THE JADED PRINCE [MG] 'Epilogue' Page 66

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raibdrop2

@raibdrop2

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Posted: 10 years ago

You are managing the plot with a tense thread woven all through very skillfully. The turmoil in Geet is very realistic but I hope she will see reason and relent a little and give readers some respite:) feeling sorry for Maan. He's been through so much in life and Geet is not making it easier for him. But then such is life, humans with their complexes and frailities keeping us wondering what's next. Good work!

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

maan has now gone to his devil side...

geet is now denial mode about her worth in maan's life...

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

ye kya ho raha hai ???
i dont want to see them like this plzzz

update soon dear

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deep002

@deep002

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

superb updates dear, loved it...

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

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+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Awesme part
maan ne ranjeet ki band baja di..
Waiting 4 more
pls upd. Soon

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Amazing
Maan doesn't want to loose Geet.
Both doesn't understand each other.
Maan shows video of ranjeet.
Geet is angry on maan.

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

amazing part geet wants to leave but maan also wants to go with her she is thinking about maans reputation but maan doesnt care about anying except geet maan made video of ranjeet he really deserve this very nice part thnx 4 pm