ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15 - Page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..Maaneet got married finally and Ayan got his daddy..Super..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs

Ufff Okay nw finallly my real wala comment

I ve doubt tumhe kyu laga mein upset ho jaungi update padne k baas confused nw back to d update
1st thing dat caught my eye scooty😛 hayeee i always love riding scooty or bicycle always wished to c maaneet riding but kabhi mauka hi nahi mila
Naina is such a darling itna sab kuch plan kar k perfect set up kiya 1 doubt woh retirement ka annoucement fake tha right phir maan crowd ko last baar kyu address karne wala hai
Dnt mind im just totallly confused n messed up knw meri basic thinking abilities gone
Love it wenever maan calls geet partner or ayan calls naina partner hayeee dat reallly sounds soo cute
Dats something really special
Yaaar d typical perfect karan johar ki movie waise wala climax i love dem btw
Dat running takrana girna n d ultimate maan epic catch mahiii divine perfect ending for a perfect maaneet story anyone can ask for
Ahaaan perfect tyming uss fan ki ab MSK ko dekh k kon i love u nahi bolega
Hayeee i love dis jealous geet aur bhi perfect ending de di jealous geet is damn bold actually good i was woww crowd cheer kar raha hai nt bashing😆 or cursing lolllzz
Maan k toh litreally hosh udd gaye such a sweet surprise aft all d emo drama jo itne tym se sehna pada mainly separation n MU k baad dis is like Rain in d desert
N btw d kiss was quite long but chalta all matters is d feel n d love n d final final final thought k dey belong to each other
Yipeee yaar so happy aft dis
N best part bestest ayan n maan meet
N sabse happiest scene ayan calling maan Daddy seriously too good
N dat was really cute wen ayan said aap mumma se problem solve kar do na..plz don't leave me and mumma.."
N d proposal bestest proposal ever seen so true frm d heart
Happy family
Dis story is really speacial which nw has cone to an end nw
Coz of dis i ve got such a special frnd like u
Love u for writing dis
N epilogue n as u said shot but cute
N i always love wen things are short n sweet
Maan ne dil jeet liya so much respect
Geet k studies complete karwayi dis is sumthing called as true love
N abv all he remained n worked frm hone for a year so dat he can look aft ayan im just speechless dnt wat too say
Haayeee kaash aise koi mujhe bhi pyaar karne wala mile lollzz kidding maan toh bas ek hi hai exclusively for geet
Final cutest end
Arrre competition toh bhool gaye hahaha perfect abhi mr & mrs ka competition
N d cherry on d top abhi phir se GC n DD n dey got married n also participating dream which can never cone true
Going to misss dis badly



OMG ruchi hehehehehe i always love ur comment..i guess u knw this..the way u read and comment on every single u like..there r many less people in Gf who do that...

and ill miss this story too..
and tumhara doubt well..woh news fake nahi ti..maan ne almost socha tha ki he would quit singing naina..ne yeh news leak kar di bas...

hahahah baby bashing mere story mai nahi..hai..if it would have been real life toh tumhe pata hai kya kya hogaya hota heheheh😆


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angeline124

Its a wonderful one
written beautifully
Maan and ayan bond is so cute
Once again on dance floor
feeling sad for this ff end
miss this story
thank u for giving us the beautiful ff


thanks to u guys who made this even more remarkable with ur comments so thank u !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 an amazing story! it so sad tht it has ended! wonderfully written! Thanks 4 da pm! Beautiful emotional update ! superbly written! Geet j n possessive seeing all his female fans! she stake her claim! Intense passionate kiss! Maan stunned n happy! the crowd is silent n Naina overwhelmed! Maan proposes n she accepts! Ayaan nw has his dad! Family is complete! terrific epilogue! Maaneet married! Maan wanted her 2 finish her studies! Geet nw has a dance institute! Father n son r inseparable! Maaneet invited to dance on reality show! Gurti also participating! looking 4wrad 2 something new frm u! 👏 ⭐️ 😊




thank u so much dear!!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11

Just loved the ending!!!

Can we have a season 2...



heheh i havent thought about it 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

lovely update sweta absolutely loved a bit sad that it ended but the last part and the epilogue was awesome geet kissed maan coz of her jealousy and maan asked geet to marry him and to ayan that can he be hi dad loved their confession and their kiss and lastly their taking part in mr and mrs dance completion although I would have loved it if u would have extended a bit but anyways I loved ur ss well u can continue on the dance floor in its season 2 I would love to read it do update soon dear cant wait for ur next new story



thank u dear..
i read ur comments on my blod..thanks thanks a lot!!

season 2 of this story i havent yet thought...i think for now ill complete all my stories and then think of something new 😆

i have ishqiya, tainted angel,unbounder love, unexpected couuple and sacred love too...in my kitty


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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updates!!!👏👏👏Awww Maan's propose is unique one⭐️⭐️⭐️...he proposed not only his wife Geet his son Aarav to be too...its just Amazing and beautiful...Geet is jealous with his fans...she is kissing him...he shocked but he is so happy to know how much she loves him...after her studies they are married...he gifted her dance academy...Loved father-son bonding...its really Awesome...they team up to teasing her and troubling her..Naina and Aarav are also crime partners...Geet is too happy for it..Naina and Yash are so nice...Geet has lovely friends and family...Loved it so much.



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harman12

lovely ending to a super cute story gonna miss ayan so much


i will miss them too!!
Thanks for loving this story!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
here goes the finl perfmce of mr n mrs maan singh khurana...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta



OMG ruchi hehehehehe i always love ur comment..i guess u knw this..the way u read and comment on every single u like..there r many less people in Gf who do that...

and ill miss this story too..
and tumhara doubt well..woh news fake nahi ti..maan ne almost socha tha ki he would quit singing naina..ne yeh news leak kar di bas...

hahahah baby bashing mere story mai nahi..hai..if it would have been real life toh tumhe pata hai kya kya hogaya hota heheheh😆


Dats really sweeet of u
Ooo ohhh k k all doubts cleared nw
Smarty nainaaa
Hahahaha mein real life ki baat kar rahi thi bhoochal aa jata

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