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Amazing part two Maan feels angry seeing those drunk men stare at Geet
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part 204 - geet wanted maan to leave her so she wanted to go to her mothers place...this ranjeet is really disgusting man...what video maan want to show ranjeet & geet
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part 205 - video dekhte hi geet slaps maan...she did not imagined that maan would do something like this...hope maan shows his pov...curious to know how maan going to make her understand...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful updates dear 👏 👏
I just loved it ... Simply awesome .
I really want Geet to undersamd Maan... And the kissing part was like maaa dala 😉
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Maan should hire a goon & kill rajneet feel sad for Geet in part 204
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Part 205 lovely part but can't see maaneet in pain
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PART 206

G-Ranjeet sach keh raha hai naa Maan...isliye tum usse

M-You wanted to go there... I just thought about meeting your mom...if you don't wanna go then fine...you don't have to shout out

Geet opens the door with a jerk, her eyes swollen and face red

Maan gir jata hai as he was sitting leaning heavily against the door

Slowly he stands up

Geet is looking dangerously at him jaise abhi pakadke maaregi

Maan is looking at her jaise abhi pakad kar pata nai kya kar dega...slowly he raises his hand and brushes her cheek, cupping he cheek, running his finger through her hair

She jerks away his hand

M-Hate me that much?

G-YES! You are an animal. Janwar ho tum. Tum...tumne wohi kiya ho uss Ranjeet ne

M-No

G-KYA FARAK HAI TUM MEIN AUR USS MEIN?

M-I didn't do it torment him for fun or money...I didn't show his face. No one knows it's him. It doesn't hurt anyone. No one is recognizable in it

G-TUMNE KIYA NAA. KIYA NAA. KYUN? BADLE KE LIYE? AAJ YE KIYA, KAL KATL KAROGE

M-No...not for revenge exactly... it took heat off your video... but katl...What one more? If it saves someone worth saving then sure I will. I am going to hell anyway...1 khoon ho ki 2 kuch farak nahi padta

G-Just stop it

M-Kam se kam mei paison ya drugs ya apni ego ke liye to nahi kaunga

G-Just stop it. Itna sa bhi nahi samjhe tum mujhe, pyaar kya karoge. Mujhe tumhare saath aur nahi rehna

M-Mai tumhe kahin nahi jaane doonga mujhe chodkar. Main janta hoon ki tum nahi chahti ki main kuch bhi galat karoon, koi bura kaam karun yaa mere sath aisa kuch bhi ho jisse meri image kharab ho...

G-Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

M-To mat karo

Suddenly Maan pulls her in his arms and gives her a big loud smooch and then releases her just as quickly

G-Maan stop it! Stop please. You have changed so much. Kaise the tum, kaise ho gaye ho.

M-Nahi Geet you are just seeing something kept buried deep, something even I hated about me . But it's out now and I don't want to hide anything anymore from you. You are just seeing the side of me which helped me get off the streets and come here...not polite manners and determined work...ruthlessness is an important factor...sorry you had to see it like this...

G-I am afraid of you now. I can't stay with you. I thought you are a man but you have become an animal

M-Animal...? Monster is what is apt to call me... animals can be tamed. You are afraid of me, you say...I wish you weren't...you say you can't stay and I say that I can't let you leave yet. I won't force you into anything repulsive or hurt you badly is all, I can offer

G-Move away. Let me go

Maan moves and lets' go of her

She takes her bag and leaves

M-Geet don't leave

He says putting one hand on her bag

She looks away...controlling her tears and stops for a while but then resumes walking

M-What would you want me to do to make you stay? I love you Geet and I'll beg if you want me to, so stay

She resumes walking. Geet kuch nai kehti

Maan again puts hand on her suitcase telling her to not go... shaking his head and communicating with his eyes

G-Let me go Maan...please

She manages to utter through her croaked voice

M- I can't. Kill me first. You spoilt me for everything else

G-Spoilt you?

He nods

She narrows her eyes

He looks at her pleading...

G-I spoilt you?

M-No you didn't. I am spoilt for other things... anything without you... I can't have it, I don't want it, and I don't like it. You just wanted my love...my rotten personality came with it...like a poor ugly relative you can't get rid of no matter how much you hide it or ignore it

Geet is unable to control her tears. She wipes them

G-Mujhe jaana hai bass

M-Fine then this is the only solution, either you stay if I am good enough to stay with...or you leave if I am not and if you leave please kill me first...I have had what I wanted from life

G-Stop it Maan!

M- I am not doing anything

G-Bekaar ki baatein mat karo. Main bass ghar jaa rahi hoon

M-Tum samajh nahi rai ho Geet...I may have been fine with you leaving earlier jab mujhe lagta tha ki I am a better person and I can let you go for your own happiness...but now that illusion is gone... I know the selfish arrogant bas***d I am and I won't stop at anything to get what I want...and all I want is you... tumhe jana hai main tumhe chod ke aunga coz I have to be sure there is where you are and that you haven't run away from me...

G-Main chali jaungi. Bachchi nahi hoon main

Maan shakes his head...jakar he picks up his car keys wallet and walks up to Geet

M-Chalo

G-Tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha?

He picks up her suitcase so that his hands don't go out and grab her

M-Maine suna aur tumne bhi suna. Hum dono ek doosre ki baat nahi maan rahe so I guess person with more strength gets his way

Jakar he keeps her luggage in the car; opens the door for her to sit and simply pushes her inside the car and gets in himself and starts driving to the airport

G-Maan stop irritating me...stop clinging

M-At this point I don't have much of self-respect... trying to put me down wouldn't help

Maan says...he is driving quietly

G-Maan please turn the car

M-Geet if I don't send you to your mom's and you try to get away I'll tie your hands and legs and keep you with me. So you should go to your mom's

G-Turn the car. It's not funny. Tum mujhe gussa dila rahe ho

M-Mai mazak nahi kar raha hoon... agar tab se tum ye samjh rai ho ki main baatein bana raha hoon... tumahre moood ke liye...to tum bohot boho bohot galat soch rahi ho

G-Maan irritate karna band kar. Mujhe gussa aa raha hai

Maan keeps mum driving faster

They reach the airport

Wahan he gets out takes out Geet's luggage and opens her door indicating for her to get out too

G-Mujhe nahi jana

M-Tum apna mann to bana nahi paa rahi ho so I have decided... You are telling me to stop irritating you... guess what? I'll drop you at your mom's before I do a lot more things you would never have imagined I could do

Maan pulls her out roughly and starts again with e pull/ drag routine.

G-You don't understand. STOPPP!!!

Maan doesn't stop but slows down

M-What?

G- Stop right there

M-You can't have everything your way sweetheart...you said you wanted to be away. Now you are gonna get it

He continues to pull her along...

Log bhi kuch dekh rahe hain...ki ho kya ho raha hai

G-CHODOOO. THIK HAI MAT SUNO, MERI BAAT. AB MAIN KABHI WAPAS NAHI AUNGI

Maan jerks Geet close to him so they are nose to nose... eyes flashing

M-Tumne ab aaj ek bhi baat aisi nai kahi jo main sunna chahun aur main bohot der se sun raha hoon. Tum sochlo ki tum wapas nahi aogi.. .agar main tumhe bhej sakta hoon to laa bhi sakta hoon... jo kehna hai aise hi keh lo...

He starts dragging her again jahan boarding pass ki checking ho rahi hai...

G-Kya meri koi marzi nahi? Tumhari biwi hoon, ghulaam nahi

M-Tum ek baat kitni baar pooch lo my answer will be same aur agar tumhe samjh nahi aa raha to gulami hi samjh lo

G-Thik hai kar lo zabardasti kyungi aage se aisa kiya to tum mera mara mooh dekhoge, khush?

Maan leta hai dono ki passes jo uske secretary ne book karaye the and holds her hand very tightly

M-Marne nahi dunga main tumhe itni asaani se

They reach home -

Wahan pohochte hai Maan rings the bell

A saali opens the door

M- Hi

He says stonely and barges inside...1 hath mein Geet ka hath doosre mein Geet ka suitcase...dono ko saath lekar andar ghus jata hai

M- Go and call Geet's mom

Maan tell the saali

Maa comes

Ma-Aao beta, kaise ho? tu bhi aai hai Geet. Ye dekh naa hafte se cable nahi aa raha tab se phone kar rahi hoon. Abhi bhi kiya. Khair bata kaisi hai?

He lets go of Geet's hand finally and puts down the suitcase

M-TV ka kya karoge.. .Geet aa gai na aap sabke entertainment ke liye...

Maan gives phony smile and sits down on sofa

Geet is blank faced

M- Aap kaisi ho aunty? Ghar mein sab log kaise hain?

Geet runs to her room

Maan follows Maan only with his eyes...nahi jaata uske peeche

M- Aunty aap please Geet ke paas jaiye... she is hurt...God knows she is unstable and so a I.. aap please jaiye... pata nahi wo kab kya karde

Maan tellls Geet's mom

ma-Hua kya hai?

M-Some ugly pics of her and Ranjeet got on TV. She got upset and decided that leaving everyone would be the right thing... after that I said and did something and now she is basically upset with only me. So would you go and look after her please?

Ma goes but room is locked

Ma bhaag ke Maan ko batane aayi ki Geet ka room locked hai

He gets up and goes to Geet's room and knocks and shouts-

M-Geet tumhe aur darwaze tudwane hain to bata do. I'll wait for 3 seconds for this door to open. 1...

Geet opens it

Maan turns to Maa

M-There, it's open now

He starts to go back downstairs

G-Kya hai maa?

Geet walks to drawing room after him

G-Jao naa tum

M-Wapsi ki flight kal ki hai. C'mon I can't be that revolting we aren't even in one room... ek chatt ke neeche rehna bhi nahi pasand kya tumhe?

She doesn't reply

M-Well? Bata do aisa hai to.

Wo chal gai mudke

M-That's irritating too?

Maan shouts after her... jaise unhi ka ghar ho and sits down

G-Han aisa haiii

She shouts back

M-Well at least learn what's irritating and what's not then

G-Shut up

Maan laughs aloud

M-Make me

G-Ghar jao

M-You'll miss me

G-First go

M- You want to miss me? Afraid of the real thing right here?

Ghar wale bhi neeche aagaye but sideline se show enjoy kar rahe hain

Geet chali gai dusre room mein

Maan around ki kisse baat kare usse Geet ka bhai dikhta hai

M-I need to stay here for tonight... ...is there a guest room?

Bro-Geet's room?

M-I am not invited... she can't stand to be in same room as me...

Geet comes in ki need to talk

M-So talk...I am listening

She comes closer and whispers

G-We are a couple in front of them and we will remain that

M-oh... I thought we were dropping all pretences...

He whispers

Phir he goes up and says loudly-

M-Excuse us

Moves and curls his hand around Geet's waist as they go to her room

Sab ka bada mannn kar raha hai sunne ka ki ab kya hoga

As they reach room her room Geet walks away

G-So jao

M-Tum kahan jaa rahi ho?

G-Kahin nahi

She walks to shut the door

Maan let jata hai phail kar ke bed par last time ki tarah

Geet bhi bagal mein letke aur mudke ankhein band kar leti hai

But Maan can't sleep...he can't even relax... he never could...whenever he thought that Geet was leaving he had to hold on to her...some part of her before he could even relax...slowly so as to not disturb her he turn on his side to face her back and curls up his hand in her hair and brings his face as close as he dares to bring to her neck

She wasn't sleeping

She moves away

M-You'll fall down

G-Don't touch

M-Can't help it

G-You weren't like this some months back

M-in Mauritius?

G-Before that

M-Before that I hardly knew you and cared about you. I hated the female species in those days

G-Good night Maan

Geet ankh band kar leti hai...khud samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ki kya uska Maan se nraaz hona jayaz hai...lekin sochti hai Maan ki ye badle ki bhavna thik nahi hai...wo jaanti hai Maan ne jo kiya issi ke liye kyunki wo usse behadd pyaar karta hai aur wo bhi par use darr hai Maan ke violent aur criminal behaviour se...pehle Ranjeet ko maarna, then Sam ko phir uska video; aisa Maan ka behaviour encouraged raha to wo naa jaane kya kar jaye and she can guess that he is becoming like an obsessed lover. She knows saari galti Ranjeet ki hai . Ranjeet did everything purely out of spite...par wo Maan ko apna maanti hai, uski galtiyaan sudharna chahti hai...Ranjeet se usko kya matlab. She is scared because she is thinking about future. She doesn't wanna encourage this behavior of his

PART 207

Geet ankh band kar leti hai...khud samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ki kya uska Maan se nraaz hona jayaz hai...lekin sochti hai Maan ki ye badle ki bhavna thik nahi hai...wo jaanti hai Maan ne jo kiya issi ke liye kyunki wo usse behadd pyaar karta hai aur wo bhi par use darr hai Maan ke violent aur criminal behaviour se...pehle ranjeet ko maarna, then Sam ko phir uska video; aisa Maan ka behavior encouraged raha to wo naa jaane kya kar jaye and she can guess that he is becoming like an obsessed lover. She knows saari galti Ranjeet ki hai . Ranjeet did everything purely out of spite...par wo Maan ko apna maanti hai, uski galtiyaan sudharna chahti hai...Ranjeet se usko kya matlab. She is scared because she is thinking about future. She doesn't wanna encourage this behaviour of his

Maan curls his hand in her hair snuggling as close as he can

G-Aaah...khinch raha hai

Maan chod deta hai baal

M- Sorry

He slips his hand around her waist and moves closer so that now he was spooning her; his face buried in her neck

G-Tch! Kya chahie?

She turns towards him

He pulls her close so that she is half lying on top of him

M-Nothing

He says kissing her neck

G-Chodo na mujhe

M-Kyun?

G-Bass

Maan doesn't move an inch or give her an inch to move

G-Garmi ho rahi hai, chodo

She pushes him a bit

Maan ek hath se AC ka remote uthakar 16 kar deta hai temperatures... now the cool air is directly blowing over them...aur ab kamra cool se cold ho raha hai...

M-Feeling hot is natural body reaction you know...

He says gliding a hand up and down her spine

G-What?

M-Garmi lagna is natural Geet

G-Why?

M-Why... coz that's how the body works... it gets warm, something to do with hormones I guess...and you sweat and perspire and we make mess

G-Make mess?

M-Umhmm

Maan says kissing her neck and her ears

G-Maan, stop doing it please

M-Why?

G-Because I am not liking it

M-Not at all?

G-No. Go to sleep

M-I am not sleepy anymore

He says leaving her neck and ears alone and moving to her lips

Geet moves away her face and turns to other side

M-What is my fault Geet? Why are you angry with me? I tried to do everything right. I tried to keep you away from all this... I really did but I couldn't

G-Did I say that?

M-Then what have I done to piss you off?

G-I am just tired. I just wanna sleep

M-Fine then, sleep. We will talk to tomorrow

G-Tomorrow morning is your flight

M-Geet... sleep...

G-I said something

M- I heard you. But since you are tired I won't argue and tell you how I am no boarding the flight until we have our talk

G-There is nothing to talk. I just wanna stay in my mom's place for few days. I will come back when i feel like

M-I don't have problem with that

G-Good

M-I won't go before you tell me why you are angry with me

G-Then I guess you are not boarding the flight because I am not angry. I just want some time for myself. Time to think

G-I'll go when I'll believe that you are not angry with me or you give me reasons about everything else... take as much time and space you want

G-Reasons? For what?

M-Reasons why you are being so cold to me

G-I am not cold. I can't be cheerful all the time

M-Geet... you can give me any number of lame excuses as you want. I'll go when I get the answer...and I can prove that you are being cold

G-Prove

M-Kiss me

G-What??????????????

M-Kiss me

G-Why? You are supposed to prove

M-I have proven that right now you hate me and detest me enough that you can't even bring yourself to touch me...far less kiss me

G-Maan...stop it. It's not like that. There's something called mood

M-I am not asking for sex... you know what? Forget it... it is impossible to make you see reason when you just want to blame someone for something and keep the person... God knows what sadistic pleasure you derive from it

G- Forget what? Complete your sentence

Maan khada ho jata hai bed se. He goes over and starts changing his clothes. Raat ke kapde utar kar shirt our jeans pahan raha hai

G-Where are you going and I don't blame you Maan. Where are you going?

M-Why? What does it matter? You want me gone, don't you and as to what I say and do... how does even that matter as long as you don't like it... it is not up for discussion... it has to be wrong if you don't like it but since I can't regret anything and you won't open your darn mouth I will prefer to keep my sanity!

Maan kehkar apna bag uthata hai aur usmein kapde dalta hai jo utare hain

G-Will you just answer, where are you going at dead of the night

M-Tumhe kya?

Maan moves and opens the door

G-Faltu mein jhagda karna zaruri hai? Aur main nahi chahti jo problems hain, gharwalo ko pata chalein. Jahan jaana hai, kal chale jaana

M- My God Geet... are you even listening to what you say are or you are a robot... giving me filled in social sensible responses? Aur faltu mei jhagda?... abhi tak kaun tha jo tumhare peeche lag kar zabardasti yahan tak aaya just to resolve whatever is going on? Aur ghar walo ko nahi batana? Tum itna strange behave karogi and they won't suspect? Pagal hain wo? Aur jab tum mujhe behjna hi chahti ho to you don't have to suffer on account of your family

G-Main unhe sambhal lungi...kam se kam aise jao to mat..ghar ki baat ghar pe rehne do. Tum aise jaoge to baat bahar tak phail jayegi

M-Mein phone par sabko samjha dunga ki kuch important kaam agaya tha aur kaunsi baat Geet? Kya baat bahar phail jayegi?

G-Kya pata? Log baatein banate hain. Tumhe ye bhi samjhana hoga? Chup chap so jao

M-Han samjha do. So jaun..?Mood nai hai mera. Decide kar lena ki kis baat ke phelna ka darr hai. Main jaa raha hoon... tumhare ghar walo ko koi problem nai hogi isse

Maan kehkar kamre ke bahar nikal jata hai

He goes looking for Maa or bro par Geet ke papa mil jate hain instead

Maan keh deta hai ki koi problem ho gai hai factory mein...some fire breakout and he has to go immediately...jab Geet ka mann karega wapas aane ka wo usse lene aa jayega

Father ko bhi laga ki daal mein kala hai...dono ka behavior kaafi odd tha

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
maan saying he can't live without geet
so maaneet came to maa's home
par maaneet going on fighting :(
Loved the updates :)
thank u for updaing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm updts..maneet r so much in love...bt keep fighting..thy comes to...hhr mos house...thanx fr pm dear updt soon
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Awesome update
Geet is behaving very strange.
Maan is trying hard to manofy geet.
Geet parents came to know something is not gud between maaneet.

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