~TANHAI~ LAST PART AND EPILOGUE -PAGE 16|INDEX -PAGE 3|COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new OS and thanks for the PM. Interesting start..Maan left Geet years back to fulfill his dream, and now came back repenting..Adi's reaction is natural as a brother. Pls continue..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan left geet on their wedding..
wedding hui ya nahi ?
I guess hui tabhi to masn ne geet ko wife bola ...
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice start ..😊
Waiting...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan left geet on their weeding night poor geet😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrates for new story
different little bit
is full story sad all the way
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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edited my comment in the first page

sorry unres karne mein der ho gayi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Shaadi ke din hi Maan Geet ko chod ke chala gaya aur ab 5 saal bad wapas aaya hai toh adi ka gussa lajmi hai...poor Geet!!
Aap ne Jo Geet ka pic use kiya hai woh bada achha hai
Waiting for Geet reaction...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for this lovely..and beautiful banner priya sweety!!

INDEX

PART 1- PAGE 1
PART2-PAGE 3
PART 3-PAGE 7
PART 4-PAGE 11
PART 5- PAGE 14
LAST PART AND EPILOGUE- 16
Edited by swetaa100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2


He walked out dejected with pain throbbing his heart. Those tears only added his misery. He wanted to kill himself for his misdeed . He let his tears fall... today he couldn't stop them. He feared her reaction right from the time he got down the plane. He himself had murdered their friendship..their martial relation ..every relation with his own hands.

HE stopped as he reached his house. He wiped his tears and walked inside.

HE rang the doorbell and waited.

His mother opened the door . She looked him in shock..Her tears flew seeing her only son after 5 long years. He gave painful smile...feeling her motherly love.

She moved ahead to touch him and paused. She widen her eyes and narrowed her brows.. and stepped back in. She looked him once more and tried closing the door but maan kept his hand ..

Maaa please don't do..dis ..please he pleaded Sobbing

Reena cried too she couldn't anymore she opened the door and maan fell on his and hugged her.

Maa m sorry please..i want to come back..maa I m sorry I love u I love her..i love geet.

Its too late beta..and brushed his hairs..lovingly.

After some time

Raj and reena wer sitting along with maan.

Maan gazed his dad who dint even spare him a glance.

He walked to him went on his knees na joint his hands

Dad I knw..I have committed a big crime..But dad I want to rectify it..dad please ...

Raj hardened his face..
Maan cant rectify it.. He stood up U always dreamed big..we never stopped you and if we did Geet was always the one to..support you and u did dis to her..he looked him with painful expression

U did dis to ur best frnd.. If u dint love her..u should have let me knw..

I wouldn't have got u married.. and turned his face shaking his head

Maan hung his head low

He wants another chance..raj please reena intervened

He wants another chance..do u think he deserves he roared in anger

He dint wanted marriage he wanted to pursue his dream he left her... all u can see his him...only him where is geeet in all this he held reena's shoulder

He dint even bother calling us reena..u knw I knw what was geet's condition after he left.. These people got another chance to scold her call her a jinx..which first made her parents die and then maan.. He scowled

Maan cired loudly..he couldn't imagine what she would have gone through..without him

Reena held raj.. I don't want to see her hurt again..reena and then turned his face to maan U have done enough damage maan..please don't come back now..we have learnt to live without you..

Maan shut his eyes in pain and clenched his fists.

Daa...reena shook her head at him..

She took raj to his room. Maan thumped on the couch and held his face in palms. What had he done..was he dat selfish..

Maan reena called him

She came and sat next to him. Maan hugged her and cried softly he patted his back..

Maan do u love her..?? she asked

He parted n looked her and nodded I love her a lot..maa he confessed

Reena smiled a bit.. and patted his cheek then beta u have to make her fall in love with u..again

He looked her questionably Beta lot has happened..her heart is broken in millions of bits..She has to fall for u again..so that all these memoires are wiped off from her heart

He nodded understanding ..what his mother is saying


U have to woo ur best friend and ur wife..and ruffled his hair

HE smiled a little and nodded and placed his head in her lap.He spoke for a long time and he slept on the sofa.

Geet was in her room. Why was he back again...she shut her hazels..she couldn't wipe off those memories. Their wedding...he had left her on their most sacred day. HE could have explained her his denial but..he chose to leave her abandoned her on that day. They were getting married due to his parents..She knew he dint love her..so for him it dint matter . But for her..her whole world came crashing down.

She cried bitterly ...as those memories were still fresh in her mind.

She opened the bedside cupboard and took out their pic. It was their wedding picture. She lightly touched his face..on the frame

Why dint u tell me..that u wer not happy with our wedding maan..?? I thought even u don't love me..But u wer happy with our marriage alliance.. I was happy ..knwoing that atleast I would be called ur wife... She cried

Atleast as friend u could have let me knw.. Y did u do dis too me.. She whimpered..

Geet adi called her..geet are u alright.. I have sent him away he banged the door please open the door bacha...

Geet hurriedly kept the pics back and wiped her face.. after composing her self she opened the door.

Adi came inside and cupped her face,,

Geet bachaa..u don't have to worry ..i m der with u..okhay..
Geet nodded and smiled a little

Adi hugged her ...and patted her head. Geet closed her eyes.

Next morning

Maan got up at 6am ...he couldn't sleep last night . He had hurted her so much..that the pain and anguish he saw in her eyes felt less. He went for cold shower in his room. He recalled reena's words ..He closed his eyes and brushed his hairs backwards . The water trickle down his chin and then into his chest down his abdomen.

Sir...thank u thank u so much..for this Ill be in Mumbai ..in 3 days..he said excitedly over the phone

Yes maan well got participate in this reality show..n I m sure ull get a big break out here..

If u say so..sir

Yey..after all such single well built guy with such good acting skills are required here..

Single?Sir actually I m getting....

Yey..single ..u have to sign a agreement that u cant marry anyone..until the show is over
anyway c u ..here buhbye..

He opened his eyes and came back to present. He wished he would have spoken to geet before their wedding... Things went so fast that he couldn't tell her about his departure. He knew she will agree but later when he saw her extremely happy with the wedding preparations he dint had a heart to say anything. It was then he realized that she loved him. All those years gone back when his mother tried to tell him..dis he denied. He never thought of this possibility of geet loving him. He was soo much blinded by his dream and arrogance that he considered her selfless love as selfish. He actually believed the fact she..his best friend did all that only to get married to him.Since she was an orphan who lived with her uncle..she thought of him as a good catch. He thought of her as an opportunist. Such a jerk he was! He still remembered that day when he told her about his dream. He expected the same reaction as his parents but to his surprise she encouraged him. She was as much excited as him. They went to few auditions around Ambala..but nothing work. He contacted few of his frnds who wer in delhi to help him out. She supported him throughout... She was beside him on each and every step.

Tears slid down his face..he not only left her wife but he had lost his best frnd due to his selfish nature. Mumbai was tough thing to handle. The show wasn't a great one..so dint give him any returns. He worked part time and supported him self. Next year he got a big break in Tv. He accosted that and took the offer. He did couple of movies which did good but not great. Every single day he would miss her but denied this fact. Luck wasn't his side...he got into finical crisis again. Again he started with an new beginning. All these days when he missed her he thought of her as his best frnd..he spoke to her picture which he bought along with him. It was 4th year when he got a big break in a movie. He started shooting for it..the movie was a teenage love story ,..the whole script reminded him of her. Realisation dawn upon him..that his feeling wasn't that of frndshsp..it was much more than that..it was love. Then he decided to come back... but due to his commitments he couldn't . He tried calling at her place but..she had changed her no. His parents too..wuldnt respond him back. Finally he gave the news of his homecoming through letter.

He wappred the towel around his waist and came out. He opened his wardrobe n selected the shirt which she had got for him through her first salary. He smiled..and slid his hand over the fabric as if touching her. She was really happy that day. She bought gifts for everyone..for him for maa and paa...for her uncle adi.. Now she own a boutique.. he had learnt his from maa last night. He was certainly proud of her. She managed everything on her own..he never thought as her to be this independent and mature. But she grown like that. She took all his responsibility not as his wife..or as a daughter-in-law but..as geet only. He was indeed luck to have her.

He wore the clothes and as he moved across the bed he stopped. He sat on the bed and opened the drawer of the left hand sidle table. He removed their picture.. He smiled painfully. It was their common friend's wedding picture.

She had wore sari for the first time. She looked beautiful..he now understood that the pink colour on her cheeks ..meant her blushing. He felt her throat getting choked. She had loved him so much..her love was pure , and sacred. She never expected anything back from him. Infact yesterday also..she just asked him to leave. How could he leave her..how could he leave his mishty...that too now..after knowing she was still in love him. That kumkum and her eyes spoke the truth which her lips coulnt.

HE wiped the tears wich flowed contiously and stood up with new determination. HE vowed to woo his wife back. He will wipe of all the hurt pain and anguish. He knew it will be difficult for her to trust him...it wouldn't be easy. But he would wait..wait forever...when she dint give up on their love how can he??

He would get her back...get Geet khuarna back.

M coming mishty to win u all over again..I have promised maa to get her bahu back in this house he smiled . And u knw MAAN SINGH KHUARNA never breaks his promise

Precap- wooing geet handa..oops geet khurana!!


thank u..guys!!

well i guess the sad parts are done..now..ull see maan manofying his mishty!!



love

sweta

PART 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4168700/tanhai-last-part-and-epilogue-page-16-index-page-3-completed?pn=7

Edited by swetaa100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic OS!!!👏👏👏 👏👏👏 Awesome concept⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Wonderful start👍🏼Maan leaves her on their wedding day after five years he come back to see her...Adi is angry on him...poor Geet really bad for her💔...Loved it so much❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️waiting for the next update
for the PM dear😃

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