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insight555

@insight555

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

Part 15

lovely part...

Maan has started penning down his thoughts... he can't tell Geet his feelings but his diary can surely convey his feeling to Geet someday...

Maan is enjoying his trip to musoorie only by niharofying Geet...God these two are always thinking about each other but will never speak up...they can be friends atleast...Maan is making things on his own and is getting angry on Geet for no reason...nd then feels sorry in his mind for doubting her...

Khamoshiyan Gungunane lagi is perfect for them as its only the silence between the two which talks...

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Thank you for your wishes. Reading Locket the first time was a joy and second time is a bliss, thank you for adding me.

Part 1- had I not know better, I would have thought Dev and Geet were in love, I like that you dedicated a chapter to each character. Dev's feeling is described so well, his love, his wait and his persona. A wonderful start.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Part 2- Dadima as we all know is the pillar for maan in most stories, and again you expressed their relation, yes its not strong like his mothers but there definitely was love and care. You explained Maans agony so well and Dadimas unsaid emotions.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Part 3 - This I know is Naintara, I love her projection, strong and will-minded yet there was an underlying feeling that she expected help from others, had she not then she wouldn't ask why others did not intervene. But maybe I am reading too deeply into the lines, well I like her answer to the molestation act on the bus. The slap however was epic, I totally relate to her. She for sure is having a bad day.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Part 4 - Geet and her simple love, little did she know it just turned a lot more complicated. I like the fact that she's simple and guarded after all she is one and only. You also included her monumental trait - she talks to herself!!! I love Geet a lot due to the immense affection I have for Drashti hence I like her projection in a good light, call me biased but a good Geet ALWAYS equals a must read for me.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

#816

Finally Part 5- a lover boy Maan, must say haven't seen that much. He his also very relatable, having a huge burden to carry on his small shoulders. Some responsibilities are way bigger then the cause itself. But I have the trust we would make, I also know he would (from past reading lol). Cant wait to read further.

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#817

sorry for the late comment net creating always creating problems

chapter 11
loving and caring darji

chapter 12
maan trying to help her by sending his notes to geet

chapter 13
bechara dev dadi ruined his all plans of relaxing and taking someone else's credit

chapter 14
wat sweet welcome to the newyear for maan going for a trip with geet

chapter 15
the cable car journey was awesome and maan's narration was cherry on top
how maan saved geet from few drunkards

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#818

Chap 14
Geet is working in library wo apne daarji ki financial load ko Kam karne ki koshish kar rahi hai
Maan is missing geet kyuki wo jaane se pehle geet ke saath kuch time spend karna chahata hai
Finely maan ki ye wish puri ho jaati hai jab geet bachoo ke saath khelte hue uski bahoo me aaker girti hai

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archana roy

@ArchanaRoy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#819

All 5parts are awesume u made me spechless...

in all update

par--11 is gonna one of my favr8 part n soo touchy updatet well written i understand how it falt when u lost ur love ones ...

geet n her darji's sweet close relationship ilove darji's all addvices ohh she goes to HP nd sees darjee is unwell then she take him to hospital n she thought indeed she was very fortunate having her darji n got all love n care nd not it's her turn she realises her responsibility for him now when he needs all her care nd attention...

she is confuse about these feelings.nd she missed maan when he was gone but she denise it all she also doesn't think maan is really interested in her she thought it's all her jhaligire hehe ...omg geet all classmats are wierd and some funnyLAMO ...

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archana roy

@ArchanaRoy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#820

Beautifull part----12

maan has decided to walk same path wid geet n help her whenever she need it he was their for her n he thought untile the day comes when he can walk beside on the same path muhhh maanuu jaanuuu ...

ohh god maan's baby anger his hurt yup his ego nd his love for geet made him helpless maan is missing her like anything he is like a lovesick teen sitting under her window waiting for her to return n walk on same path nd then finally geet comes back but banda is angry it's not about ego n anger but about expectations It's maans expectation of geet ye baat aur h they haven't spoken a word to each other n other side geet is aware of him but could not show it bez of her responsibilities...ohh he always hope for her to meet his eye nd when she did wrong timing his eyes were angry only if geet knew that anger was for the proffecer...

he got to know her reason to be absent and he help her with the notes without her knowledge so that she doesn't fall behind in her studies...my fvr8 scean when maan knows about she lost her perants sach a tender age n naturaly he shed tears for her bcz he falt her pain...