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Shruthe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Part 2 - That was so beautifully written..

It was so full of emotions.. your writing just made me feel the bonding their family shared.. how beautiful their relation was .. especially of Maan and his mom.. how much he loved her and looked upon her for things..

And for such a person, it would have been a big blow to lose your family..

And among Maan and Dev, Maan seems to be more of an introvert now that his mom is no more..

God, i really really loved this part.. i wish i had read this one when you had first posted.. but i guess when i wanted to read, it was more than 60 parts and i just left it..

It was so so awesome... <3

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Chapter 2

Dadima is really fond of Geet. But still its not clear that who is that girl Mann loves. He is heart broken. Mann plays piano well.

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Part 2
Savitri Devi shares a special bond with Geet.She misses Annie ,her granddaughter who has now got married.The void that was created in her life after Annie's wedding is filled by none other than Geet.SD is the pillar of the Khurana clan that holds everyone together.Maan has been an introvert and was really close to his mother. The death of his parents was a severe blow to him.Dadi is trying to figure out what's wrong with him and she heard him humming the sad song which his mother sang in the past...

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Shruthe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Chapter 3 - NT

That was one strong characterization.. i love strong characters.. She had a bad past.. but that doesnt make her sulk, but makes her want to prove that she can take care of herself and be on her own without seeking help from others..

And she slapped Dev Khurana on her first day who was her boss 😲😆 .. the woman has serious guts.. loved it..

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Part 3
moi loved this part..NT is a firebrand...her dream was out of the world.She seems to have gone through a lot in the past and tha's what has turned her into a tough girlShe did the right thing by hitting that looser who was trying get touchy with her.OMG..she slapped Dev...must say she is just perfect for him...😆

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Chapter 3 and 4

So Dev loves Naintara, and vice versa.😃 And I must say I am relieved. I was scared of Mann and Geet falling for wrong partners. Naintara slaps Dev on his first day.. Mann and Geet seems like friends. Mann is an introvert. The prologue part is explained . So I guess Mann loves Geet and when he saw Dev lifting her happiness , Mann felt bad. He is unaware of what the situation was..

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Shruthe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Chapter 4

Phew all confusion solved... i guess its coz iam commenting for each update...

So its Tara and Dev.. and Geet is very close to both of them.. and Maan loves Geet and he assumes it to be otherwise when he sees Dev lifting Geet...

And they are not identical twins... 😃

its so funny.. coz i asked you in the comment for first chapter.. but its very clear when i read on...

So here, Geet is also shy and silent like Maan.. if not for his diary, she wouldnt have come to know that he likes her too..

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Chapter 5

Mann is in love with Geet. And day dreaming in his office. He misses his father. And trying hard to manage the company wants to read more and more.. waiting for the next set of chapters. The songs you choose are beautiful. ..

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

part 4
So Geet is in head over heels in love with Maan...She is so excited as she is going to meet him after two years...At the same time she hopes that these two years haven't changed him...loved the way you have embedded her thoughts in this part... Dev and NT love each other ...I knew it...😆

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi
Waiting dear...

I understand dear...
But I don't no what to tell...

Will be waiting...

Thanks for understanding!

I am going to give everyone some time to catch up on the reading.

If by Friday, the situation is still the same, I will continue by sending pm only to those who have commented as I had asked.

I am so excited to share the next parts 😃

Muaah! Without comments a writer is like fish without water.

Thanks to all the wonderful readers who took the time to post wonderful comments!

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