THE JADED PRINCE [MG] 'Epilogue' Page 66 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 209 Geet also tells her ma about Maan punishing Rajneet with that video
and when he beat up RAjneet which makes her mother happy
Geet's mother comforts Geet to understand Maan that he loves her that is why cannot see her in pain and punishing the people who harmed her or her
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your story is amazing.TThanks for posting in the forum
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 210

G-Mujhe sab pata hai. Main bas pareshaan hoon uski iss bewajah violence se

She sighs

Ma-Aur rahi baat kanoon hath me lene ki...beta... agar Ranjeet mujhe mil jae to main bhi aisa hi kuch karti.. bohot dukh dard diye hai usne tujhe.. usse bhi in sab cheejo ka ehsaas hona chahiye

Maa- Beta are you sure his violence is bewajah?

G-Maa..kutta katega to hum bhi kutte ko katenge kya?

Ma-Nahi hum kutte ko maar dete hain jisse wo kisi aur ko na kaate. Maan to sirf kutte ko peet kar usse sabak sikhane ki koshish kar raha hai

G-Maa aap uski side le rahi ho

Ma gets up

Ma-Khair raat bohot ho gai hai...tujhe Maan se darr lagta hai to theek hai tu yahin ruk jaa; hum iss baare mei aur baat nahi karenge aur rahi baat side lene ki to main kisi ki side nahi le rai hoon main apni side le rai hoon... main kya karti ye bata rahi hoon par ab chod in baattonn ko aur so ja, tension ma le.. sab theek ho jayega

Geet nods

Maa pats Geet's head again and leaves

Geet let jaati hai bed par thinking about what Maa had said. Ek baar sochti hai Maan ko phone kare phir sochti hai nahi. She just decides ki abhi ke lie she wants a break, she would give it a thought ghar pe rehkar. Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha naa ki kya kare, kya sahi hai...wo kuch din ruk ke uss news ka repercussion dekhna chahti hai, sochti hai underground rehna hi sahi hai...wo saamne ayegi to Maan ki aur badnaami hogi

Thode din baad news aane lagti hai...news channel flashing ki Geet badchallan hai...she is characterless, bechare Maan Khurana ke dil pe kya beet rahi hogi, saara panel bitha dia experts ka on their relationship

Media calls Maan several times to take his reaction

Maan doesn't take those calls

Geet is feeling all miserable as she is termed as characterless

While media hogs Maan and his office ki Mr Garewal aap kya mehsoos kar rahe hain? Kya aapki biwi badchallan hai? Aapke dil pe kya beet rahi hai?

Maan maintains the no comment... no defeat looking face.. press ko manai hai office aur ghar ke building ke andar aane se. Koi kabhi paas aa bhi jaye to Maan aakhein dikha kar chod deta hai ya no comment keh deta hai

He hasn't called Geet either

Par press mein wo polo wali ladies ko footage mil gayi they tell how is Geet...about relation...har koi blah blah kar raha hai

Maan acts like he doesn't care...nor he does in actuality

Geet ki bhi himmat nahi hui itna kuch dekhne ke baad phone karne ki... wo bass apne kamre mein dubki rehti hai ghar mein

Maan ke kuch business associates ne panga kiya...deal mei back out kar gaye and acting snobbish and stuff...Maan ne bhi ek ek se personally mil kar very calmly samjha diya ki they shouldn't be messing with Maan just coz of some news.. jo bhi hai wo uske aur Geet ke beech mein hai.. agar wo log personal cheezo ko business mei lana chahte hai to Maan has got enough dirt on all of them to end their careers..

Aisa nai ki Maan ki business par kuch negative effect nahi pada... some creditors left and some backed out on some deals but overall...logon ka interest jo badha so they started hanging around closer to Maan.. his customer base increased rapidly... brand got promoted...and all that.. so all this balanced out the losses.

Aur iss sab mein Maan ka ghar khali hai aur saath mein Maan ka dil bhi khali hai.. he works like hound so he doesn't think about this emptiness... tries to stay as long as possible in office... only stops to work when his eyes cant remain open any long...he is deliberately avoiding thinking about her and the fact that it was more or less over b/w them kyonki Geet ne usko bhaga diya. According to him now she had officially left him. He thinks she has...he hopes she hasn't...he isn't sure.. but he think she surely has.. he is 95% sure

He didn't react in a drastic manner aft the official leaving him maybe he is postponing the reaction.. as he doesn't think about it...so even if he is 95% sure it is not final as yet so the full impact of this supposition hasn't sunk in yet

To kaafi din ho gaye to Ram Singh ne himmat karke pooch hi liya

rs-Saabwo..madam ji..kab..ayengi..ya...emm...

Maan shoots him a murderous look...

Ram Singh looks down...kahan chuppe

M-None of your business

rs-Sorry saab, hum to bass

M-Tum bass aur kuch nahi kahoge na karoge jo mujhe pasand nai hoga... wo tumhraa yahan aakhri din hoga

Ram singh chup chap chala jaata hai

2 mahine ho gaye Maan Geet ki baat nahi hui

Geet thought shayad wahan zyada problem hai islie he didn't call aur waise bhi she is sure Maan lene zaroor aayega


PART 211

M-Tum bass aur kuch nahi kahoge na karoge jo mujhe pasand nai hoga... wo tumhraa yahan aakhri din hoga

Ram singh chup chap chala jaata hai

2 mahine ho gaye Maan Geet ki baat nahi hui

Geet thought shayad wahan zyada problem hai islie he didnt call aur waise bhi she is sure Maan lene zaroor aayega but Maan has too much pride in him to come to her

Baaki Geet ke gharwale kuch gossip karne wale chup chup ke gossip kar rahe hain ki kya hua ayega yaa nahi lene, break up ho gaya kya, chod dia kya, yahin rahegi kya, koi Geet se kuch nai kehta kyunki wo khudko kamre mein band rakhti hai to koi kya kahega

Dad maa ko kehte hai Geet se baat karne ke liye... kab tak beti ghar pe baithi rahegi

Maa is stubborn ke baat karne ke liye kuch nahi hai...she is like ke agar Maan is obsessive is maybe it's safe ki Geet yahi rahe

Dad-Par saari zindagi yahin rahegi kya

Maa bhi suna deti hai ki bahar nikal diya iss baar maa would die before anyone would hurt Geet

Dad-Par, use apne pati ke ghar lautna chahie naa. kahan khush hai wo yahan

Maa- Hogi bhi kyun... bahar circus jo laga hai...

Maa is referring to all the gossiping people

Maa- Aur agar itna hi shauk hai to khud baat kar lo usse...main samjha chuki hoon wo samajhna hi nahi chahti

Dad-Maan bhi to Geet ko miss kar raha hoga

Ma-- Mujhe kya pata ek phone to kiya nahi usne haal poochne ko...

Dad-To Geet kar le

Ma-Aapko itni fikar hai to kar lo dono bacho se baat. Dono hi adiyal hain...

Dad-Main to Geet ki bhalai ke lie keh raha hoon

maa- Jaise mujhe to uski bhalai mei interest hi nahi hai na...

Ma bhi parehaan hai Geet ke behavior se...bohot samjhaya maine usko... par koi uski sune to naa...

Ab 3 mahine ho gaye

Maan ka hope level 5 % se down hota jaa raha hai

He is waiting ki Geet bulaye and she is waiting ki wo aaye...

He is in 'she has officially left' mode

At first he didn't know what to do to make it better for her so he left so she can have peace or whatever it was that she wanted...and now he is in she has left me mode coz he never got a call from her. From her parents saying that she is in trouble or not well...so it must mean that she is doing well and fine without him and wants to keep it that way

He hasn't called her ...because of part arrogance part fear of rejection part stubborn male pride

Whenever he steps in the bedroom, which still has her things, her laptop, her dressing table, her wardrobe

Maan hogs himself in work the whole day...earlier he used to like... now its necessity

His mobile has her pictures; he wouldn't look at them... too torturous

He goes to play polo or ride his horse hard and fast... go take on new plans and contracts sometimes drink if he can't fall asleep even after complete exhaustion and he has also lost weight...food didn't taste the same and sometimes he forgot sometimes he didn't have time and sometimes he didn't feel like eating

He hates eating alone. More than sleeping alone he hates eating alone

Sam calls inviting him cheerfully for wedding

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maaneet alag alag
these gossiping people. ..can't shut their mouth
geet thinking maan will come and take her
and maan is thinking geet will ask him to take her
ufff...actually both are missing each other
plzz maaneet ko mila do :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is thinking dat Geet left him.
Geet is waiting for maan call.
Geet parents tried to make her understand maan point of view.
But Geet is not understanding anything.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update. emotional update. Maan and Geet both don't know waiting for each other to contact.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
both are waiting for each other to take first step
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm. Is it the calm before the storm...or the other way? Nice play of battling emotions and doubts between M&G. Really like this FF for its stark dark realism. Waiting to see how the characters will rise above the turmoil in their hearts and minds.
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Posted: 10 years ago
two months is a long time
dont they love each other !!!
stubborn fools

mila do ab inhe plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm uipdt..bth maneet r restless by staying awy frm echother...

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