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Part 206 Geet really mad at Maan in between talks he drops her off at her mother's place there they share a room together as they don't want to create a scene
Maan cannot stay without Geet
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Part 207 Maan loves Geet so much for her its what he did and he cannot stand her coldness with him ❤️ hope Geet forgives him . Maan tried to leave at night but meets Geet's father instead
Awesome parts
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lovely update maan tried his best but geet just pushed him away she really overreacted now he is going thnx 4 pm
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PART 208

G-Kya pata? Log baatein banate hain. Tumhe ye bhi samjhana hoga? Chup chap so jao

M-Han samjha do. So jaun..?Mood nai hai mera. Decide kar lena ki kis baat ke phelna ka darr hai. Main jaa raha hoon... tumhare ghar walo ko koi problem nai hogi isse

Maan kehkar kamre ke bahar nikal jata hai

He goes looking for Maa or bro par Geet ke papa mil jate hain instead

Maan keh deta hai ki koi problem ho gai hai factory mein...some fire breakout and he has to go immediately...jab Geet ka mann karega wapas aane ka wo usse lene aa jayega

Father ko bhi laga ki daal mein kala hai...dono ka behavior kaafi odd tha

Geet kuch nahi kehti room mein jaake let jaati hai

Dad give Maan a doubtful look or two

M- aap kahish ka khayal rakhiyega...koi bhi problem ho agar... to mujhe bula lijeyega

Kehkar Maan chala ata hai

Dad jaake maa ko kehte hain ki damad ji chale gaye

Ma-KYAAA???????? KAHAN CHALE GAYE??????????

Maa bhaag ke Geet ke rooom mein aati hai aur Geet ko aaram se leta hua paati hai

Dad bhi bhage bhage aaye. Dad says jo Maan ne bataya

Maa- Arre aag lag gayi!!!!! Oh my God!!!! Hawww!!!!!!

Geet sits up

G-Kya hua? So jao naa maa

Dad- Geet, Maan ne to kuch zyada bataya nahi... kya zyada serious matter hai? Agar hum kuch kar sakein?

G-nahi sab thik hai. Wo sambhal lega

Ma-Arre yeh kya attitude hai? Wo sambhal lega?!! Aise thodi hi hot hai!!! Tujhe bhi jana chahiye tha

G-Main kya karungi jaake?

Ma-Uska sath dena chahiye it's a crisis for him

G-Maa wo bachcha nahi hai

Ma-He needs moral support

G-Kuch zyada nahi hua hai maa

Maa- Jee aap bhi ek aur gaadi bulwa lijeye Geet bhi abhi nikal jayegi. Aur Geet tu chup kar, tujhe kuch pata to hota nahi hai. Abhi to wo yahan se nikla hai beech raaste mein kya ho jaye...

G-Maaa wo kar lega. Maine keh dia hai, kuch problem hui to phone karega. Badi baat nahi hai

Dad- Ye problem wali baat kya hai? usne bhi kaha ki agar tumhe koi problem ho to main phone kar doon... tum kyun nai karogi phone...?

Maa- Arre matlab kya hai wo phone karke bata dega.. teri ungliyaan tutt jayege number dial karke poochne par?

G- Ufff aise hi kaha. Aap bhi naa har baat pe bass. Wo bata dega khudse yaa main subah puch lungi, khush? Yaa aap phone kar lena

Maa- Ji aap jao gaadi bulao

Ma sends her husband away

G-Papaaa ruko

Maa sternly to Geet-

Ma-Ye kya natak laga rakha hai?

G-Kis baat ke liye gaadi chahie? Aap log samajhte kyun nahi ho? kuch nahi hua hai, chotti si baat hai. Maan ko bhi interference pasand nahi

Maa- Arre tu pagal hai? Pata nahi hai ki aaag kaise phail jati hai? Aur tu uske liye interference kab se ho gayi?

G-Fire under control. You know...how he loves work so...I don't interfere

Maa- Kuch contorl mein nai hai naa tera dimag naa wo aag

G-Aur aap baat to aise kar rahi ho, jaise hum ek dusre ko janmon se jaante ho, love marriage nahi hai hamari

Maa- Sab kuch chodkar tujhe yahan chodne aaya tu kehti hai ki he loves his work... arre pagli tujhe pyaar karta hai...tereko ab tak is baat ki bhi confusion hai kya? [Maa to hubby] Aap kyun khade ho? Taxi bhi main hi bulwaun kya?

G-Maa wait. Baat kuch aur hai. Main mayike apni marzi se aayi hoon

Ma-Geet teri ladai hui hai Maan se par wo crisis mein hai. Wo to dikh gaya mujhe ki apni marzi uspar thop kar to yahaan aayi hai.

G-Maan ne jhooth kaha hai, koi aag nahi lagi

Maa- BAS!! Bohot ho gaya tera bachpana...apni baat nahi nikal rahi to ab logon ko jhootha bolna chalu kar diya...I am so disappointed by you

G-Maaa pucho usse. Main kyun jhooth kahungi? Maa, kuch nahi hua hai.

Ma- Tu to yahi keht rehti hai...wo bechara bachha kabhi kisi ko problem bata bhi pata hai. Offfcourse he wouldn't tell you so that you won't' worry

G- Koi aag nahi lagi hai. Bass hamare beech chota sa jhagda hua hai. Kuch din ghar pe rahungi to theek ho jayega. Ma...why don't you believe me?

Ma-Coz I don't see why he would lie...

G-Maan ne papa se jhooth kaha, jisse aap log jhagde wali baat se pareshaan naa ho jao

Ma-oh... so he lied to protect you... I see haan... I guess he would lie for you...

Geet looks away

G-Aap dono so jao jaake

Ma-Par ladai kyon ho gai? Is he being too difficult towards u?

G-Kuch nahi, aise hi

Ma papa ko bhej deti hai... girl talk ka bahana mar kar

Maa-Nahi beta kuch to hua hai.. maine tunhe naraz hote hue dekh hai... usse and he has always been worried...but he never left... aisa kya hua hai?

G-I asked him to leave

Maa is stunned...

Maa- WHAT!???

Geet looks away

Ma-WHY!???

G-Shayad mujhe yahan se bhi chale jaana chahie

Ma- Kahi nahi jayegi! Chup chap baith aur bata ki usse kyun bhej diya? kya kiya hai usne? Maara hai kya tujhe? Geet beta tu mujhe bata if he is harassing you...

G-Nahi maa

Ma-Wo koi bhi ho...par aise to nahi chalega...tell me kya kiya hai usne... I'll talk to him and make him see where he is wrong

G-Maan aisa nahi hai. Usne kuch nahi kiya. Wo to mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai, deewano ki tarah

Ma- Nahi Geet beta, you love him why would you send him away otherwise?

G-Why? Didn't you see it on TV? The news channels

Ma-See what on TV?

G-Nahi to TV on karke dekh lo

She says with disturbed face

Maa-Arre maine kaha ha naa.. 5-6 din se cable hi nahi aa raha hai.. aur wo gadha cable wala bhi bahane maar raha hai par theek ai kar raha

G-To kisi aur ke ghar pe jaake dekhlo yaa kal to newspaper mein aa hi jayega

She says with her eyes getting wet

Ma-Aise kya hai TV...tu hi bata...poore mauhalle ka cable band kar rakha hai gadhe ne aur newspaper mein kya padhna... chal bata kya baat hai

Geet starts weeping

Maa is surprised ke ye kya hua

G-Wo...ma..wo

Ma hugs Geet and pats her head.

G-Wo..Ranjeet hai naaa...usne..usne...uss raat...

Geet can't stop her tears

Ma- hmm uss raat?

G-Uss raat...uss sab ki...recording...

Ma frowns

G-Aur ab..usne ..sab..TV...pe

Geet starts wailing like a child and hides her face

Ma grows cold.. maa ke bhi hosh udd aye ki ye kya hua

Maa is also in oh god oh god mode... maa ka bhi man kar raha hai ki Geet ki tarah ro le...

Ma- Par.. kaise? Kyun? Aise karne se kya milega usse?

G-Aap hi batao maa...kis mooh se main Maan ke paas

She says between her sobs

Maa thodi der chup rehti hai

G-Usne itni mehnat se business develop kiya...meri wajah se uski itni badnaami...main kabhi..khud ko maaf nahi kar paungi

Maa- Maan told me to call him if you got in any trouble... mujhe nahi laga ki tumhe chodna chahta hai.. aur waise bhi usse to sab sach bata diya tha na tune..

G-Wo nahi chodna chahta mujhe par..

Maa is ecstatic

ma-Kya saach!! Hey bhagwann...

Maa utters a small prayer of gratefulness

G-Main jaanti hoon...what he has to face aur sab musibatein wo akele face karega...mujhe bina bataye...meri wajah se sab kuch ho raha hai...pehle aap logon ko dukh diya..ab Maan ko

Maa- Nahi nahi.. tujhe wapas wahin jana chahiye...Beta dekh... Maan.. wo...he is good man and he has influence...lots of it... he can handle all this.. lekin yahan...beta mujhe nai lagta ki sab log tujhe... tu janti hai na pehle kya hua tha.. mujhe dar hai ki phir wahi sab na ho.

G-Mujhe yahan bhi nahi rehna...wo to main...Maan..aane ki zidd kara raha tha to...main kahin, akele zindagi gumnaami mein guzaar lungi...jisse mere saaye se kisi aur ki zindagi naa kharab ho

Maa- Nahi beta tu... Maan ke paas ja.. ya tu yahin reh.. main tujhe aur kahin nahi jane dungi...mai tujhe aise hi kahin nai jane doongi... ek bar sab hone diya

PART 209

Maa- Beta dekh... Maan.. wo...he is good man and he has influence lots of it... he can handle all this.. lekin yahan...beta mujhe nai lagta ki sab log tujhe... tu janto hai na pehle kya hua tha.. mujhe dar hai ki phir wahi sab na ho.

G-Mujhe yahan bhi nahi rehna...wo to main...Maan..aane ki zidd kara raha tha to...main kahin, akele zindagi gumnaami mein guzaar lungi...jisse mere saaye se kisi aur ki zindagi naa kharab ho

Maa- Nahi beta tu... Maan ke paas ja.. ya tu yahin reh.. main tujhe aur kahin nahi jane dungi...mai tujhe aise hi kahin nai jane doongi... ek bar sab hone diya

G-Ma...mujhpe ek upkaar karo...mujhe..zeher de do

Maa- Pagal chup kar!!

G-Aap nahi samjhogi. Ye hi sahi hai...Maan bhi nahi samjhega...Maan se kehna phir shaadi kar le

Maa- Samjh to tu nahi rahi hai pagli

G-Aap achi si ladki dhund dena uske liye

Maa- Geet beta baat sun meri; jo hona tha wo ho gaya,... tune jo kiya wo kiya... us baat ko khured kar uchal kar.. koi sach jhoot ya jhoot sach nahi ban jayega.. logon ka kya hai.. kal sab bhool jayenge jab news par kuch aur dekhenge...isse teri zindagi nahi khatam ho gai

G-Par Maan ki reputation? Uski itne saal ki mehnat? Uske sapne maa

Ma-Maan sambhal lega..

G-Kaise sambhal lega? Jaadugar hai kya? Wo bhi to insaan hai. Maa, main sab kharab kar deti hu

Ma- Wo itna kamzor nahi hai ki koi kuch bhi keh de aur uski saari mehnat bekar ho jaye

G-Main uski zindagi nahi kharab karna chahti. Business mein reputation bohot important hoti hai maa

Maa- Tu kya jane? Ho sakta hai tere jaane se aise hi kharab ho jaye...beta maine dekha hai uski aankhon me tere liye pyar...wo sirf pyaar nahi hai.. pata nahi kyun par kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki Maan... lagta hai ki Maan... wo aisa nai hai jaise wo dikhta hai.. maano ye successful business man sirf ek image hai... image jo logon ko impress karne ke liye hai...image hai jisse log usse accept kar le.. par asal mein...pata nahi.. usse dekh kar lagta nhai ki usse koi bhi kabhi kisi bhi cheez mei hara sakta hai...yaad hai uss din jab tum dono yahan aaye aur subah Maan naraz ho gaya the tere cousin se?

Geet nods

Ma-Uss waqt... pata hai beta... wo bohot pyaar kara hai tujhse..,mujh nahi lagta ki tere bina wo.. khush to kya.. mujhe nahi lagta ki tere bina wo...

g-Mere bina wo?

Ma-His mask of this polite businessman would disappear if you leave him... Sometimes I feel that way and I don't even know what he is under that... but it's not a kind man...

G-Matlab? aapko kya lagta hai kya kar lega wo? Par...hum ek dusre ko kuch mahino se hi jaante hain...pehle bhi to wo jeeta tha naa

Maa- Mujhe nahi pata beta...main to usse pehle nahi mili...par sometimes I think he loves you too much for your or his own good. He would spoil you... give you everything anything you want... he doesn't have limits when it comes to you... uss din jab to aise hi naraz ho gai thi uss se... jaan nikal gai thi bechare ki... when it comes to you.. he isn't casual or easy going about anything...maine usse samjha rai thi ki tera bas aise hi mood off hai... par wo manne ko taiyar hi nahi tha... bohot pareshaan tha tere liye...main samjh rahi hoon ki tu sirf uski bhalai ke bare mein hi soch rahi hai... par beta tu sirf paison aur naam ke baare mein soch rai hai...zindagi mein paisa aur shauhrat sab kuch nahi hota. It's not the money which makes the world go round

G-Mujhe pata hai...par it's also important. Maan se kuch bhi chinna nahi chahti main. Usne mujhe dusri zindagi di hai

Ma-Maybe he wants to be a part of this 2nd life of yours...dekh beta to samjh aur soch...duniya mein kya zyada important hai...paisa ya pyaar? Agar tujhe dono mein se kisi ek ko chunna pade to tu kisse chunegi khud ke liye?

G-Pyaar

Ma-Phir kyun saza de rahi hai bechare ko usse zabardasti paise dekar jab usse bhi sirf pyaar chahiye?

Maa smile at her consiprately...

G-Maa main jaanti hoon wo mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai par sach kahun kabhi kabhi darr lagta hai issi pyaar se

Ma- c'mon he can't be that unmanageable?

G-Maaa !!!!Maa, maa..wo

Ma-He likes to spoil you silly... jo tu kahegi karta hai,.. to phir dar kiss baat ka?

G-Sometimes I feel his love has turned into obsession

Ma is quite for a time being

Maa- Maybe... it has... but then I know duniya mein aise bhi log hain jo iss traah ke pyar ke liye zindagi bhar taras jate hain aur badle mei kuch nahi milta... aur shayad.. abhi naya naya pyar hai so he is over on everything...

G-Maa meri baat samjho wo violent ho jaata hai mere liye. Kisi ko bhi maarna shuru kar deta. Wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Mujhe darr lagta hai uske liye maa

Maa widens her eyes

Ma-Kya? Usne mara kisi ko? Kisko mara usne?

G-Maa, Mauritius mein Ranjeet mila tha. Usko bhare restaurant mein punch kar dia; khoon nikaal dia

Ma-Kya sach!!

Maa claps out of happiness

G-Maa !

Ma-I wish I was there... main bhi lage hath haath saf kar leti

G-Uska jigri dost hai Sam. Usko bhi ek din andha dhuu marne lag gaya

Ma-Bina kisi wajah ke? Kya usne tere saath badtmizi ki thi?

G-Nahi Sam ne mere saath kuch nahi kiya

G-Aur jab Ranjeet ne ye sab kiya, video wala; to Maan ne bhi ek aisa actually usse bhi ghatiya Ranjeet ka video banwa dia

Maa-Kya sach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

G-Maa !

Ma-Mujhe abhi news dekhni hai!!!

G-Maa chup raho; main tension mein hoon aur aap. Kaise Maan kanoon ko haath mein le leta hai. Sunta hi nahi...mujhe darr lagta hai

Ma-Par tune to kaha ke tere liya maar peet karta hai... to iss Sam ko kyon mara? Tujhe bataya usne?

G-Haan bataya

Ma-Kya baat hui thi?

G-Hum pub mein gaye the...Sam ka pub tha

Ma-Haan to?

G-Ek dancer aake chipakne lag gai to Maan ko gussa aa gaya...Sam aur Maan ke beech kaha sunni ho gai bass

Maa frowns as that's a bit too reactive

Ma-Kya kabhi kisi bar dancer ne Maan ko pareshaan kiya tha kya? Aaur ye Sam ne kya maaf kiya Maan ko?

G-Kiya

Ma-Agar Maan ne bewajah haath uthaya hota to mujhe nahi lagta ki uska dost usse itni jaldi maaf karta...

Kya pakka Maan ne tujhe puri baat batai... shayad jo pole dancer use chipak rahi ho usse koi poorani problem ho Maan ko

G-Mujhe sab pata hai. Main bas pareshaan hoon uski iss bewajah violence se

She sighs

Ma-Aur rahi baat kanoon hath me lene ki...beta... agar Ranjeet mujhe mil jae to main bhi aisa hi kuch karti.. bohot dukh dard diye hai usne tujhe.. usse bhi in sab cheezo ka ehsaas hona chahiye. Beta are you sure his violence is bewajah?

G-Mar...kutta katega to hum bhi kutte ko katenge kya?

Ma-Nahi hum kutte ko maar dete hain jisse wo kisi aur ko na kaate. Maan to sirf kutte ko peet kar usse sabak sikhane ki koshish kar raha hai

G-Maa aap uski side le rahi ho

Ma gets up

Ma-Khair raat bohot ho gai hai...tujhe Maan se darr lagta hai to theek hai tu yahin ruk ja

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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
geet's maa supporting maan n trying make geet understand

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Posted: 10 years ago
Bravo! Hats off to Geet's Ma...sensible lady who has caught on very fast about Maan's character...wish Geet would too. She needs to grow up and learn to handle Maan. Hope in the next update Maaneet will reunite and there will be peace in their life...I feel especially for Maan since he had such a difficult childhood.

Good going...a very different approach to Maaneet fiction.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesme parts
maan leaves
maa comes to talk to geet...trying to make her understand n taking maans side..
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Geet's mother is a perfect cupid ...love her

ufff...stupid Geet ...kab samjhegi

nice update
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Superb Update..👏
Geet's mom is intelligent 😃
Geet's being stupid.. bina wajah ke Maan ko chorrna chahti hai
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Aaww so less of maan, i missed him.
but so much about maan

its terrific . Geet's mom has actually observed about maan in correct way. Just so accurate.
she is very well understanding what geet means to him,which he himself wont be able to express.

superb was maa getting happy knowing what he did with ranjeet.

geet should understand sometime tit for tat is only option.

best line was
Ma-Nahi hum kutte ko maar dete hain jisse wo kisi aur
ko na kaate. Maan to sirf kutte ko peet kar usse sabak
sikhane ki koshish kar raha hai

loved it.

njoyed this part.
thank u

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