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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

How are you now. Gain good health & get well soon.

Part 15 - Lovely road-journey. Both were enjoying it. He too was enjoying with her roadside momos. Both feeling the pull towards each other. He wants to fall in love with geet or give once chance to geet but still scared of breaking his heart once again. Liked that geet was straight forward that straightly she denied that she cant think anything about any relation right now. Both still need time to heal their hearts. Brij & pari. With their short convo, seemed both were caring for each other.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#762

dekhte maan aur geet k zindagi kahan leke jaate dono ka...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Hope u r fine now dear.. This is a wonderful update dear. Asu said not everything is black and white. Most of it is a mix and that too grey shades are more. This story of two imperfect people infact it's a story of people who are not perfect and I feel that makes it more and more realistic. And loved Geet a lottt. She is open and very clear on her views. She has faced the situation directly and was very Frank in confronting maan about the feelings. And brij in ur story I think every girl wants a brother like him. Loved the update. Will be waiting for more and more...👏

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Beautifulll update...hope u r fine..take care...dear

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#765

Chapter 14..

Awesome .. Interesting...

Thanks for update..

Maaneet had a heart to heart talk...

Shared their inner feelings... Which they probably couldn't do with others...

Take good care of yourself... All the best .. Get well soon...

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latecomer

@latecomer

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#766

You are so awesome aditi when it comes to word you create magic and leave the readers spell bound...
how are you now??may god bless u health. Now coming to update...
maan and geet two lovely persons tried hard to keep with life and their spouses, and now sailing on same boat. Scared to embrace the love .
the eye lock was so serene and spoke volume. No word needed no sound still their feeling was conveyed...
feeling bad for muskan the poor girl definately need her both parent together. Hope geet could handle the situation well...
fingers crossed...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Part 15..

Awesome... Superb..

Thanks for update..

Continue soon...

It's like they are opening up... They are moving on gradually unknown to themselves... Perhaps they don't wanna do so or maybe they don't have it in them to accept the changes n new challenges life has to offer ...

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#768

Amazing story.

Read all parts in one go. Loved its concept and the characters. Dev and Geet are divorced, so did Maan and Sameera. Both the couples loved each other immensely in the beginning only to be betrayed later on. Maaneet met each other in a disturbed state of mind and had a one night stand with the hope to forget their agony. Brij, Geet and Yash's mother Rano likes to impose her decisions on her children which forced them to drift away from her. Brij met his long lost love NT although NT has moved on in her life. After Yash's demise Pari is living a lonely life.

Geet goes to Darjeeling to bring her daughter Muskan and on the way met Maan again. Travelling together they started opening up,both are attracted to each other but not ready to move on. Loved it. Well knitted story. Superb. Waiting for next.