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2 STATES


Heyyaa people...as promised here I m with Mg version of 2 states...

Thank u all for supporting this idea..and encouraging this..

This idea..solely belongs to cidel..thats mishtypie..

I m helping her writing...But believe me guys she is and awesome writer...ull find out this..in the first part itself..!!

Once again thank u ..!!!



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INDEX

CHAPTER 1- PG 1
CHAPTER 2- PG 23
CHAPTER 3- PG 40
CHAPTER 4- PG 61
CHAPTER 5- PG 92
CHAPTER 6-PAGE 105
CHAPTER 7- PAGE 118

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CHAPTER 1


I sat there blankly as nw mind had stopped working but 2 show that I m normal I asked her

"Y I hv been sent here? I don't hv any problem"

Bt she didn't bother 2 answer me and gestured me to remove shoes and sit on d couch. Her cabin was like any other doctor's wit d instruments when u c it u ill try 2 calculate how much they have spend on them and how they r gong 2 recover d loss by charging from patients.

She waited me 2 talk but I was confused by looking at her degree certificates which were hung on wall and thought that how can somebody study so much as I was not in that group. She was in her late twenty which amused me as I have seen uncles and aunties as psychotherapist den I noticed her name Neeta Shetty'

"Dr. Shetty..."

"Neeta is 5n"

"Ok Neeta I don't think I have any problem as many gf's dump their bf's every day but I don't know y Dr. Ram sent me here"

She picked up d file which was kept on her desk and started 2 go through it as Dr. Ram had written my condition in it very clearly stating that I have sacrificed my sleep, cut off human contact more than a week, on a hunger strike and kept on googling 2 know about best ways 2 commit suicide. When she looked at me I tried 2 give d reason but she cut off me and told

"when ever her name is mentioned or about her place or anything related 2 her brings a different emotions in u?"

I was irritated wit her question and said " I had a break-up do expect me 2 be happy and behave like nothing happened?"

Den she took her name sending me again 2 my beautiful past wit my Geetika'

"Don't" I said but she started 2 provoke me

"Don't" what? Again she asked "u said u don't have any problem rite?"

"Problem ur asking about problem here my life is messed up I m acting like zombie and trying innovative ways 2 kill myself and u south Indians r talking break ups so lightly? Do u understand anything about emotions all u know is 2 break d heart "I busted out and took my frustration on her

"I ill ignore d last part but I want 2 know everything 4m d every 1st"she told calmly

Finally I broke into tears and asked "why dis happened with me?"

She passed me tissue

Den I "Maan Singh Khurana" started d story 4 her and 4 me my beautiful past where I lived my each minutes happily wit my "Geetika"


here i m with the 1st part..

okay..this chapter is written by cidel...i have just proofread it...


waiting for ur response...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the start!!! Continue soon... Cidel u r a good writer, do write more😊
Edited by _Maaneet_ - 10 years ago
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Well im dedicatng dis story 2 my mommy i.e mahi coz she is d one who encouragd me 2 comment if she wasnt der i guess i wld hv been remaind as silent reader i love u mahi 🤗
den sweta as she was d one who tld me 2 write lil 4 dis story love u baby if u didnt push me i guess i wld hv been remaind as commentor 🤗
nd 2 massiji vani nd my devil sisters pooja fariya nd uma love u all 🤗
hpe u ill like dis story 😃
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago
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AWWW👏
I loved it... PIE and Swetha ... well written,

Maan finding ways to commit suicide for breakup...😭

Jaldi update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm v interesting starting n nicely written... All the best for a new starting!😊
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Originally posted by: mishtypie

Well im dedicatng dis story 2 my mommy i.e mahi coz she is d one who encouragd me 2 comment if she wants der i guess i wld hv been remaind as silent reader i love u mahi 🤗
den sweta as she was d one who tld me 2 write lil 4 dis story love u baby if u didnt push me i guess i wld hv been remaind as commentor 🤗
nd 2 massiji vani nd my devil sisters love u all 🤗
hpe u ill like dis story 😃




KUDOS SWEETYYY.

GOOD LUCK,

PIE KI MOMMMYYY, APKI SISTER APKO BHADAYIII DETI HAIN...

POOJA KAHA HO TUMMM👏

MAHII,,,,,,,DIWALI KI AVSAR APKO BADIYA GIFT MILGAYA,

MERI MANNAT PURI HOGAYIII👏

Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Maaneet_

Loved the start!!! Continue soon... Cidel u r a good writer, do write more😊


ty so much 😃
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Originally posted by: svani

AWWW👏

I loved it... PIE and Swetha ... well written,

Maan finding ways to commit suicide for breakup...😭

Jaldi update...


ty vani ill try 2 write soon

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