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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello there pretty lady !
Howzz You ? And howzz our little M ?
Congratulations on your motherhood ! May you and your loved ones get all the happiness in life !
Edited by ardentfitzcy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Let me first thank you for fulfilling that little wish of Vyan and Kittu pairing.
Thank you ! (Dil se )
I am sure our Kittu will prove to be quite a match for our sweet Vyan. Kittu and Vyan dancing on Bol na (Kapoor n Sons ) song sequence on their engagement day . :D
A considerable time has paased and people have moved on in life. Vyan having bought a ring and ready to propose his love is a sign of it. BTW that was an intelligent writing ! For a moment one would think its for Geet but then he says Kittu and we know the truth. However to an outsider who would have caught just that moment would think it was for Geet.
Geet ready to dispose off all the rubbish n unwanted stuffs was it meant to be a symbolism ? If yes then it came out well in the end with Geet getting rid of her old uncertainties and hesitations towards that one man who plays such a pivotal role in her life (not that she will accept) and ready to take a chance.
M, I really appreciate the kind of equation you show among these friends. Whether be it Anaya-Geet or Vyan-Geet.
The way Vyan called Geet at the time when he needed a support , the encouragement to propose or the way Anaya knows Geet needs her even if it isn't spoken aloud, these small instances are enough to define true friendship.
Anaya has been there all along and she knows both the sides of the story and as not being the direct protagonist of the said story she is someone who can suggest an unbiased solution. A solution that will provide a chance to both the affected persons. A golden ticket, isn't what we've all been looking for. So now as it lies just a step away, I am excited how the story will unfold now.
A very befitting title !
One more thing is what I wanted to add is Geet in my opinion is still yet to know what she wants. Or may be she knows what she wants but she is waiting for the person who would show her the moon and say Here Missy ! Do you see that Moon ? You want that. No..no now dont be a fool and waste your time declining the fact. You have been wanting that for a very a long time now. DO you see that road ? That is the way to your goal. Go and Grab it !
I remember watching Zindagi Milegi naa dobara where Hritik tell his friend Abhay deol that he wasn't ready for marriage and he's been waiting for someone else to tell him that . More specifically he depended on his friends to show him what he has secretly wanted all along.
Ah my habit of blabbering !
Thanks for the beautiful update and also for the PM !
I am expecting an update on Wednesday !
Edited by ardentfitzcy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I was listening to Zaruri tha by Rahat Fateh Ali Khan.
The lyrics goes like this
Teri aankhon ka dariya ka
utarna bhi zaroori tha
mohabbat bhi zaroori thi
bichadna bhi zaroori tha...
I found it apt for our hero's situation ! As important it was for him to love her , it was also necessary that he be rejected.
Then there is a line like this
Mili hain manzilein phir bhi
musafir the musafir hai
MG have achieved big in life and still not content with their lives. There is something missing. The people around them have attained their happiness( requires effort for that happiness to be in continuity ;)) it is their turn now. Isn't is Ms.Writer?
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Thesis on Mr.?

What do I call him ? Who is he ?
MSK in his Maan-avata wala avatar or Maan in MSK get up?!
Move on...move on...is the theme.
He has changed. Moved on.
Is it so ?
He is Maan and the MSK is also him so I guess we'll get to enjoy both the versions of him.
I believe today he just chose to show something that he had well managed to keep under the veil. It was a way to tell her that the forgiveness was not just an attempt to save her from misery whn she was suffering on the hospital bed but it was given full heartedly.
And that reminds me of a quote that forgiveness is like a flower that gifts fragrance to the hands that crushes it.
It might be not her fault. Accepted . But he did suffer. And yet he came. For her. His love for her conquered those bitter feelings. And I would forever love him for it.

You know what the best thing is ?its not just Geet but the man here knows that someway he had been responsible to cause her distress and is trying hard to undo those times when he had given her a cold shoulder or treated her just as an acquainted stranger. He might have done thousands of wrongs - but then you will notice smallest of his gestures and you won't be able to resent him.
Here I will quote a certain quite girl who doth not know what her heart desires,
"Its not his looks that I love. Its his imperfections. Its the way he is perfect, yet imperfect. Arrogant yet kind hearted enough to help Lizzy at the time of her need. Its his imperfections that make him loveable, not the oh-so -charming looks"
May I add I love his heart that was resentful yet magnaminous enough to come and forgive her.
He has cleared the snow that had blocked the doorway. He has kept his door wide open. All she needs to do is walk in now.
Let it be one step at a time !
Edited by ardentfitzcy - 9 years ago
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I came here to continue my comment.. but seems Mrs.Darcy already gave her valuable comment 😆 which makes me shut my mouth and dissolve in the sweetness of the encounter
Yet again.. I can't resist to comment!! Me being me its hard not to say anything for such unique encounter. This.. writing and words just makes me go crazy at times and awwwee sometimes!! *scratch that, it makes me go crazy ALL the time*

Mrs.Darcy.. I was about to suggest the same song .. Dang!! 😆 You beat me!
Bolna.. mahi bolna.. ❤️ ☺️ Vyan and Kittu.. 😃

Tere sang hasna main..tere sang rona
Tujhme hi rehna main tujhme hi khona .. 😳


And back to M&G

"Look for a miracle in every encounter."

I guess this quote aptly fits the situation.. every meeting..every encounter counts for a purpose!!
And this encounter is a slight shift in heart 😛a warm feeling settling.

😆😆 I kinda expected that Geet would run away from Maan if she meets or happens to face him next time.. but I didnt knew she is scared to face him.
May be not scared.. but she is scared for herself more..

I should appreciate Maan's guts to stand ground and and hang around for a while. And make a move.. Like a real move .. to be friends with her.. back to normal kind.. just a small step..
He made a path.. so that she can be herself, like the old Geet.. for sharing..caring.. and give a part of herself.

I knew he was standing right behind me. There was no way out. I had to turn around and face him as he stood at a decent distance from me, looking every bit as perfect as he always seemed to be.

😳 I cant comment much .. its .. IDK.. every thing is so perfectly written..even her feelings..
perfect as he always seems to be.. - whoa.. does Geet always think like this? About Maan being perfect? in every sense? She knows she can't look at any guy like the way she looks at him.. so much admiration and love..but she is just blinded by her fear.. fear to loose people.. she just pushes him away.

I feel very awkward if I happen to meet a person whom I didn't see nor spoke for a long while.. I may not be even say Hi 😆 Geet is tad bit improvised version of me.
I just go blank.. My frnd always tease me saying "Cat caught your tongue" but its true.. I cant speak a word.. not even pleasantries.

And when they say how are you? or any kind of concerned questions regarding me I feel like crying and hug them right away and tell them how much I miss them .. but I dont do anything. I just stand like that and look at them. I just stare.. I dont even want to question them.. but somehow I restrict myself and not to make fool out of me.

Its not like I dont love them or I dont have feelings for them. But it just overwhelms me to see them.. just a glance at them makes me weak. vulnerable enough to open my wounds. Let them get inside my heart and get ripped again. I can't bear it.


I give them a small smile and tell myself not to react .. Its hard very hard.. i gulp down all my feelings. But one will never understand how much I'm going through.. what a turmoil!!

Its better sometimes to be mystery.. let them resolve 😉😆 ..Mystery is always beautiful

Is that could be the reason for Maan being silent .. didnt know how to approach her?
I cant approach people.. I dont know how they react, so I feel better to be quite and let them do all talking.. He uttered her name.. but he dont know..

Or may be he is too absorbed in her presence that he didnt feel like disturb the moment.

I like this way.. way too natural. Casual.. 😊 simple.

"If you'll excuse me now, I need to be going home." I took a step away from him without turning around but he made me pause.

"I can drop you off." The words blurt out of his mouth as if he had been waiting for me to find my escape to put forth his offer. There was a polite smile on his face.


May be he just waiting for her to put forth.. waiting for her escape .. and then say which he wants to. This makes me smile.. I feel like it is happening in front of my eyes and i'm witnessing the most cutest pair and their conversation..

I quickly made up an excuse to turn him down. "I am actually headed for some grocery shopping before going home. Thanks for your offer, though." I returned his polite smile before readying to walk away but he stopped me again.

"I can take you there." His voice was small this time, as if unsure of himself this time. I looked towards his face. "I mean, I was just out for a drive to nowhere in specific so I can take you where you wish to go. Helping out a frie-" he broke off mid-sentence and looked at me before clearing his throat and continuing, "an acquaintance is better than spending an aimless day on the roads, isn't it?" This time, the smile which came to his lips was more than just polite because it touched his eyes.

😆 Grocery?? Seriously?? I would have said something really stupid.. may be I would say I'm heading towards office? or a friend? I dont know.. 😆

Maan.. 😃 this ma(a)n is making me fall in love with him and his words/gestures from past few days.. or may be an year, that time when he has forgiven her for her sake..
Friend.. The way he considers geet and concerned about her..
How can one identify that smile touched the eyes? I wonder how.. may be it is something in us that makes it look like one? Why, I love how in every aspect there is just too much of likeness!!

Is Geet waiting for him to smile.. Does she yearn? I dont know why I feel that she just needed to see his smile .. to see him smile more than anything.

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies."
Maan and Geet are friends and then they are.. ahem ahem. 😆 That single soul is what tying them.. making them understand each other better.. may be not now.. but in long period this is what happens.. ek jaan do jism mein 😆 My hindi is crap. excuse me.


This song is totally for M&G.. You need to listen.. Agar tum saath ho 😉

Maan is actually being normal..and quite decent .. its very nice to see him this way.. Like the old maan...who is carefree.and caring as always...

As I saw his eyes crinkle at the edges, I was reminded of times gone by, when his smile was infectious, 😃😆when we both were young and to some extent, carefree, and when we were friends, not just acquaintances as we were now. Before the rush of memories long forgotten could make me nostalgic, I shut my eyes, took a deep breath and opened them back again. Maan was holding the door of his car open for me now. "Shall we?" I could not refuse him then.

I love it when he says helping out a fri- ..acquaintances 😳 this shows how much he understands geet and not to force her something for which she is not ready to accept.

The way he is making her feel .. my heart goes out for him... He is right infront of you again to open up.. to be with you.. to spend sometime with his old frnd whom he just lost and found. He is making his way to your heart.. allow him. Let him Heal you...absorb the pain.. Let it go.

Some people need that push.. until and unless we show them the path.. and give an assurance ,they wont come forward nor leap for anything. Even for their own benefit.
Geet is one person who guards herself now more than anything..

Someone has to let her know that she can let her feelings flow... No one is going to hurt.. But that is very difficult for someone like her. Just because she said No to Maan he has felt that she has rejected him and took the pain to a whole new level..
Will she be able to open up and let her emotions flow and let Maan know what does she feel for him? He has a right to know cause he has just forgiven you..

everything about their conversation is 😃

He was doing everything as if it were the most natural thing to do but I kept wondering why he was being so chivalrous.

We gurls always doubt men's intentions ..No wonder when guys complain about it.. 😆😆

If he is not concerned then we complain that he is not bothered..but when he chivalrous we complain why he is being soo nice? 😆😆 Damn!!!

His chivalrous behavior was not going down too well with me for the time being so I needed to get away from him to get my thoughts straight.

😆The escape route.. to get away from the person. This this is my way.😆 I get away from the person to sort my thoughts.. to control my emotions.. and get things straight. But it always doesnt help.. you need to spend some more time with the person to know why and their change in behaviour.. but in this case.. Maan being nice is something vexing something inside her or something he just ignited?? 😆.. oh man. I know how Geet must be feeling.. Butterflies!! 😉😆

There were things running in my mind and I could not suppress them any more. I had to think them through. The day had been quite a mixture of emotions for me. On one hand, the resurfacing of unwanted memories of the hospital made me numb, while on the other hand, I felt extremely happy for Vyan and his decision to take his relationship with Kittu to the next level. Meeting Maan, though, was a completely different scenario and the emotions I felt then varied greatly. Suddenly feeling the need of fresh air, I sprang up from the sofa and made my way to the balcony which faced the front of the building.
Maan was still there, still talking on the phone, using his hands to express what he was saying.

Obviously.. Too much to take for a day!! She needs to sort it out..

Maan was still there?? 😲 😆😆 He must be knowing that this gal whom he just made her go thru hell 😆 by being nice and decent.. must come out to balcony to breathe properly !! fresh air.. deep breaths.. 😃😆

Maan is indeed an enigma.. One cannot get over a person like him. 😳

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wB6DhTRxO8Y - I recommend this one.. for this beautiful miracle.. Jaane tu ya jaane na BGM!!

"The reason it hurts so much to separate is because our souls are connected."

"Words are a pretext. It is the inner bond that draws one person to another, not words."

Finally ... there is so much to say..so much to analyze.. but I would not to say more and spoil the feel...

Did I say ever this to you that your words and incidents are so close to reality and that is the reason I connect to Geet and Maan on some level. Why I feel so much to see them parted.

Oops!! Again I ended up writing a longgg comment 😆 Sorry for my blabber!! 😛

Thank you soo much!! 😳 🤗

Edited by KittuPratzz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Sheen! Kaisi ho?
Sorry about disappearing and not updating... Been busy with stuff lately. Kal bhayya ki engagement ke liye Lahore jaana hai 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Hi Sheen! Kaisi ho?

Sorry about disappearing and not updating... Been busy with stuff lately. Kal bhayya ki engagement ke liye Lahore jaana hai 😃


Congrats😃
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Originally posted by: mayyo

Hi Sheen! Kaisi ho?

Sorry about disappearing and not updating... Been busy with stuff lately. Kal bhayya ki engagement ke liye Lahore jaana hai 😃


Arey waah that's some awesome news. Congratulations!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
b party sharty khatam hui hai toh hummein bhi kuch milega kya?
ya wohi!
Babaji ka thullu😲
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Originally posted by: mayyo

Hi Sheen! Kaisi ho?

Sorry about disappearing and not updating... Been busy with stuff lately. Kal bhayya ki engagement ke liye Lahore jaana hai 😃


Masha Allah that's awesome news 😃
How's the event ? wapas ajao ab is dunya me 😆
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Originally posted by: dqno1

Hospitals and the memories associated with them had never been pleasant for me. They chilled me deep within my spine and sent me into a state of inertia.
I remembered what it felt like, or rather, I remembered the feeling of nothingness which had filled me then. It had felt like life was over for me, that I did not deserve to live.


Spot on!

The nothingness she felt, the depression was described perfectly. How does one get past this? Especially her parents. The argument with Maan did not help either.
Some wounds can never be healed. Time makes you accustomed to them, but you still hurt...

I could not live with the burden of being responsible for the demise of three lives... Three... The number had only increased a night before I was hospitalised. It was one of the darkest nights of my life, a night when the storm and the rain had been the wildest, yet it had been nothing as compared to the storm which had raged within me, the storm which had led me straight to a hospital bed with an added burden of grief on my already tired shoulders.


His sudden appearance had scared me


He must have felt like a stranger for her to be so scared. His anger, his hurt lashing her when she least expected it.
Stranger he was to her. The Maan she knew wouldn't have done that.

It had been a combination of the words he had spoken and the solemnity etched on his face which had worked like a magic spell in my recovery.

It had felt to me like Maan had given me the most precious thing which was humanly possible.


She needed his words; the only thing he could give her.

Redemption is one of the most intriguing thing for me. I love stories where characters have a change in their lives, where something big happens and they turn themselves around.

I remember Devi had written Dev's character like that and upto now it is one of my favorite Dev's ever.

There is an eternal hope that someone will right the wrongs that they have committed.

And yet here is our fence dwelling Geet again😲 wondering who he is to forgive her. I agree with her but seriously she drives me crazy because she herself has two minds about everything.
Exactly. Her uncertainty always bringsay her on crossroads. We can only hope she can choose the right path!

Helping out a frie-" he broke off mid-sentence and looked at me before clearing his throat and continuing, "an acquaintance is better than spending an aimless day on the roads, isn't it?"

Mr. Maan is redefining the relationship ❤️ I have to love that he never gives up. Maybe it is eternal optimism on my part or he could simply be checking up on her because Raya is away but my dreamy brain refuses to accept it.
Haha! I don't quite blame you for being jaded towards everything he does!

As I saw his eyes crinkle at the edges, I was reminded of times gone by, when his smile was infectious.
Already struggling to control my emotions, the musky scent of Maan's perfume which filled the car did no good.
Had he really moved ahead in life? Did he really start afresh and forget all those bad memories? "What should I do if he has moved on?"


Awareness at last😃

Yes Geet what would you do if he has moved on? 😃

Alas it is not to be. He is a glutton for punishment.

I wish it was the opposite and you had to work really hard to get love in your life simply because you would treasure it more.

This Geet however is not bold enough to take the chance.

Even now she is hiding away from him.

Will she take the Golden Ticket?

Do it!!

Everyone deserves happiness. Even you, especially


Loved the update Mari.
And I love the way you highlight points in a way which makes me see things in a newer perspective! 🤗
Can't believe I am so biased but I am 😃 and not ashamed of it either.
😆

Edited by mayyo - 9 years ago

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