THE LOCKET REPOSTED - COMPLETED

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Part 3

So the third part is dedicated to the arrogant, hot headed Naintara...she seems to be so serious but her dreaming about Hrithik shows her lighter side...the girl is afraid of enjoying life, thanx to her bitter past...

Naintara nd Dev's first encounter was quite an epic...she slapped Dev in the first meeting nd later realized that he is her boss...

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Part 4

Loved loved this part..my favourite cutie Geet nd her innocent love for Maan...loved how u have made Geet narrating her thoughts to Maan in her head...Geet's heart is bursting with happiness as she has secretly read Maan's feelings for her nd on top of that Maan has graced her heart with his surprise return...jhalli Geet wants to be in the arms of her Maan...but the ego comes in between...how can she embrace him till the man himself confess his feelings...

loved the song, perfectly depicting Geet's emotions...

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Waiting dear...

I understand dear...
But I don't no what to tell...

Will be waiting...

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Part 5

Hayye..its all about the hottie MSK...Maan's longing for Geet can be clearly felt in this part...Maan is dancing with Geet in his dream nd that too in the middle of his meeting...but our MSK knows how to control the situation without getting embarassed...

Like the way you have described Maan's attachment to his parents...be it using his Dad's blackberry or recalling his father's words while making small decisions...

waiting for more...

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: kaamchorni
Avi, my jaan! 🤗 You're reposting 'The Locket'!

I know exactly how terrible I am so I will stop myself from saying I'll be able to follow along at a reasonable pace but I do have every intention of seeing this gem through to the end this time. I miss what I remember of this Naintara and Dev. They were the soul of the part I read until.

I know very well how discouraging and uninspiring the silent readers/no replies is so I will not insist you continue posting but I want you to know that regardless of what you choose, you are one of the best and most entertaining writers of this forum. You bring true happiness to your readers and as someone who is a little (okay, a lot) inclined to the more miserable aspects of life, I must say that your stories are a gift.

Miss you and all the other lovely ladies too ❤️

Ah here comes my cobalt high heeled stilleto girl😆 bringing with her the memories of those crazy days of the past😃

How are you dear?

Shukriya for the kind words. I have always maintained that I am not a writer but I can tell stories😆

I would rather you write than read. I am waiting for more from you.

🤗Thanks for being here.

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vspl

@vspl

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Hi
thanks for the pm
prologue
Maan returns from abroad shocked to see his love with his twin brother
very sad
ch 1
Dev is happy n excited to tell his love story to his bro
i hope it is not geet
ch 2
dadima a very strong woman pillarof support for her grandchildren
she senses maans worried state
maan seeking his mothers lap for support through playng piano
its a heart squeezing part
like to see maan playing a happy song with his geet

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ramarora

@ramarora

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

dear avi...it is lovely to read THE LOCKET again!!!!!!!!
but i would again request you to start a new ff or ss whenever you have time dear
waiting for another update of The Locket as well😃

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

wow dear thnks for d link updates are superb ...cutie geet hottie msk...

loved d way u protrayed each character...

so happy to read it.

waiting for d next superb updates////////////😳😊🥳

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GC_TheKing

@GC_TheKing

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Thanks for the PM.

Emotional prologue plus some confusion that who is Maan's lover ? Why Maan shocked and heart to see the girl carried by his twin brother .Hope will get to know in next updates.

Chapter 1-

Dev is Maan's twin brother. He did his graduation from London but he did not want to do PG so he returned and joined KC. Where he found his love who is a strong and independent girl who don't like anything other than work. Though Dev was flirt but after meeting her he changed .

She gone to her parents to talk about them.

Chapter 2

Dadi is excited and happy bcz of Geet. She had filled the emptiness of her life . Annie is elder sister of Maan and Dev . She is married to Arjun and settled in London and now pregnant of twins. Dadi looked at her family pics and recall the past. That was so emotional . Maan was so attached to his mother. 😭 But he lost her. When he was playing piano in outhouse Dadi recall the past that was so sweet memory.

Chapter 3

Awesome . The way the girl deal with those b******d in bus hats off to her. U perfectly showed the reality how people ignored when someone tried to misbehaved with girl in front of their eyes . Then the lift scene was also mind blowing. I thought it will be Geet but thank god it's naintara and Dev. But I love this Naintara.

Chapter 4

My all confusion cleared. So Geet and Maan studied in same college . Maan always protected her and cared for her this made her fall in love with Maan. She worked as PA of Dadi and live with Naintara called her Di . Dev is like her brother bcz she has no one except her Dadaji. She called Dev as Devji (Short form of Dev Veerji) When She told Dev that Naintara gone to her mama mami to talked abt them then he carried her in happiness . So Maan saw that and mu create. Hope it will be clear soon.

Chapter 5

Beautiful update . Maanet's romance in college. Then office scene was also good.