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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#791

Part 10

In creditably Awesome Update
Maan sitting on the rocks at the beach and the waves sprays lie perfume on Maan and he gets to thinking about the night he walked
Geet to the hostel , Aisha I felt as a client herself she really super ceded
in explaining Maan about the dream house making him understand
then she too told him how to act when it comes to Geet
the song was mindblowing I truly loved it

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#792

Chapter 12

Oh god... they have not even exchanged a word...
But it is so exciting to read their silent love story...
Love to read the way you write their silent talks even without meeting their eyes...

Aww... Geet is completely ignoring him...
First off all she was not sure about his thoughts... And she is now concentrating on darji now...
So maan has to think from a girl's point of view...
Being a man he is finding it difficult... Then how will the girl, who always watches ground when he is around will dare to meet his gaze or talk to him...
But both are really pagal in love... but they are so different...

I know it is obvious for them to behave like this... Considering their shy nature

At some point I love them both for understanding each other even though it's late
Abb without words they are like this... love is in the air types
Then what will happen when they r in talking terms...
Maan's heart melted after hearing her reasons...
And he is helping her now...
I think that this will continue for long time...
Ab they will not even talk... Then how will she come to know

Awesome writing... I love this writing about their silent love story...
Hiding from him when he was looking for her... It must be too painful... for both of them

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#793

Part 11
Emotional yet it was so soulful Bg Music is just great for the first time I had tears in my eyes
Geet lost her parents at such a young age but indeed she was fortunate having her
Darji to love and care for her and yes its time now for Geet to on home

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#794

Part 12
Excellent Update
so Maan has decided to walk the path with Geet help her whenever she needs it
until the day comes when he can walk beside on the same path

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#795

Part 13
Wow that was such n enjoyable update
Dev really does nothing let Naintara do all the work yet he treats with
disrespect he has time for fun and lunches but he truly does not
concentrate on his duties at KC while Maan works the whole day and
still goes to college at night
I'm actually glad that Daadima has said both Dev and Naintara will
be team leaders lets just hope he does some work

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#796

Part 14
I liked that Geet was playing with her friends and the ball was heading towards Maan
and like a miracle Geet stumbles on him and he easily holds on to her
that was cute yet magical
I really love your choice of music

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#797

Part 15
ok so Maan's ego wa high and he tried his very best to ignore Geet's presence
but than later he drunk guys approaching her and again he is there to protect
her and he sees trust that she has for him for sure this cable ride was magical

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Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#798

Chapter 11 was a sweet loving dedication to the close relationship Geet has with her Darji. It is true that most parents try to give their children the best in life and emotionally support them to ensure that they make the right decisions as they grow into adults and Darji has done exactly this. With his love and care Geet has grown into a sensible young woman who has all the right values. Geet in return wishes to nurture Darji back to good health and take care of him just as he has been taking care of her all her life.

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Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#799

Chapter 12 well it's all about ego - Maans ego to be precise. Although reading it one realises it's not really about ego but about expectations. It's about Maans expectation of Geet - even though they haven't spoken a word to each other he is expecting a response or acceptance of him of some sort. But he doesn't know that she has expectations of her own which is to look after her sick Darji, do well at college and make her Darji proud. She also doesn't think Maan is really interested in her.

Like how Maans ego is put aside as he finds out Darjis ill health and he goes out of his way to give her notes so that she doesn't fall behind in her studies.

Edited by Alpha01 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#800

Chapter 13 was really all about the different shades to Tara. She tries act like a hard and very practical person who likes to keep everyone at arms length and loves to spout rules to colleagues at work but she also has a soft and sensitive side to her which she tries very hard to keep hidden. But this side comes out when she ends up sharing her apartment with Geet. She tries to make Geet a bit more aware of peoples hidden motives and saves her from unwanted attention from a neighbours partner.

Enjoyed the bickering, well it was a cat fight really, between Zarin and Tara.

Dev saved by Tara but not happy with Dadimas decision whereas Tara is over the moon.