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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Gosh.. who is beating Geet.. she is really in bad condition.. Poor girl.. Felt so much bad for her.. hope Maan will help her. n hope Geet ki koi shdi na hui ho..


wait for the next part...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: jayshu17


<font color="#cc0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">for the New OS dear👏👏</font>
<font color="#cc0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Awesome concept⭐️⭐️⭐️</font>
<font color="#cc0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">beautifully written❤️❤️</font>
<font color="#cc0066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Wonderful start...waiting for the next update</font>


thank you...dear..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: gill123

Nice os waiting 4 more parts


ty...!!will update as soon as u get Lappy...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
congrates for new os
nice
sad n confusing but waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
congo for the new story sweta

i totally loved the concept of the story..

domestic violence...😭

hate that man who is geets hubby even before he entered the story..

but y is geet silently taking all the pain??

hope maan like an angel takes her away from all the pain

will be waiitng for the next part

and dont worry... tumse zyaada tho hum log tumhaare lappy ke liye pray karenge as we want our updates soon😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Beautiful OS Shweta.
waiting to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
gr8 update
whhsts with Maan n geet 😕
were they in love ??????😊
n who did this 2 her 😡
her husband ???? ( oh no ... does she have a husband ) 😭

waiting for more😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48


thank u all for waiting patiently for the next part!!!

i haven't elaborated..the story coz its an OS


PART 2


Geet somehow reached her house limping..and opened the door...and walked inside only to see him red in anger walking back and froth. She gulped and...kept her purse on the table.

Her bangles made noise making him aware of her presence. He took in a deep breath..and flared his nose in anger..

Where the hell were u...its been an hr since m home...Where the f**k wer u...he said aggravated and turned to her..walking towards her

Geet took a step behind..

i..i was at the hospital Arjun..there..wer many patients..and...and..so..she stammered..

He was in front of her within a sec..and held her chin tightly..

o..o my dear lovely wify went to the doc..hmmm he leaned down to her ear

So..what did u say..them..that I hit u..ha..dat I slapped u..he said harshly oinking her cheeks..which had faint marks..

Ahh..she moaned...squeezing her eyes shut..

Bolo..tell me..kya bola unhe geet..he held her hand and twisted it behind her back..

Ahh..arjun she whimpered.He held it more firmly

i..i dint say a...nnything...i..i..sw..swear..she sobbing her tears flowed down to her cheek..

Arjun smirked and held her neck..

Really..how can I believe u.do u want me to leave me geet he asked cupping her neck..

N..no..she tried to..speak..

Ah..huuuh I cant hear u..he said.. tightening his hold on her neck..

She shook her head .nearly gagged with the his force on her neck...but he was still agitated and pissed of at her.

Arjun wiped her tear and patted her cheek..harshly..
don't cry baby..i knw u wont leave...i knw..But kya kare...tum mujhe zara der k liye bhi chod k jati ho..toh mai dar jata hu..he said pinching her waist and scratching them with his nails

She clenched her eyes tightly..

U knw..na I love u..baby..i love u soo much..hmm..he hugged her with all his force crushing..her..

Geet bit her lips hardly to suppress her cries..coz she knew her cries will make him more mad.

She just nodded...sobbing..he smiled as he felt her nodding..and sniffed her ..

His hold loosened..

U have allergy of perfumes..but u r smelling of...a male perfume..he said widening his eyes..and holding her arms..

She shook her head and hissed...

Don't lie..geet..tell me..tell..me..or else..he pushed her and slammed her near the wall beside the door..which made the door flung open..

Ah...she felt down..

Geettt maan screamed.. he was about press the bell when the door opened

He rushed to her...

Geet are u okay..geet geet could barely open her eyes..as the pain in her body was unbearable to her..

Geet maan patted her cheek..but got no response..

Hey..who the hell are u..and what are u doing in my house Arjun said in a rough voice shoving him off geet..

Maan held his hand and pushed him away..he bit the inside of cheeks in anger

I m..maan..her frnd..dare u even touch her he roared..

o..really..arjun smirked..she is my wife..who are u to tell me..what to do with my wife..he said coming close to him..

Maan tighten his fist and marched to him...

U..how dare u do,..this to geet and punched him straight on his face...which landed him on the floor. Arjun was on drugs and maan's punch made him loose his senses he passed out..Maan wanted to kill him on the spot..but geet needed him more

Geet...geet..maan held her

Maan picked her up..and ran to his car. He thanked god that he decided to follow her..to find out what's wrong..or else he wouldn't knw that she was going through this. His geet who was supposed to be treated like a princess was treated like a piece of shit. He placed her on the seat..softly...and came back to the driver's seat. He glanced her and brushed her forehead..m sorry geet m..sorry he whispered with tears in his eyes..before zooming off.



scroll down for part 3

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

plz read the note below the chapter..!!


PART 3

Geet felt some chilliness...and she cuddled to herself. She sighed as the she felt a warm blanket around her...and held the blanket. She snapped opened her eyes when she felt someone brushing her hairs.

She sat..straight and leaned behind and curled up..in a ball position getting scared of the person..

Geet..geet maan looked her in shock..geet its me..maan..he tried to reach her but she leaned back and started trembling...

Okay m not comin near u....and came back to his place..geet look..i m maan u remember me..na maan..he felt his heart churning watching her condition. God knws how long she faced this violence..

mm..maan..she whispered..maaan..my..maaan...she blinked her eyes,,and looked him..

Maan nodded with a sad smiled..and she came forward..slowly touching cheeks trying to figure out its reality or dream...and then embraced him..with a force such that he kept his hand on the bed to support himself

Maan wrapped his hands around her petite figure..

She sobbed in his arms...maan maan she called out his name again..trying to believe this fact that she was in his arms.Like maan understood he tighten his hold..not hurting her..

Shoo..geet m here don't worry..dont worry..he brushed her hair in soothing manner.

In some time she slept..and maan placed her on bed securely...and kissed her forehead before walking out of her room.

He went back to his room..and let his tears flow..His geet the only girl he loved..was in this condition..and he wasn't even aware of this.

That day in Bombay..he told her that he always had a thing for her. She was his crush since high school..geet was initially surprised but was faltered. After a couple of drinks both wer a little tipsy. Both had their flight scheduled next morning..so though of spending their night in a hotel. Owing to back luck both got just one room and settled themselves..there.

At night they spoke of other things around the world..and god knws when then ended up kissing..

They dint make out..as they passed out.

Next morning..when they got up..maan confessed his love to her..where she replied that she too had a thing for him. But it was too late she was already engaged to Arjun..and her parents would never allow her to break off the engagement.

Maan pleaded her..but geet felt that it was better not to give in...they parted their ways. Maan left to NY while geet to delhi.

Next morning.

Maan knocked her door..As he felt that door was locked from inside

Geet..geet are u awake..

yy..yes..one min..she replied..

after 2 mins she opened the door..looking down..and stepped behind.

Maan came inside and placed the parcel on the table beside..

Geet here are u clothes have bath and come down I need to talk to u..saying this he left.

After 30 mins she came downstairs..looking beautiful in the sari he bought for her. He ran his eyes all over her..she was tsill the most beautiful girl..he ever met..he noticed some bruises on her neck..and tears formed in his eyes...there wer cuts around her lower lip too.. Geet saw him looking her neck and wrapped her sari around her body hiding her neck.

Maan looked away..composing himself..and spoke after a while

Geet sit down

Geet nodded and sat down..

None spoke there was pin drop silence in the room.

Geet..arjun..since when he is behaving like and animal..he asked feeling his blood boiling

She hesitated..but knew its useless to hide..he will find out in some or the other way..she knew how stubborn maan would get..also since he had already seen their so called happy married life ..everything was bare before so...she spoke up.

He...he is behaving like this after a month of our marriage..He started. ..beating ..me and..She said hoarsely...as she felt her tears flowing. She had stills ..of Arjun beating her with his belt ..slapping her and what not.

Maan shut his eyes...and clenched jaws..he reached to her and made her drink water..she trembled a bit and drank..he came back to his seat..

U dint tell aunty about it..he asked her a while when she was better. He had to get all his answered today from her

I...I told her but she told me to kept mum..she said the respect of our family was in my hands...and I cant ruin the image she said with a painful smile...

Maan rushed to her and took her in his arms.

Shh..geet m sorry sorry I was not there..to protect u..geet m sorry he let his tears flow. GEet held him..tightly crying her eyes out.

He beat me..every day..maan for every little sily things..maan he..he beat me.He even f..forced me...maan tighten his hold and kissed her hair..feeling helpess he couldnt imagine the amount of pain she went through..

She cried and told him everything..maan was glad she did or else this pain would hurt her every day..

After a while when she was better..

Geet..maan whispered in her hair

Hmmm she hummed with eyes closed

Marry me..

She was completely shock to hear that and denied this infact she even thought maan said this out of pity.. Maan explained her patiently that she had taken the decision once for them which got in this place. He was unhappy and still in love with her while she was suffering..so for once she should do what her heat wants.

After lot of days..and lot of explanations she agreed. Maan had already applied for her divorce...the day he bought her home. The divorce procedure was a hectic one. There was lot of comments made on her character...her image their relationship. Arjun's lawyer left no stone un turned to make them feel miserable. But maan handled all with patience..he loved geet more and took more care of her. Her parents turned their back ...but she dint broke because of his love.


Finally they got divorce after 6 months of constant fighting. Geet still hadn't physically recovered...her wounds were deep. Though her physical scars dint healed. She felt much better. She felt a whole new person again. Maan encouraged her to be herself again. They met old friends..which bought out her lively self again.she gained her confidence back...she eventually came out of her broken state. Maan dint let her feel alone he was by her side always yet giving her space and allowing her to be independent.

After 2 months of her divorce maan proposed her ..in a dreamy way just the way she would want if all these incidents wouldn't have happened. Geet accepted his proposal and both got married with a week and settled in NY.

Though geet was sacred of starting a new life with maan...she was determined to get her self out of this hell. Maan s pure love only nurtured her.

NOTE- Guys I read an article on domestic violence where there wer people who talked about victims..and held them guilty for this. I don't get it how its their fault ??I personally feel all those men who hit their women or any girl are the biggest coward to show their masculinity on them. Also those victims who strive hard to come out of this hell deserve ur respect...its not easy to raise ur voice aginst this crime. But I do hear people..still .blaming the women...inspite of knowing that its them who suffer. This is just a way to tell those people that those women..are great fighters..and deserve respect more than anyone else so..plz do not blame and criticize them. I m sorry if I hurted any one's sentiments or thought..its just an Os where I wanted u guys to know what the society or may be somewhere within our country people think or believe.



Love

sweta

Link of my Mg stories- MY MAANEET PARADISE

also go through the follwoing stories started by..two new writers..


2 STATES


THE VENGEANCE LOVER


Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
me first🥳
😆 i didn't even read it...i was going to comment on 1st part when see u have update...
painful and serious os...i think someone from geet forum have written on this topic...but way of writing is totally different...we have some common topic so don't worry...
will comment on these parts latter
Edited by Neeju - 10 years ago

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