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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Wonderful concept...pure love story...forgiving and forgetting is the key for successful love life...geet and maan are overdoing it...
Waiting eagerly for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
omg! So maan loves geet bt he blames himself for the accident want to keep geet away from him though he also got burned bt don't want to treat his scars as punishment for what he did.. N nw maan's mom want to tell geet @ it.. Let c what happens.. Waiting for nxt part.
Hey di, are u going to update ur other works as well.. If so pls do inform as m in love with all ur works. Pls do continue ur other works too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Reading prologue i thought maan to b heartless .bt den now...i think destiny really been cruel...
awesome unique story...waiting for next part...cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
All this to save her apparently
I don't call that saving
But making it worse
He rejected her for this reason
Maan how do you think she will feel when she comes to know why you rejected her
She won't be happy
Till now she thought you didn't love her
But that's not true
Let's see what else happens
This wasn't short at all
So much mystery wasn't it
As to how maan could do this
Now we known why
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Thanks lot dearies for your likes and comments. I am glad you are loving the concept. Enjoy another part from my side. I am trying my best to utilise my free time right now so wanna update as much as I can for you all. And I promise will complete this story so don't worry and may be after this I can re-post my previous stories too,but after completing this one. If I can re-think about those concepts,then will surely post them. Otherwise something new but only after completing this story. So enjoy this part dearies and don't forget to drop your likes and comments.

Chap-2

'Memories are blissful, have always been beautiful for geet but the most beautiful have always turned out to be the saddest. Not when she lost her eyesight,but when she lost her maan,her childhood best buddy, her soulmate,who left her immediately after that dreadful incident. She tried to contact him, but to no avail. He left never to return back to her. She knew something had happened but what and why? the reason was still unknown to her till now. As tears made her way through her eyes down wetting her soft cheeks.She couldn't control the emotional turmoil and suddenly felt suffocated. He was disgusted with her she came to know the reason finally. He was disgusted with her blindness. Her single imperfection turned her perfect life upside down in a second. Not that she was blaming him,she knew she couldn't ever dreamt of marrying. Its just that she wanted her best friend back. Yes,she loved him with all her heart and he was always her prince charming because he was just simply perfect without a single flaw. And she was just plain , simple geet how could she ever match to him.She just missed her best friend that's it , but now after today she lost him forever. The slight ray of hope was also completely diminished and now only there was darkness she could feel it from her every fibre of her being. Her mother left her along with her father and now she was alone all lonely in this big world, nobody to care for her or love her for herself , who can see past her disabilities without any disgust. Her maa had wanted to stay back at the Khurana mansion,but she just couldn't stay there without feeling maan's hatred for her, she can take his ignorance but his hatred will kill her from inside completely, though not that she was alive but that would be too much for her to bear. So she denied her maa's request and now here she is back in her small floral shop and today not even the soothing fragrance of the flowers are providing her any relief whatsoever. Her thoughts were broken by the sound of the bell indicating that a customer was on the way.'

'Geet'

'Aditya what happened?'

'Geet there is a bad news, savitri devi is in the hospital. You have to come with me immediately she is fighting for her life.'

'What maa, omggg how and when?'

'Come with me geet, I will explain everything on the way.'

And with that both rushed to the hospital. Fate plays an important role whether we accept or deny it. Its inevitable and cannot be changed. As happened in this scenario when savitri devi's car got disbalanced and was hit by a truck. And so here she was fighting for a life and death situation. And she couldn't die without conveying the entire truth to geet. She just couldn't die not before uniting them both and so here she was fighting tooth and nail along with her son maan who was pacing like a mad beast waiting for the doctor's report. He just couldn't loose his mother at any cost. He already had lost enough in his life, first his father had left them for another woman and now his mother. Geet was already gone from his life because of his mistake and now this. No this time he won't loose, he will fight tooth and nail for his mother's life. God cannot be so cruel to him, at this point of life. As he leaned back on the wall closing his eyes a small drop of tear fell from his eyes only to be held by a soft touch.

'Geet'

'Maan'

'She was here , his geet was here infront of him and he just couldn't take it. He broke down finally with a heavy sob and there she gathered him in her fragile arms hugging him with all her might. She couldn't bear his pain, from far she sensed him on the corridoor as she quietly made her way towards him only to feel his heavy breathing which indicated that he was about to cry as she had always sensed before and so without a tinge of hesitation she caught his tear in her palm and gathered him in her warm and comforting embrace. Her soothing words made him felt like he belonged to her , finally someone was there for him, with whom he can share his pain and worries and who better than his geet. Only she could calm his raging painful heart. And she did so. They were holding each other tightly till the doctor's voice broke their embrace finally bringing them back to reality with another reality waiting for them which was going to change their lives forever, binding them together till eternity unknown to them, fate had already played its part in the form of savitri devi.


So dearies hope you will love this part too.
And that's it for today from my side.
Next I will upd. again in my free time.
Don't forget to like/comment.
T.c.
Xoxo.
Edited by _Ms.Foxy.Angel_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

nice concept👏



update soon


Edited by anjalisen85 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Updated another chapter for you all sweeties...
T.c.enjoy.
Xoxo.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
me first😃



maans mother had accident😲



maan meet geet😊



geet sense maans pain😊



update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Nice part maan's mom met wit accident nd nw fightng wit death only 2 tel d truth 2 geet
maan is worried nd dont want his mom 2go away 4m him
geey came nd held maan when he was broken hpe he realises dat she also loves him
waitng 4 d nxt part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
God dis was so emotional... words are less to the tel how much... i loved dis part..though destiny trying to unite dem..bt again...savitri devi...
each words u penned nd der depth..each feelings...simply fab...cont soon...
was missing ur writing sss...
happy dat ur back

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