : Maan yeh??? she was shocked and surprised to see it, though she was rich but she always dreamed of small and simple things, she never fancied costly thing and she wanted a small family type house of her own in between of nature

Maan : Tera gift, he said coming and hugging her from behind keeping his chin on her shoulder, kaisa laga?????? Geet was shocked with his words, she remembered once she told him about a family house but it was when they were about 15 or 16 and she would have never talked about it after that, but what surprised her more was Maan kept weaving her dream and fulfilled it without her knowing it

Geet : Bohot accha, she turned and hugged him, but yeh sab karne ki zarurat...Maan kept his finger on her lips

Maan : Shooo, kuch mat bolna, it was my dream to fulfill all ur dream then how can I not fulfill this dream of urs, ab chal yeh emotional batein chod aur ander chal, Maan held her hand and asked her to keep her legs on clay tray which he had arrange so he had print of her first entry in this house but Geet insisted that they both should do it, bcoz it was their dream which he had fulfilled

After Maan gave her the round of her own house, they settled on the swing in the garden, the house was made but interior wasn't bcoz Maan wanted Geet to do it, bcoz once again it was one of her dream to decorate her house by her own, from coloring to lightning, from frames to show piece, from mirror to bed , she wanted to do that on her own

Geet : Maan, tumne yeh sab kab aur kaise ???????? she wanted to know bcoz Maan was saving money to open his own company, he had done his MBA and architecture degree on his own, she knows he never asked her, sorry their parents for any money bcoz he wanted to stand on his own feet, he did his whole education on his scholarship, he did many type of jobs and saves money and by looking at the house she can say it must have easily taken his half of the saving or may be more than that

Maan : That doesn't matter, till the time ur face has this smile which is worth of anything, he said pulling her closer to him and Geet willingly goes in his arm, Geet didn't asked him again, she understood Maan won't reveal it to her, so she let the matter go, Geet was playing with Maan's fingers it was a peaceful silence between them when Geet broke it with her demand

Geet : Maan, I want one more thing as my birthday gift, Geet said suddenly making Maan look at her in confusion

Maan : Ab aur kya chahiye ?????? he asked her knowing she won't stop until she get it and he won't stop until he gets it for her

Geet : Nothing much, just a promise, she said leaning her back on him while he held her more tightly by her waist and hummed in response, Promise me whatever may happen u won't leave my side ever, she said turning her face towards him and Maan look in her eyes

Maan : What type of promise is this Geet, u know I can't live without u

Geet : I know but still promise me, please, she said pulling her palm out and waiting for him to make promise, Maan sighed and rested his hand in her hand

Maan : Jeeoga toh sirf tere khatir,

chahe kuch bhi ho chodunga na saath tera kabhi,

tu jahan bhi jayegi payegi mujhe tu apne saath,

yeh aaj wada karta hoon tujhe,

main rahunga humesha tere saath

( By me, I know acchi nahi hai )

He said looking deeply into eyes promising every word he spoke without knowing what destiny is planning for them

Jaagi Bhi Hai

Royee Bhi Hai

Aankhein Yeh

Raaton Mein Mere

He was brought in the present world when Kajal, again pulled him with her on the dance floor for the couple dance without his consents and he reluctantly he have to danced with her, looking away from her he was again thinking about their past where he had broke his promise which he had made to her, bcoz his Pari Maa asked him to do something which he didn't knew will tore his heart apart in split of seconds

It was one of the most irritating day for Geet, her parents were bugging her for marriage making her irritate and she can't even say what was in her heart bcoz she promised to Maan that they will only make an official announcement about them being in relation when he will make a name of his own in the world but she can't say this to her mom and dad too

Geet was laying on her bed burying her face in the pillow while downstairs her life's decision was being taken

Rano had called Maan bcoz she knew now only he is the one who can make her daughter agree, Maan entered the house and went to Rano who was sitting on sofa with her hand on her head, Maan came and sat on the floor

Maan : Kya hua Maa, aap itne pareshaan kyu ho?????? he asked seeing her worried, Rano looked at him and felt happy that now he will help her

Rano : Aacha hua toh aa gaya, she said and made him sit beside her, ab tu hi hai joh meri madat kar sakta hai, she said looking up at him with hope in her eyes, looking at that Maan couldn't even deny her even he wanted to too

Maan : Hua kya hai, Maa bataye toh sahi????? he again asked her the matter

Rano : Pehle tu mujhe wada kar tu meri madat karega

Maan : Yeh kaisi baat kar rahi hai aap Maa, main humesha apki madat karunga but bataye toh sahi problem kya hai

Rano : Nahi, pehle tu mujhe wada kar, she was adamant on him promising her

Maan : I promise Maa, aap joh kahegi main usme aapki madat karunga, he said taking her hand between his and pressing it in assuring manner

Rano : Maan, Geet ke liye rishta aaya hai, she said with smile but failed to notice Maan's expression which turned into shock to heartbroken and his hold on her and got loose, Rahul naam hai uska, Mohinder ke business friend ka beta hai, aur accha bhi hai, main kab se Geet ko manane ki koshish kar rahi hoon, but woh hai ki sun hi nahi rahi hai, ab tu hi hai joh usse mana sakta, Manayega na usse, not getting response she turned towards him and shook him, bolna manayega na, she asked with hope, to which Maan just nodded, words fail to come out from his mouth, toh ja uske room, muh phoola kar baithi hai, he just stood as a robot and made his way towards Geet room, each step was heavy for him and he knew the moment he would say those words to her, he would not only break her heart but her soul too.

He entered inside her room and saw her on bed laying on her stomach and face buried inside the pillow

As if sensing him near Geet turned nd look towards him and as soon as she looked she jumped on him hugging him tight to herself, burying her face in his neck, while Maan made fist of his palm trying to control himself from hugging her back and after sometime he forcefully made her separate from him, Geet looked at him confused bcoz of his reaction but didn't gave much thought to it

Geet : Maan, we have to do something now, mumma meri shaadi ki baat kisi Rahul se karwa rahi hai, I think we should say everything to her, we will wait for the wedding but hume unhe batana hoga humare bare me she said stepping close to him, but Maan pulled her back from him and made a distance between them

Maan : Karlo shaadi Rahul se, he said in cold voice, looking everywhere but not in Geet's eyes thinking it will break the last ounce of control which he is having on his heart from breaking in front of her

Geet : What????, she gasped bcoz she thought everything but not this, that Maan, her Maan, her love will say her to get married to someone else, but she also know he won't be doing this on his own, she took a deep breath and tried to compose herself, Who???????, she asked with tear in her eyes, Maan knew she not mistrusting him but want to know the person but his decision, Maan looked towards her and saw her teary eyes, he raised his hand to wipe them but before he would he stopped himself and pulled his hand back making a fist of it, but Geet saw his action

Maan : No one, he said nd tried to make his way out of the room, but Geet came in front of him, stopping him

Geet : Don't u dare to lie to me Maan, she said grabbing his collar and pulled him, I want to know the person behind ur decision and ur reason to separate me from u, she said in a broken but angry voice

Maan : Bcoz I promised, he just said those 3 words but Geet's attention took last word PROMISE, she remembered the promise Maan made to her on her birthday

Geet : Promise, she said in low voice, she looked directly towards his eyes, then what about that promise which u made to me on my birthday, that u won't leave my side ever, u will be always with, What about them, she jerked him wanting him to answer her, but he was not looking at her, Geet looked at him with, tears and pain in her eyes, she loosed her hold on him and stepped back, wiped tears from her eyes and again looked towards him, It was all my mistake to love u, a mistake which made me happy to commit it, but I foorgot every mistake have its own punishment, and I got my one, the mistake I was happy to live with, u made me feel sorry for it, the mistake which was my life, is now the same mistake which is taking me away from my ownself, Thank u for making me realizing that it was a mistake and I have to bear its pain, with her every word Maan heart was slitting, with her every pain his heart was squeezing with her pain, with her every tear, his heart was shattering in to pieces, she wiped a lone tear and turned her face, out, she said in a cold voice which send a shiver through Maan, I SAID OUT, she shouted, making Maan fear for her, he stepped closed wanting to comfort her but she moved back, and this action of hers made Maan die thousand of deaths in that one particular second, without any word he moved from there, embracing all those sweet memory which he spend with her, which will be now his lifeline for rest of his life

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Kyun Her Ghadi

Milke Tujhe

Lagti Rahe

Bas Teri Kami

That was the day, and today it was the day of sangeet of Geet's wedding, but that day changed many things, after that day Geet shut herself from everyone and when Rano asked about the proposal, she didn't gave any answer, thinking her silence as yes, her wedding was fixed without her will, and after that day Maan never tried to come across her, not wanting to see pain in her eyes bcoz of him, he buried himself in his work so much, that now he was the India's most eligible bachelor on whom every girl was ready to die, with his one decision stock market is changed from upside down, on his finger tip world is ready to do anything but what was the need of that now, when he won't be having the one bcoz of whom he wanted all this, he rules the world, but one who ruled him is not with him, she is going to be someone else in matter of few days.

He was jerked back to the present when Kajal, started getting close to him, he went a step back but being a ***** she was, she was not leaving a chance to be near him, she wanted to hold him more close in the pretence of dance but her real intention was known by both Maan and Geet, Geet who was looking at them was getting angry on Kajal bcoz of her advancement towards Maan and on Maan bcoz he was not trying enough to get away from her, but Maan didn't wanted to create a scene in the function slowly tried to free himself from her but his effort were futile with Kajal's advancement towards him

Hum To Naa Samjhe

Tum Hi Kaho

Hum To Naa Samjhe

Tum Hi Kaho

Kyun Tumko

Paake Tumse Judaa

All were dancing with their pair but suddenly someone from the boys side said to change the partners, giving much needed relief to Maan, bcoz it helped him to get away from Kajal and after few time Geet was in Maan's arm

When Geet landed in Maan's arms it was so sudden that she couldn't balanced herself and grabbed Maan's sherwani to stable herself and Maan held her protectively in his arm securely not wanting to get her hurt

Geet raised her eyes to meet his, they were moving with the music and lyrics and they thought it was so perfect for them, she was here in his heart and arms but she was still away from him all bcoz of that stupid promise, which he promised and to fulfill that he broke the promise he made to her, they were lost in each other eyes wanting everything to change so that they can be again with each other but she knew it won't happen at least not until Maan wants it.

Geet got lost in the past when she tried to convince Maan to tell her parents after that stupid fight but he was not ready

Baatein Yeh Kabhi Naa

Tu Bhoolna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

After Maan went from her room, Geet breakdown and cried for hours, but after crying for hours she thought it was waste of time, she has to talk to Maan anyhow and convince him, she quickly made her way towards his flat, but it was locked she hit the door and slide down it with tears in eyes, their moments started to play like a video in front of her eyes, but at one particular moment again her brain started to work and she knew where she will find Maan.

Now few hours of driving she was standing in front of their small paradise, the house Maan gifted her, she went inside and saw everything was in mess, she checked all the rooms but he was not there, she thought he left from these place too but then it heard some voice coming from the basement, sound of breaking, she followed the voice and reached at the gym, which was unknown to her, she wasn't knowing Maan had made a gym at basement, he never showed her, she look at the sight in front of her, there Maan stood in between fire planks, broken ice pieces and glass pieces shattered here and there, she stood behind him and saw there were many marks on his back and shoulder and all were looking new, she hissed seeing them and closed her eyes in pain, Maan stopped listening to her hiss, though he felt her but ignored thinking she can't be here, now she wouldn't even want to see his face but her hiss confirmed her presence, Maan turned around and saw her, he wanted to embrace her, the moment he left her he was not himself, he wanted Geet, he wanted her to fill his life with her love, her naughtiness, her care but he knows it can't be happening now, but still his heart was not his, how can it be when he have given it to her long back, his heart only wanted Geet in his arm to make it alive

Geet saw Maan with tears in her eyes, tears which were gifted by him only, she wanted to hate him for asking her to marry someone else but she couldn't, she slowly took a step towards him still looking at his eyes slowly slowly she ran and hugged him tightly from his neck making him stumble a little due to sudden force of weight but he gained his balance and made them self steadied, his hands were at her back, he wanted to loose his grip but he did just opposite of it, he tightened his hold on her and hugged her to himself, burying his face in her hair, calming his rage breathing

Maan : I m sorry, I m sorry, he kept murmuring in her hair, while Geet nodded no and made herself free from the hugs and cupped his face, he was looking downwards, Geet made him look at her, and wiped his tears

Geet : I m sorry, I shouldn't have spoken like that, she said touching her forehead on his forehead, Maan nodded no, not wanting her to say sorry for the mistake she never did, please Maan, mumma papa ko bata dete hai, I can't live without u, these brought Maan the memories in which he promised Rano. He distanced himself, creating a gap between them

Maan : U shouldn't be here Geet, Geet was shocked to see sudden change in Maan, a moment before he was hugging as if he won't let her go and now he is distancing himself from her

Geet : Maan please, don't do this to me, to u, to us please Maan, she said wanting him to give them a chance to confront her parents

Maan : I can't Geet, I promised that u will marry Rahul, he said trying to make her understand

Geet : And what about that promise which u made to me, that u won't leave me ever whatever may come, why r u breaking ur promise now Maan, she asked holding onto him

Maan : Bcoz some promise are not to be fulfilled, he said removing her hands from his face

Geet : That means u don't love me now

Maan : I have and I always will love u Geet, but sometime some stories are not made to have its desired ending, he said taking a step back making Geets hand falling at her side and turned back, she stood there motionless, knowing now he won't be doing anything

Jaaye Tu Kahin Bhi

Yeh Sochna

Koi Tere Khatir

Hai Jee Raha

Geet was shocked when she saw her surrounding, here she was standing in someone else arm, she knew that last time she was dancing with Maan but when she came in Rahul arms she herself was clueless, she saw Maan leaving the venue, she too separated herself and left to her room, though that made people gossip but Rano handled saying she wasn't feeling well from the starting of the day and it would have tired her after so many rituals, and now it was also time for wrapping up the things for the next day, the D-day

Here, Geet went to her room and stand in the open terrace looking at the moon, like complaining to everyone why its happening with them, for what r they being punished for, she was crying silently when she felt someone gaze on her, she looked for the source and found Maan still standing outside looking at her, seeing him broke her every bit and she break down and here Maan condition was no less he too was in pain seeing Geet like that, Maan left them place with his broken heart

Maybe its true that some stories r not meant to be completed, and maybe their stories r one of them

"A heart breaking isn't always as loud as a bomb exploding.. Sometimes it can be as quiet as a feather falling.. And the most painful thing is, no one really hears it, except you.."

-Goggle Baba


I know its sad, but being Maaneet crazy fan I can't give it a sad ending so epi is in next post do see it too

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Epilogue

After six years

Geet was cleaning her closet, when an album fell down, she sat and start looking at her fond memories, she was caressing every pic carefully, when suddenly from nowhere someone kept his head on her lap making her gasp in shock, she looked at the man

Geet : What r u doing here, weren't u mean to be in office now???????, she asked angrily

Man turned and now he was facing her, he kept his hand around her waist : Ummhmmm, abhi toh mera time meri biwi ke saath romance karne ka hai, he said nuzzling his nose in her stomach and planting a kiss over the dress, making her moan

Geet : Maan, she moaned in pleasure, Maan looked up at her face, her eyes closed lips parted and cheek red, he thought how would his life would have been if Geet was not in his life, he stood and scooped Geet in his arm, Geet was shocked due to sudden movement but held Maan from his neck, Maan slowly made her lay down on bed and slid beside her, hugging her tight

Maan : Never leave me Geet, my life is nothing without u, he said nuzzling in her neck, Geet turned side way to give him more access

Geet : But I wasn't the one, who wanted to marry someone else, u forced me in that, she said in a grumpy tone, Maan looked at her face and gave her a peck on her lips

Maan : Nd I was the biggest fool to think I can live with ur memories, but ur memories are not enough I want u, all of u to myself

Geet : Yes, u were the biggest idiot to do that, she said hitting him on his chest, but Thanks to Rahul, that he ran away on time, sikho usse kuch, apni GF ke liye shaadi se bhaag gaya tha aur tum apni lover ke liye uska haath bhi uske parents se nahi maang paaye

Maan : I m sorry, he said again giving a peck on her lips, Maan hugged Geet and was thinking how everything again changed in their life just in a blink of a second

Past

It was the wedding day, Geet was in her room, detached from her surrounding not knowing what was happening outside, while downstairs Rano and Mohinder were tensed, after knowing Rahul ran away from his house bcoz he was forced into this marriage, but bcoz of his this decision people were going to point finger at his daughter not knowing what to do he called Maan in his study

Maan : Apne bulaya papa, he asked entering inside

Mohinder : Maan, please humari madat karoge na???, he asked joining his hand, seeing this Maan took quick step towards him and held his joined hands

Maan : Papa, aap yeh kya kar rahe hai, he said downing Mohinder joined hand, he looked towards Rano and saw her crying, Maa papa bataye kya huya hai????, he asked getting impatient seeing them this much tensed

Mohinder : Maan hum tum se jo bolne wale hai shyaad woh tumhe pasand na aaye, iske liye hume maaf kar dena

Maan : Papa aap yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe hai, mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha, please saaf saaf boliye na problem kya hai, he asked pleading them to know the reason behind their tension

Rano : Rahul bhaag gaya apne ghar se Maan, she said in broken tone, listening this Maan got in shock, he had never expected that, he was boiling in anger thinking that ******* ran away leaving behind Geet and her family to face humiliation, if he wasn't ready for marriage then why he didn't told it before, why he ran away at the last moment

Mohinder : Maan please Geet se shaadi karlo, he said shocking Maan more

Maan : Papa, main..kaise ...???? he was too shocked with the happenings, here he was thinking he would leave this country forever but it looked like god where having his own plan

Mohinder : Please Maan, mana mat karna, hume koi fark nahi padega koi hume kuch bhi kahe par hum Geet ke liye kuch nahi sunna chahte, yeh society saara blame Geet pe hi daalegi, please Maan, Maan was too shocked with the happening that he just nodded his head in yes, Mohinder hugged him, thanking him again and again, while Rano was smiling with tears in her eyes and thanking her babaji for making Maan ready for this, and Maan though he was shocked with the happenings but somewhere in corner of his heart he was rejoicing this news, that he was going to marry his Geet

Marraige happened but Geet wasn't aware of anything, she wasn't knowing that Rahul ran away and it was Maan on the place of groom with whom her wedding is happening

At the time of SR, Geet was readying herself to confront Rahul and tell him that she is love in with someone else and she can't be his wife in any sense, but before she could say something she saw Maan in the dress of the groom, she was not believing her eyes she pinched him

Maan : Ouch Geet, kya kar rahi hai????? he asked rubbing the place where Geet pinched him

Geet : Tum koi mazak toh nahi kar rahe ho na????, she asked in teary tone, Maan took her in his arms sensing her insecurity and nodded for no, Geet started sobbing while Maan held her to himself calming her down

After she got a little better, Geet asked about him being here in place of Rahul, and Maan told her everything from Rahuls' ran away to how he came in his place, after he ended Geet started him, making him ran around the room, but in running heavy lehanga and jewelry it was easy for Geet, she was tired soon and sat on bed huffing, Maan seeing her sitting, so he slwoly came and kneel down in front of her holding his ear

Maan : Sorry, Geet looked at him and hugged him, not wanting to think any bad, they decided to start everything fresh from these moment and make their new memories, erasing the past one which will give them pain but before that Geet again took a promise from Maan, saying that whatever promise he does to anyone but he wasn't going to break the promise he had made to her on any cost, to which Maan nodded promising her

Then they started their new life with the new beginning

Nd after some years Maan and Geet also told about their love to Rano and Mohinder listening to which both were shocked and feeling guilty thinking they were going to ruin their children life but Maan and Geet made them understand it was a test for them which they passed nd bcoz of that only they r together now, also that they doesn't want any bad memories in their life, so asked them too to forget about everything and live in present with them

Present

Geet pinched Maan on his thigh to bring him from his thought

Maan : Ouch Geet, tu kyu humesha mujhe pinch karti rehti hai, he asked rubbing the place

Geet : Kyunki tum humesha aisi harkat karte ho, making Maan looked at her with frown, Waise kya soch rahe the Mr Khurana, she asked in suspicious tone

Maan : Yahi ki Mrs Khurana jab J hoti hai toh kitni hot and sexy lagti hai, he said pulling her on him

Geet : Haww...main kab J hui

Maan : Abhi when u pinched me, weren't u feeling J thinking what I thinking about when u r in my arms, hmmm?????

Geet looked here and there knowing she was caught : Woh..toh..main..ainvayi..., she said trying to free herself from his grip

Maan : Ainvayi, huh, he pulled her lips in his, kissing her breathless

Aapta ho daya???? ( Aapka ho gaya ) came a sweet voice, breaking their moment they look towards door and saw their little princess standing over there with her hands on her eyes, trying not to see, seeing her Geet quickly freed herself and made her way towards her and took her in her arms, while Maan settled on bed properly resting his back at bedpost and waited for them to join him

Geet : Aap yahan kkya kar rahe ho?????, she asked removing tiny hand from their princess eyes, aapki toh dance class thi na, she placed herself on bed near Maan, but little girl left her mumma once she was near her daddu, while Geet just shook her head

Danlce clach se daldi holiday mil dayi, ( Dance class se jaldi holiday mil gayi ), she said sitting on Maan lap while Maan was playing with his doll, Daddu balent day kya hota hai, listening her words Maan and Geet both were confused

Maan : Aap kya bol rahe ho princess, kaunsa day?????, he asked her

Aley daddu balent day jo kal hai, she hitting Maan's forehead with her little hands, Maan thought what is tomorrow and then it clicked in his mind that his princess was talking about Valentines day

Maan : Valentine day, to which his princess nodded in yes, aapko kisine bataya iske baare me?????? he asked wanting to know who was teaching his princess about this

Dalce sil ne, unhone taha ti kal balent day hai iss liye aaj daldi holiday, tyuti unhe unti fliend ke liye shopping talni hai ( Dance sir ne, unhone kaha ki kal Valentine day hai iss liye aaj jaldi holiday, kyunki unhe apni friend ke liye shopping karni hai ), Daddu batao na tya hota hai balent day ( Daddu batao na kya hota hai Valentine day )

Maan gulped trying to form an answer : Princess, iss day par na daddu mumma ko kissy dete hai bas, he said thinking he will be saved

but sil kich ko kissy denge woh toh papa nahi hai nahi mummy hai , she asked innocently

Maan : But unki friend hai na, woh unhe kissi denge, he said it would save her but..

Toh tya yash bhi mujhe kissy dega, tyuti main uski fliend hona, ( toh kya Yash bhi mujhe kissy dega, kyunki main uski friend hoon na ) Maan eyes popped listening to his little princess, and not knowing what to answer her changed the topic, while Geet giggled at his plight, bcoz it was only their princess who can shut the mouth of the world best business tycoon with her innocent questions

Maan : Princess aap ne apna lunch liya, to which he nodded no and looked at Geet, Aur aapne???? he Geet same question to which her reaction was same, sometime he would think who was baby here, both antic were so similar

Maan got up from bed with his princess in arm and asked Geet to come along to the kitchen, he made few dished for them as nothing was ready and he didn't wanted Geet to do any work, he fed them and in return they fed him with their hands, after their lunch, all decided to have a quick nap to be fresh for other work

So again they were in their bedroom with their princess sleeping in between them

Maan was admiring his both Jaan, ek uska dil tha toh dusri dhadkan, he thanked almighty to give his Geet back to him, he pecked their forehead and closed his eyes.


Pyar pure shiddat se karo..toh khuda bhi use apni manzuri de deta hai 😳


( By my sweety, yaar sweety mujhe yeh lines itni acchi lagi ki maine isse add kar liya, ab thoda sa change kara hai, hope tumhe bura nahi lagega )

THE END



Finally it ends here, hopefully u liked it, and if u liked it do please hit like and comment



Edited by -Adwika- - 10 years ago
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Congratz sweety for your first work on Maaneet..
Thank you for mentioning my name..
post this os on FF daily update thread 14..
will read and comment tomorrow right on my way to home..
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Congrats on ur first OS! Emotional fab OS! superbly written! all ends well! lovely epilogue! Maaneet married n have a daughter! Maaneet were in love bt Maan was adamant tht she marry Rahul! Geet shattered! bt Rahul ran away wid his gf! Geet's parents ask him 2 marry her! Finally they were told abt Maaneet being in love! Maan nw successful tycoon! his life is his family! looking 4ward 2 more stories frm u!
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congo 4 such a lovely story
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so beautiful n emotional maaneet love each other but geet belongs to rich family n maan promised rano so he was ready to sacrifice his love but thnx to rahul he ran away never like rahul but in this story i really like him thnx u 4 make it a happy ending m also maaneet fan cant see sad ending lovely story plz write more
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Congratulations on your promotion👍🏼
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had she married rahul three lives would be ruined
iss liye you should think before making rash promises
seriously had rahul not run away well then maneet would be slowly dying
kaise maa baap hain
that they didnt know what their daughter wanted
who she loved
sorry for being so harsh
but this is lesson for us
am not saying dont listen to your parents
but dont blindly follow their every say so
they too are human
they too err
good that rahul ran away
even he was forced
haila yaar
why didnt the kids say something to their parents
instead of being bali ka bakra
ruining lives like that maan
his daughter is so funny
and yes she is the only one who can make him question himself
well beti MSK ki jo hain
that was sweet ending
good os

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