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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#751

Hope you are feeling better now =)

What an update!!!

So they are acknowledging whatever that there is between them...loved it

Geet taking up the offer of having Maan there while she speaks to Muskaan says a lot...looking forward to the next part!

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#752

Amazing. Don't know what is there in your writing which make me left for more.I really enjoyed it. Maneet food sharing moment and their chat about reading books was great. It really borough some comfortableness between them. Their small.staring session and their thoughts about each other was so realistic. They knew they both are getting attracted towards each other but they knew it's not love yet. They are so open with each other. N this thing is the best about them . waiting for next dear.

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#753

Lovely update loved maaneet convo they r very much attracted to each other good thing is that they r not denying it really like their straight forward nature no hiding nice part thnx 4 update

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#754

give me some time to comment

thode words to jama kar du

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#755

A very nice update ADITI
Maan and GEET both felt they shared a under current chemistry, but they were not ready to name it.they both fears of getting hurt again.
Well both were badly trapped in love less marriage so it wil take tym to both of them to move on
Wilb waiting for MUSKI reaction.

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#756

Nice part

Maaneet are attracted to each other and they feel different with each other company... They were clear in their thoughts but we never know what gonna happens with our lives...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#757

Excellent Update

Hope You Doing Well

I like the fact that both Maan and Geet does not pretend they don't lie about their feelings both are truthful both love they ex's well it does seem Geet still loves Dev a lot even after all the pain and betrayal while Maan loves Sameera but not like he once did its almost now the love he has for her is respect and kindness not one of a lover's love

Maan and Geet yes started off in a intimate way but now they both know there is something between them perhaps an attraction love at this stage would be impossible as both need to clear their past feelings they both need to understand each other now they both failed in their past relationships so jumping in love now would only damage both further they have accept each other with each other's past and baggage and most important Geet have a daughter if Maan ever decides he really wants Geet in his life than he has to accept her daughter too while for Geet if she decides to have Maan in her life than Muskaan will have to accept him first so both Maan and Geet knows there is an attraction but they have to play it safe they have take tiny steps if both want it to happen

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#758

WOW!! outstanding update dear...loved it

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#759

Hope u r totally fine now...

N I loved this update...wat u said note is the best thing I love about ur story...here maan n geet are real as they are grey in character...

N I totally loved maan n geet talk...how they shared wat they feel n how it's not right time they think...but still they are not ready to give it up what's they feel...

N yup loved pari n brij talk...how they said they are selfish to share moment with dre love one...I felt that thing heart touching...

Waiting fr next eagerly

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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#760

Welcome back. I hope you are doing well and the surgery you were supposed to undergo went well.

This story is different and there is something about it that keeps pulling the strings. I really liked it.

Both are not jumping onto anything in haze...but acknowledged that they do have something to share.