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Kaku yadav

@chahat_mannat

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Awesome story dear.
Read all part in one go.
First maan left geet on his weddin to become actor and came back to win her back.
Adi made him to do all works and made plan to test maan love.
Finally maan love won n get geet back

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

read part 5, 6 n epilogue

very emotional

cry while reading

but happy at ending

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

👏👏👏 👏👏👏

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Beautifully written. Waiting for more 👏

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

hi js read LP n epilogue nw! Thanks 4 an amazing OS! superbly written! Maan left 4 her happiness! Bt he did nt tell anyone n js left a letter 4 Adi. Geet tensed n restless as Maan did nt come with her lunch! She goes home n is shocked n shattered. his family is upset! Adi arrives n explains! It was a test 4 Maan! Adi tells wt he did! he sed tht he had 2 knw Maan really loves her! Maan keft 4 her happiness! he tells Geet 2 go get him! Maan did nt leave cos of the weather! Geet finds him! Maaneet kiss! Maan happy! They get married n become one! Maan agrees 2 move 2 Deklhi 4 her career despite her protests!

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Its simply my POV, I love the concept and the story except the bit where the family is taking decision on them, come on they are old enough to take decision on own.

I didn't like the bit where Adi was interfering in their life, its up to the couple whether to give a chance or not, and to move on or not.

thanks for the PM.

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LottaBella--

@LottaBella--

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

beautiful os on love , separation and union ❤️

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_Mystique_

@_Mystique_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

I feel like punching Adi 😈
Why he wants to come between M&G

I don't know why but like button is not working.

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

dear..

Thanku dear for this lovely story..

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Dat was lovly..so i was rt..it was Adi ka plan...hahahha...bt lovly...
nd den der Sr...dat was so...☺️

dear i had loved dis small and cute journey of from betrayal to longing to guiltines...to love...nd forever...

loved it very much...do write more of like dis... ll be waitn ...

got to read sacred...ll read tomorrow..now am sleepy
gn..🤗

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