THE LOCKET REPOSTED - COMPLETED - Page 32

Part 5

hi avi..
what to say.?it felt so nice to read the story all over again...it was not like that i am re reading it but it seemed totally a new one...
thanks for ur pm.,actually it came as a surprise for me...

chapter 1
i could visualise a different Dev not like the serial wala...i liked this dev so much...his love story which might be having so much twists and turns and ups and downs. .is the one which i am eagerly looking forward to read. ..

chapter 2

maan's pain and dadima's concern over her grandson was very well portrayed. .i could feel the pain of an adolescent boy who is introvert very much close to their parents while losing his parents at the age when he needed them the most. ..it was so touching and heart wrenching. ,u dragged me into the story...
and also u have kept so much of suspense for ur readers to hook to the story and left them to think of so many permutations and combination. ..lol

chapter 3
nayan tara. .an unique and surprise package whom i could never think of ...containing a bad image on her because of the serial. .
but you shoved off all the negative thoughts i had on her with this part...i have started liking her so much...actually i could imagine different dev and nt whom i would adore the most..
sad that nt having sad past. .but i liked her boldness. .it might be the result of the hardships she had faced..poor girl...

chapter 4
wow finally my favourite geet
how naive she is..!u have given all the dialogues so nicely it felt so natural...usually girls of her type...shy and reserved would talk to their ownself more than to others, so i liked the way she talked to herself ...
she too have feelings for maan..then what happened between them that kept them apart ..and giving this much dilemma. .?
really looking forward to read their feel good love story. ..
and the story behind her locket which had the honor to be the title of this fantastic story. ..

chapter 5
wow maan and his imagination of dancing with his love that too in the mid of the meeting...very hillarious...love him...so much..
but he managed that awkward situation in his usual msk style..loved it...
his untold love and feelings for geet was so poetic. ..
u have written his feelings so vividly as if u have entered his heart and read his thoughts. ..
one side maaneets soft and calm cool breeze like love track. .
Other side dev nt's bubbly heat storm like love track. ..
both are amazing. .i think only u could handle such two extremes with ease..hats off to ur writing skill ma..
ur flow of writing was so smooth that i couldn't think of stop reading..i didn't even realised when i completed all the five parts..my eagerness to read next parts increased many folds once i finished this ...
pls update soon ma..can't wait for so long...

What a brilliant piece of writing👏...totally flawless...I had never read any story penned by you before...don't know how I missed it..n then I came across your OS"THE LAST SHOT"...n that was it...you are simply amazing...

Part I...
awww so Maan n Dev are twins. Dev is a flamboyant and frivolous young man and takes life as it comes.To tell you the truth moi have fallen for Dev' GF..a high headed strong girl who doesn't believe in taking crap from anybody.She knows how to set Dev right .He respects her for what she is and is smitten by her.

Finally I am reading The Locket😃