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Maan decided to win geet heart back nice update

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nice story
loved both parts
maan realised his mistakes and came to his wife ...geet was way too much hurt with his behaviour on their wedding night she asked him to leave...
maan decided he will win her back

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PART 3

Maan went downstairs...had little bit of breakfast ..that too when reena forced him and left to meet geet. Reena waved him back with a smile and prayed to babaji to make them come back together.

Geet was in her boutique. She too dint sleep last night . There wer dark circles around her eyes. The girl who was bubbly was lost somewhere. She was just a robot..who did her work..monotonously. It was early morning so..she decided to do the accounts as it would divert her mind from maan. She was wearing blue coloured sari her hair..open as it was wet. She started with last week' sales account. She got completely engross in that. She chewed the back of her pencil...and rolled her finger in her curls.

A smile broke across his face as she saw her. How cute and adorable she looked. Now he understood..why is mornings weren't good. She was missing..how could it be nice? Now its perfect. The boutique was a small one..but quite famous in the city. Maan stood there watching her..quietly. Geet had let windows open so..gentle breezes flowed around in. Her hair swayed wth air. She was still lost in her work.

O God she looked beautiful...as the breeze played with her hair she looked mesmerizing. Her eyes concentrating on her work..her high cheek bones which were still..so cutely chubby. He remembered pulling those cheeks. He smiled at this thought..coz now he wanted to do..lot of things to those cheek he wanted to bite them hard. He breath in sharply looking at those lips. The way her tongue revolved around the pencil.

He inwardly groaned at his thoughts. Being back here..in her life was totally bliss. He moved to the door. He open the door and entered inside. The door made a sound and it alerted her. She got up and smiled...wich vanish as soon as she saw him.

HE felt pang in in his heart but still moved towards her. She looked him in shock and then lowered her eyes. He stood at little distance from her gazing her. He wished to look in those eyes ...and it seem god granted his wish. She looked up at him. Her innocent eyes ..held his captive. None spoke a word. Silence seem to sooth their heart. Both their heart beating loudly.

Geet was lost in his eyes AND so was he. Her hazels were seeking questions from him...they dint held him guilty they dint accuse him of..whatever happened. Maan read those eyes and felt more pathetic. Their misery was ending. Her eyes still dint find him guilty. He sighed and opened his mouth to speak..

Geet i..I.. he had no words to say...I hedint knw what to say where to start..

She swallowed and spoke softly How r u..how..is ur life??How come u r here...I mean .. she tucked her hair behind her ear..are u here for a some new project All the way looking down

No..geet I ..i M here..He sighed I m here for us he said tenderly

She looked up and gazed in him confusion... He took one step towards her

Geet I m..here for you..for us. Those words were full of confidence and determination which made her heart flutter. There wasn't any doubt..since his eyes spoke the same.

She lowered her eyes with tears..

Why now..maan?? Why??

Geet ... hE paused cupped her cheek and made her look him

Geet I knw I have don't big blunders..no committed sucha a big sin..But I want u to give me a chance to rectfy it..

I want to..i want to be with u.. he said with sincerity I want to make our marriage work .. he brushed his thumb over that tear which fell from her eyes..

w..hhy??? she stammered holding his hand over her cheek

because I love u geet..i always have..and I always will ... he said with all his love

She stopped breathing...she looked him wide eyed unable to believe what she heard.. She missed a beat.. He knew what she was going through.he nodded and pressed his forehead on hers and said again with all his love

I love you..geet I love u mishty.. She closed her eyes... She dint knw whether it was her dream or reality..whatever it was..it was beautiful. She never dreamed off him proposing her...teas slipped from corner of her eyes.. Maan kissed the tear lovingly...something which he wanted to do yesterday too.. She shivered and held his shirt. She crushed it..as his lips moved over her cheek kissing her lightly. She felt butterflies in her stomach..Something which she used to feel..when he was around long back. He brushed his lips over her eyes..pecking both ..She sighed and closed her eyes. He moved to kiss her forehead and then hugged her..keeping her close to his heart. He wrapped her hands around his back and n place her head near his heart. He held her waist and pecked her head again. He closed is eyes . Both stood there..hugging each other soothing each other's hearts. Two souls were finally at peace after years. She smiled as she felt his heart beating in sync with hers. She placed a small kiss there . He smiled ..feeling her love.He knew she would never question him..simply believe him as always..but wouldn't bring herself to trust him. He wanted to start their new life with trust and love both. Eh sighed and parted her a little and she frowned feeling lack of warmth and looked him ...

He cupped her face and pecked her forehead and whispered.. Geet will u let me rectify my misdeeds..??Will u let me love you?? Will u give me fair chance to win u all over again?

She looked in his eeys which had love... she nodded .

Geet u forgot ur wallet..back at home..so I Adi stopped as he saw them.

He got aggravated with the scene before him..and marched towards them in rage. Bhai..app adi..tum

Adi held maan's neck and punched him.. Bhaiii... geet screamed in horror.. Adi held his collar and dragged him out of the boutique.. Geet ran behind him

Dint I warn u..enough..DO NOT COME NEAR My sis...I wont let u live MAAN SINGH KHUARAN .. He raised his hand to slap him..again

Bhai..stop this now... geet roared

Adi stopped and looked her..She came in between them . are u okhay..maan she asked him and ran her eyes all over his body ... M fine...geet and nodded wiping the blood from corners of his lips.

Gettt..adi looked geet in anger

Geet turned back to adi..bhai.,.what r u doing..How can u hit him..??

Geet..what the hell werr u doing with him..U stay away from him.. he looked at maan i knw how to handle him and moved a step ahead.
geet held him..bhai..pleas ehe is my husband u cant do..dis..please

Adi looked her shockingly.. He held her shoulders geet what r u saying..this is the same person..who..

I knw bhai..she said slowly I knw..he wants a chance..

So..what ? ..wait what did u say?? Chance?? Whats ur answer?? he narrowed his brows

I ..I want to give him a chance bhai.. She whispered.. and lowered her eyes

What,..the hell are u crazy..?? he shoved her..

I m gona kill u maan ..u cant to same thing again with my sis... he was ready to punch him..but this time maan reverted back an punched him across his face. Adi held his jaw and looked him angrily..Geet came in between them..

Bhai...

Soorry adi..but u were nit ready to listen anything..u dint leave any option

Adi glared him bhai..please..

Lets go..at my place maa will help to bandage u...

No...ooo... he screamed in pain

Bhai..chaloo..we shall discuss it there..

All there left to maan's place.

All of them wer sitting in his living room. Geet was sitting next to maa. While adi and maan on separate sofas. Well I don't believe him..he is not at all trustworthy..what if he does the same thing again he said getting up...

Aunty u had seen her condition..u did witness her suffering..u want her go through all that again.. MAA lowered her eyes while..Geet had tears. Maan saw geet and ..felt the destruction he caused to her..

He stood up...adi I promise I wont run away..I genuinely love her..and want a second chance he said facing him..

How can..I..

Adi beta please give him a chance.. raj said. All turned their heads to see him. He came forward and glanced maan and then adi.. maan felt sensation of gratitude for his father.

He wont run away..if he does..i promise u..Ill get him back to him..N u can do whatever u want we wont interfere..

Maan nodded..

Adi looked father and son..and then at geet who was looking expectantly ..towards him

He sighed..well fine..but this time he has to pass a test..he had to prove himself U have to win her trust an mine,,.too then only I shall hand u my sis..

Adi ill do anything..and everything u want... Maan said smiling.

Lets c..maan ..and smirked

Maan turned to look at geet who was blushing ...and had a small smile on her face.

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