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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 3

Dhamakedaar entry of naintara!
HR part was awesome! Waise bhi main HR pe fida hoon!
Love the whole dream sequence!
Bus wala part...kuch log badtameez hi hote hai!
NT ki kya strong personality hai!!
Pooe dev! Pehle din, pehly mulakaat aur slap!!!
Jab dadi ne dono ko milwaya tab dono ka chehra dekhne layak hoga!!!
Dil kyun yeh mera...superb!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vinsh23


just wait for a week who can comment to ask u to send pm they surely can comment aftr reading dear..

wen u feel satisfied k ab u shd gv nxt update then gv it .. but dnt say u ll not update :'(

i understnd ur state of mind bt few of us still wanna read our beloved couple .. we cherish them thru' ffs only.. n now a days writers leavng IF n quitting writing is not doing ny gud to loyal readers :(



i do feel bad for those that commented and I know some have waited a long time for me to bring this back

I am on the verge of leaving IF too but am here just for my friends.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Hi,

Very sad to see your comment
Mujhe lagta hai ki aapka writing bahut hi achha hai, gf mein jitna bhi padha hai,un sab se alag hai
Your writing is so beautiful...mujhe nahi maloom ki readers kuyn response nahi de rahe hai par i am sure thay love your story...main aapko kuch advice nahi de sakti par your story means a lot to me and I really hope you continue to update it.
May be the responses will pick up once you post more updates


Thanks Sheetal🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago


hellooo my dear avii

kaisi ho

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1




i do feel bad for those that commented and I know some have waited a long time for me to bring this back

I am on the verge of leaving IF too but am here just for my friends.

plzzz yaar dnt do this we already lost too many writers n frankly i hv read ur os last shot ist n den commnted on ur thread to read locket..

now i loved it n regretting y i hvent read it before :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
just fr frnds stay here n then u nvr know u can hv more new. frnds :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 4

Maine tumko aate dekha,
Apni jaan ko jaate dekha,
Gali mein aaj chaand nikala...i am loving this jhalli!!

Geet is daadima,s PA and she loves her so much!
Pure update mein i was smiling...superb!!

Aisa lagta hai ki geet ki life mein sirf maan hi hai, aur koi nahi!!
Dono shy shy hai...aankho se baatein karte rehte hai!!

Love devji aur geet bonding aur dev ka ussko alag alag name se bulana
Geet aur dev nt ki baatein kar rahe aur maan ye dekh kar dukhi hota hai...ab mujhe prologue samjh mein aa gaya!!...hoon na geet jaisi jalli,!

You write so beautifuly...he is her life!!
Geet maan ki deewani...avi ki jubaani!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hellooo my dear avii

kaisi ho


hi Lakshmi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Avi.!! Thanks for the PM and the link for this FF..This is one story I'd like to read again and again..All the introductory chapters were awesome..First Dev and NT the extraordinary couple falling in love , Dadima's worries and tensions for Maan and about maintaining KC's standards, all written very beautifully..Geet excited and thrilled to meet Maan and confess her feelings since she waited for 2 years for his return from London.But Maan misunderstrood the whole situation when he saw Dev lifting Geet in his arms...Loved it. Pls continue..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Avi, my jaan! 🤗 You're reposting 'The Locket'!

I know exactly how terrible I am so I will stop myself from saying I'll be able to follow along at a reasonable pace but I do have every intention of seeing this gem through to the end this time. I miss what I remember of this Naintara and Dev. They were the soul of the part I read until.

I know very well how discouraging and uninspiring the silent readers/no replies is so I will not insist you continue posting but I want you to know that regardless of what you choose, you are one of the best and most entertaining writers of this forum. You bring true happiness to your readers and as someone who is a little (okay, a lot) inclined to the more miserable aspects of life, I must say that your stories are a gift.

Miss you and all the other lovely ladies too ❤️

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