ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

hey dear...

m really sad today bcz this stry come to end...my both fav stories come to end

bt i love thm both n enjyd all the part...n how i used to bug u fr updating each day...hehe

i wont commnt on stry much...bcz u r such a suprb wrtr...

n ur update bring smile on my update...

on last prt i was sad fr avi pain...today i was smilin fr such a cute updte...

lookin frwd to ur others stories n sequl of on the dance floor n first kiss...

🤗

fr u

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#512

fabulous part dear!...geet expressed her love in the form of jealousy and kiss... maan very beautifully proposed geet...and ayan...he is such a cutie pie...well written dear!...superb ending! happiness is everywhere!...

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#513

superb ff loved it,was going through gf n realised u ended this one it was a beautiful story,i loved its the flow the way things transpired ,geet gaveup on her n maan's realtionship for ayaan.maan broken n ayaan waiting for his daddy it was really amazing very well written lovely story

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Amazing update, geet kiss maan in front of crowd. Maan proposed geet and they r married. Wow maaneet again on dance floor but this time mr & Mrs. Gurti ki shaadi i am dancing why bashing u this is our dreams super story. Perfect story , perfect endings

Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 10 years ago

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

Hiii...awesome update...loved it...Loved da jealous geet...maand proposal was beautiful...ayaan sooo cute...perfect ending...going 2 really miss reading this ff...Thanks 4 Ur time n hard work...thanks 4 da pm

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

awsme.. that was cute story..finally maan proposed geet along wid geet n ayaan.. will miss this story

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

What a reunion...of Maneet. Geet kised him in front of his fangirls.. 😆Naina.. played cupid btwn them.. n Ayan n his mumma.. Finally Geet saw.. ayan n Maan's bonding.. it was ayan who called Maan daddy first.. then Maan's proposal.. What aperfect family.. after marriage.. Maan n ayan both are devil partners.. poor geet.. Awesome parts.. n nice happy happywali ending..

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

Wow superb @ awesome update.. Lovd it so much .. Geet s wilder kisser... Maan s on knee @ proposing geet @ ayan.. Ayan s so hapie 2 get maan has a dady.. Lovd it sweta.. Cntinue wit new 1. Hapie valentine day...

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: vandy28
here goes the finl perfmce of mr n mrs maan singh khurana...

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs

Dats really sweeet of u
Ooo ohhh k k all doubts cleared nw
Smarty nainaaa
Hahahaha mein real life ki baat kar rahi thi bhoochal aa jata

hahahaha waise

i m so glad i wrote this story..my three very close frnds...u vandy and divs i got them through this story na..

😳