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Hi all my name is sweta...n I knw u might be thinking m crazy..Well I have gone totally nuts I feel.
I have three on-going stories n so glad to get such a good response from u guys..
Here I m back with an os...
PART 1
Maan was waiting at the airport. His plane landed 2 hrs ago..He still waited for her to come..to receive him. He smiled sadly . HE deserved this . He deserved every bit of this pain. No one came to receive him.why would they??After all that he has done..
HE sighed and stood up to leave .
He called for a cab and got into it. As the can drove to towards his destination. The old memories came back to his mind. Those trees where he used to play with her , those farms...those days those beautiful days and them..only them.
As the cab stopped he paid the driver and got down. He had to walk down the lane to reach his destination. He remember cribbing about these narrow lanes to his father. Ambala was sweet beautiful and small city. His whole family never had any problem with their living style but he did. He always dreamed fo something big. Something better than Ambala something better than their small livelihood
As he walked down he saw two children's playing. He smiled at them.
This was the same place where he met her years back during their childhood. His friend his best friend ...his companion his mishty..his wife... HE looked around to see minute changes the place was still the same. This place was till close to his heart actually his heart belonged here. He inhaled the aroma of his city. He felt nice to be back on this roads this..area
He walked further and reach her house. He straightened himself and opened the gate . As he walked inside he felt the corners of his burn..the whole place everything reminded him of her. He stood before the door n saw the name plate. Ms. Geet Handa...he ran his hand over her name. He so much wanted to scrape that handa out and shout that it was khurana...MRS.GEET KHUARANA ..his geet his wipe. Tear slid down his cheek he felt so vulnerable already how could he face her now. But he had to. He to rectify this mistake . No his fault his doing which spoilt her life. He himself was responsible for all this loneliness in filled in her life and his too. His parents turned their backs on him..his frnds no one was with him .Initially he felt all dint support his dream coz of their mentality. After all they all belonged to small city and such low class people only lived their life the way it is and they don't dream. They maybe jelaous of his talent his potential. The dream of becoming an actor. This dream led him to the city of dreams MUMBAI.
With this thought he had left this city 5 yrs back on their wedding day. He breath heavily and he recalled his stupid thoughts. What a selfish cow he was! HE couldn't identify the gem of a person she was..his best frnd. Who supported him always..she encouraged him in front his parents ,fought with his parents to make them agree . And he betrayed her..he dint realize her love, he insulted her..he insulted her love..his love their love. He left her on their wedding day..for his dream.
HE controlled himself and came back from the past. He wiped the sweat from his forehead and took a deep breath. He pressed the doorbell. He waited for the door to open desperately, couldn't wait to meet her.He dint knw whether she would be waiting for him..or had moved on. But she did deserved to punish him. He knew the sin he committed had no forgiveness but ..at least he could get punishment from her which can help to sooth is aching heart.
The door opened. And as he saw her the time stopped for both of them. HE forgot everything and could only see her. She wasn't wearing patiyals that she used to wear. She wore a yellow sari with red border along with a long chain. HE ran his eyes all over her. HE did notice her kumkum but she wasn't wearing any magalustra. He hair was tied in an messy bun with curls hanging down...It was no longer two plats.
He stood at the door with his eyes boring into hers. His eyes had joy ,pain, agony, helplessness. While her's were little shocked and then blank.
She dint move as she daw him on the door step. She couldn't believe that he actually came. She had heard the news of his homecoming but dint expected him to meet him. She dint wanted to meet him. Even though she was happy for him and had moved on but couldn't come to meet him face to face. Those wounds will never heal..and meeting him..will only make her vulnerable. She dint want to face her past again..her pain which she had buried deep inside.
Who is it geet adi..her cousin brother called her out.. HE came to the door to see what is taking her so..long and stood rooted to spot.
His voice broke their intense eyelock.
What are u doing here..??adi barged in between them.
Geet u go inside..now..ill handle him.. adi stared maan angrily.
Adi..I maan spoke up...
Shut up...I don't want to listen anything geet leave..just leave I said.. he roared
Geet stepped back and left slowly.Maan saw her leaving resentfully.
oye...Adi yelled and caught his collar.. How dare you step inside Ambala...
U bas***d what the hell are u doing here..Y did u came here to meet my sis..he pushed him down. Maan tripped and fell down on the ground.
Adi..listen to me he tried speaking again but adi held him up and made him stand only to punch him really hard making his lips bleed.
What u want now...did u come here to rub salt on her wounds that u gave her years back.. ha and once again punched him making him fall back again..
Bhai... Geet screamed as she saw adi gearing up for a punch again. She looked at adi and then to maan. She kept staring maanand spoke..bhai just let him go..please
GEet just listen to me once he came forward but adi held his shirt again..
Geet showed him her hand gesturing him to be quite. Maan kept mum and stared her in pain.
Geet blinked back to stop her tears .
Lets go bhai...please n turned her back. She muffled her cries in her pallo and ran inside.
Adi threw maan outside roughly. Maan was still looking in her direction.
Leave and don't ever come back..or else I wont leave u that time he warned him. Maan dint pay attention to him..he was still looking at her direction.
Maan felt tormented seeing her in pain. The pain he had gifted her his best friend. on their wedding nite...
This will have 5-6 parts will..try to finish this by Monday...!! Only if u guys comment and give me ur reviews..or else I wont post another part..!!
also..did u like the macho and angry adi..in this part!hehehe..do give me ur feedback..
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Sweta
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