ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: vandy28
hey dear...
m really sad today bcz this stry come to end...my both fav stories come to end
bt i love thm both n enjyd all the part...n how i used to bug u fr updating each day...hehe
i wont commnt on stry much...bcz u r such a suprb wrtr...
n ur update bring smile on my update...
on last prt i was sad fr avi pain...today i was smilin fr such a cute updte...

lookin frwd to ur others stories n sequl of on the dance floor n first kiss...

🤗

fr u

awww i knw...m sad too vandy!!

thanks for the pic..hayyyee mera GC 😃

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: amrinderdhami
superb ff loved it,was going through gf n realised u ended this one it was a beautiful story,i loved its the flow the way things transpired ,geet gaveup on her n maan's realtionship for ayaan.maan broken n ayaan waiting for his daddy it was really amazing very well written lovely story

hey di..u read this story?????

thank u di..thank u so much !!

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bina_a

@bina_a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

that was really an amazing story. I loved maan's transformation and not to forget Ayan and maan relationship, their transition was so awesome. Loved it :)

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

awesome... Loved it ...

Perfect end ...

Thanks for pm ..

Thanks for updates...

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-Adwika-

@-Adwika-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#525

OMG this story ended 😭😭😭

I so much wanted to kill Geet for her stupid decision, ek baar Ayaan ko samjhne ki ya samjhane ki koshish toh karti but no she took decision which effected not only her but Ayaan and Maan's life too, but thank god Naina knocked some brain in her and made her understand Maan's importance in Ayaans life and Ayaan' importance Maan's life, and OMG she kissed Maan in front of his all fans and media god that was a bold action but Maan too loved that and now finally they got married with Maan being more close to Ayaan then her

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

WOW!! outstanding end...loved it dear...
For my new story Two brothers , bookmark it ...I will update on my blog every Sunday...the link of blog I will pm it ...

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Cute story glad that the mu got over smoothly and Ayan got his daddy and mommy back

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! outstanding end...loved it dear...
For my new story Two brothers , bookmark it ...I will update on my blog every Sunday...the link of blog I will pm it ...

hey yaa...sure dear!!!

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: -Adwika-
OMG this story ended 😭😭😭

I so much wanted to kill Geet for her stupid decision, ek baar Ayaan ko samjhne ki ya samjhane ki koshish toh karti but no she took decision which effected not only her but Ayaan and Maan's life too, but thank god Naina knocked some brain in her and made her understand Maan's importance in Ayaans life and Ayaan' importance Maan's life, and OMG she kissed Maan in front of his all fans and media god that was a bold action but Maan too loved that and now finally they got married with Maan being more close to Ayaan then her

cutie..where are u ??