MG ff Mere papa ki dulhan part 18 on 92

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

CS
excellent...
liked the way its said...
cont soon dear...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

congrats on ur first FF! Lovely cs! fab prologue! superb start! update soon! Well written

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icskwt

@icskwt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

congrates fariya for ur writing...

nice start...

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

😆Lovely update

maan Mai kitna attitude hai yaar.😉

prerna is sweet bt naughty.

wo hungama karne wali ladki jarur hi hamari geet hai.

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful start dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

updates !!!!!!!!!!!!

part 1 was hilarous prerna and dadi scene 😆😆

mujhe bhi aisi maan hi pasand hai(international wala 😉 🤣)

maan love prerna alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but maan keep space for geet also ...she will be coming 😛 😉😆

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Part 2

it was funny too!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

enjoyed reading it dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️

Oye ye line kya tha???????????? ki ladkiya khud mauka deti hai chedne ka!!!!!!!! 😲 😡

tum nai piti tho i will beat maan !!!!!!!!!! 😡 😆 how could he say when his own daughter is there 😡

Eagerly waiting for next dear!!!!!!!!!!!

Do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uma...

P.S- I know u r feeling nervous dear...i can feel ur tention in writing but to tell u truth u r writing very nice...there is no need to feel nervous or bad k...ur r giving us someting a story ...then y the heck u should feel nervous re...goli maar usko aur bindass hoke likho k...😛 😉 😆

Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

nice part daai nd pari r big devils

maan ki meetng re schedule im sure dat chudel sasha hv did it nd poor assisstant of maan got fird

koi nahi abhi geet aayegi aur sabka band baajegi waitng 4 d nxt part😃

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

For this first and new FF

Lovely start

Prerna is so cute

Loved prerna-dadi-nakul part so much

Maan is full of anger and attitude

Loved geet,s entry

Loving ur first attempt,atleast u r trying 'Mujhe tu ye bhi nahi aata"

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hemangigazal

@hemangigazal

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

awesome story

loved prena she is so cute

lolz dadi crime in partner

nakul bechara

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achu66

@achu66

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Congrats dear for the new story
Wonderful updates ... Loved it
Prerna is do cute and our own chatter box is super cute
Dadi, Prerna and nakul are partners in crime...poor maan uska kya haal hoga in teenoke saamne
Yeh slap kisko mil raha hain... Waiting to know that
Waiting for more updates