New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

same here ami wo pammi ne kaam hi aisa kiya h k uska band bajane ka mann hota h...i just hate her

feelings r mutual dear but don't worry iss pammi ka b no. Ayega n tab mai ise din me taare dikhaungi

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Awesome update...
Bahut achhi tarha se likha gaya hai...Geet ki dairy ka plan bahut hi achha hai...Geet ne jo Saha hai ab Maan ko sab pata chalega...aaj woh bhi wahi se gujar raha hai jaha ek din Geet khadi thi...aisa lagta hai ki hum padhte hi jaye aur aap bas likhti jaye...update kaha khatam ho gaya pata hi nahi chala...next update jaldi dena...plz

thanx alott m glad u liked it

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Wow that was long very long & awesome update
Thanks
Liked how maan learned l abt geets pain 👏

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Nyc

Its been 6 month since maan is searching for geet

but i hv 1 question...u hv to stay separately for 6 months for divorce na?
4 months were already done...then the divorce must hv happened by now na?
then why didnt they meet after the 6th month for the final hearing?

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Zariya

@zariya123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

read the old story

but ur story has more realistic points

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Painful part :(
Pained for geet only ok?? :|
Maan...huh he deserves this loneliness only
Don't let him find geet so soon :|
Show him Another dead end -_-

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

its just so awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
liked the idea of dairy as now maan knw how badly he hurt geet tht she decided to take divorce n maan completely shattered all her dreams, expectation n her love too

maan said tht he didn't knw to express his feelings n thoughts but at least he can stop his mother when she taunt geet n kuch bol nahi sakta tha toh geet ko jane se toh rok hi sakta tha na😡 but nahi roka n after realizing his mistake geet hi nahi hai use maaf karne ke liye
you know i just loved the angle you r thinking n taking to this story👏👏😉

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: muskanp
Wow that was long very long & awesome update
Thanks
Liked how maan learned l abt geets pain 👏

thanx alott di

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: rashi_jain
Nyc

Its been 6 month since maan is searching for geet

but i hv 1 question...u hv to stay separately for 6 months for divorce na?
4 months were already done...then the divorce must hv happened by now na?
then why didnt they meet after the 6th month for the final hearing?

thanx n ur quesn will b answered in upcoming updates,u ll have to wait a lil to knw about what happened to there divorce

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: SHIK.LOVMAANEET

<div align="center">its just so awesome👏
liked the idea of dairy as now maan knw how badly he hurt geet tht she decided to take divorce n maan completely shattered all her dreams, expectation n her love too

maan said tht he didn't knw to express his feelings n thoughts but at least he can stop his mother when she taunt geet n kuch bol nahi sakta tha toh geet ko jane se toh rok hi sakta tha na😡 but nahi roka n after realizing his mistake geet hi nahi hai use maaf karne ke liye
you know i just loved the angle you r thinking n taking to this story👏👏😉
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thankuuu sooo much m soo glad that u all r liking it