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pureheart2012

@pureheart2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1451

Hi Avi!

Am one of those stupid silent readers who lovecur gfs.
Especially this one

Pls mujhe access Dr de

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1452

chapter 13 lovely update nt was observing geet aka bambi and noticed how naive she is and so easily she comes and believes ppls words thus nt became a fighter for her she saw how ppl took advantage of her innocent nature be it mrs sethis free babysitting which geet did whole heartidly even when she was tired tll nt intervened or whether it was hansa pervert husband she made geet see the worlds real face naintara was getting so 😡 kash maan boss hota to skirts ke levekl kam aur workload zyada hota she was so unhappy with his laid out attitude as she wasnty given any credi for her work he dragged naintara to get his oh so darling zarin and poor naintara had to give him the info abt the project in 20 mins the nerve of the woman made her ride in a van naintara so angry dadi not liking his liknking with zarin dev explained its for publicity only dadi tells him abt geet how she is like her daughter and wants dev to treat her like his sis hope maan dosent have to mr chopra very particular but naintara did her work though dev blaming why she didnt tell him dadi made them team laeders but have to give seperate work ab ye dev gaddah mazduri karega to pata chalega iss

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1453

chapter 14 lovely update let me guess maan is the one who delivers notes for geet not only that he makes notes for her and hand delivers them to hoshiyarpur geet thought she was imagining him but she wasnt darji confronted her she tells him that she is working along with her studies darji felt bad for geet as she has to work along with her studies but she made him understand he is not to be blamed as she is coping with it and wants tro take care of him maan was missing geet he hadnt seen her wanted to before the vacations start but he didnt expectyed such a treat with his love would fall in his arms so clsoe to him just made his day man is excited with geets comeback from hp he goes on his bike does stunts which shocks her he was loking forward for this trip as he gets to spend time with geet

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1454

chapter 15 lovely update this kabir seems to be a dangerous character he hates maan jealous of him thinks he got everything on silver platter he didnt have to earn anything just got everything without any effort little did he know maan worked and studied at the same time but his hatred will not let him see that maan used to write his thoughts in his dairy as he dosent like to sahre his thoughts with anyone adi seems to be asmitten by the girl who use to terrorise him maan was observing his mishty everything abt her attracted him he wanted to know her likes and dislikes though it was diff from hers he felt hurt when he saw distaste on her face when some girls bumped into him maan didnt wanted to face her but ended upp in cable car with her she was scared he consoled her and helped her maan trying hard but everytime geet cmes close to him and as usual he misjudged her again and he was regretting it he felt he didnt deserve her but her one smile made his day

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1455

part 16 lovely update ye dev kitna bada kaamchor hai he wants to copy nts works but she is too smart for him he even tried i-am-the-boss card on her but it didnt work dadi is highly disappointed on dev as naintara did her work with a perfect finesse he is honey trapping mr chopra who was again disappoi nted as he was expecting dev to give presentation but his aura and attitude was impressing mr chopra but his plan for his project made him and naintara stunned with shocked that even though he was a lzy bum and had laid back attitude but he knows buisness and how to make a project so perfect that there will be no errors in it dadui was so proud of him as he had no only reeled mr chopra by doubing his budget but has also increased kcs profit he asked naintar to be working under him abhi badle bhi to lena hai isse dev was doing everything to annoy her make her angry and making her work double he was torturing her to no ends bhukad kahin ka bechari ka tiffin kha jaata tha what could she do he is worse than maan she was getting weak by his charm and aroma by hi sensitivity towards other she wanted to ignore them but it was very hard for her but somehow she concentrated on her work but the day dev came to her house with geet helping her naintara was gone as dev was astounded to see her sexy avtar he saw her in a nightie all wet and fresh looking stunning and beautiful shocking him and making him drool on her

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1456

chapter 17 lovely update geet is excited to go the trip though its not big but for her it is she is happy pinky is coming along with her she wants to find the person who helped her geet is sahring her thoughts abt hp when she sees maan doing dramtics making her heartbeats run faster geet was enjoying herself at the waterfall saw maan all wet and started to drool on him geet saw girls bumping into him but the skirt riding up makes her disgust she ends up with maan alone in cable car she is scared of heights but maan diverts her attention towards scenery cable car suddenly jolted she fell on him tried to move but her got stuck she was blushing with her closeness to him she was admiring the scenery and realised why ppl come here and then saw maan how unknowingly he fulfilled her wish they came close to each other again where maan caged her in his arms not touching her but breathing her aromas filling his heart by being so close to her which he couldnt do before geet wanted to know who gave er notes but her teacher told her she never got her note how could she when maan had with him all the time kabir lies abt the notes but he is caught she asked maan if anyone came after she left but he said no she unknowingly gave him a wish which made him smile as she herself is his wish geets friend told he likes her but jhalli queen ye kaha samjhegi maan heard the convo and decided he has to talk to geet how weird both bro r they wish eachother happy bthday at the last minute geet gave the best bthday gift to maan herself as his wish she slept on his shoulder when her earing stuck in shawl he retrive it she woke up seeing him so close step back when maan took a step forward and said his first ever words to her

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1457

Dev is really hilarious.

He is all set to irritate his I-star, but it would be really hard for him cracking the hard nut.

Awww...Maan is so J of Suri.

And their walk back to hostel is one of my favorite MG scene in this fiction.

Awesome chapters.

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1458

Hey Avi,
Its Pearl here. Thanks a lot for the password.

Prologue
Maan seems heartbroken on seeing the girl he loves in the arms of his twin. He composed himself, reined in his emotions and then walked in nonchalantly. (* so like Maan, I tell you*).

He is hurt beyond measures. The happiness of homecoming is completely shadowed by the gloom of his loss.

The song selection is apt speaking of a love yearned with a request of acceptance. Its their song... does it mean he danced with her or something??

How can his twin and beloved be so heartless? My Poor Maan, I am sure that his love was unconfessed, otherwise who in the world can resist him!

On secon reading of the prologue, I found one thing funny: who in the world leaves his personal diary on the desk open for the eyes of the world?? Anybody can read it dude!!

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1459

Chapter 1
My first reaction on reading about Dev:
Maan ka twin ye gadha Dev hi hona tha. Dev buddy, consider yourself blessed to have the honour of being Maan's twin and dare you fail him this time around. I am gonna beat you with a stick!! Waha bechara tuta dil leke baitha hua hai and you want to share about your love life with him and probably with the girl he loves. Urghh.. Hurt Maan this time and Beware!!

I know I went too hyper.

But by the second para, I was intrigued by his tale. He is in love with this strong, independent girl (* fingers crossed, do not let it be Geet*) and is happy that he is going to be with her for an eternity.

His beloved is smart, strict, no-nonsense kinda girl. I am already impressed by her rebuffs to his flirtations. She is a hard worker and was wooed by his efficient work rather than flowers and teddies.

They have had their own share of disagreements and seem as different as chalk and cheese. And dadima has mentored her.

If the girl is not Geet, then kudos to him for selecting a girl like her. He is lucky to have been on the receiving ends of her affections. And if it is Geet, then dear Dev, you are mistaken, this is just an infatuation, your true love is waiting out there somewhere for you!!

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1460

Chapter 2
My favourite character is here: the rockstar Dadima!!

My fears are increasing, Geet gave her medicines before she left. (* Let it be a misunderstanding*)

Dadima is reflecting on the ups and downs of life.

Ahhh... Pictures are truly the moments captured in time. Looking at the elated faces, who knows what is hidden beneath. What the past holds and what the future will bring?

Her eldest grandchild Annie is married to a capable and caring manArjun. Her son and daughter-in -law passed away at a ver crucial, life defining stage in her grandsons' lives. Maan, the introvert and efficient and ever-dependable guy, stepped in to help her shoulder her responsiblities. Dev went off to London for graduation. She ensured that Maan completes his studies.

She misses Kiran as she is unable to fulfil the void inMaan's life. The bond Maan had with his mother was really sweet and touching. Maan has suffered a lot in his young life and being the introvert has always kept his emotions to himself.

I cannot help but feel that if Kiran had Maan's heart then Maan has Dadi's heart. She worries about him as she knows that Dev would cope but he would keep on festering his emotions inside the wallows of his heart.

Maan is playing an old tune on the piano in the outhouse which takes her back in the memory lane, makes her revisit the golden times of her son and DIL all happy and dancing away merrily, with the the young boy at the piano. Oh! The sight of a young Maan dancing with his mother... kinda heartwrenching with the loss tgey all suffered!

I love the way that the characters are being interwoven.

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