MG ff Mere papa ki dulhan part 18 on 92

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banner by gunjar
and sketch of maaneet
by gunjar sis please look in banne
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prologue

hi i am parena singh khurana
my age is 7 year old
iam my dada pari
my dada love me
i have one sexy dadi
actualy not dadi sheis my dada dadi
when i was born my mom is died ohhh dont get sad
dadi khtey hai achey log ko babji k paas jaldi jana hota hai
dekho bath bath mein mein bhool gye mein q apna intro de rahi hoo
ek secret bolo kisi ko batna math ha me my dadi our finding
MERA PAPA KI DULHAN
SOUND GOOD NA abhi k lia itna hi baki batey bad mein ur parena is sleepy naa
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hi all this not my story
don't get confused it is
written by fariya20
but she have some technical
problem so she cant update new story
or buddy so

and she have fear also
that how it will you all react
but i know she have that spa-rake
so just boost her confidence and welcome new
writer on Maaneet ff


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index

part 1 to 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=25

part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=33


part 8
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=37

part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=44

part 10
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=50

part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=56

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92?pn=57

part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4147546/mg-ff-mere-papa-ki-dulhan-part-18-on-92

pari teach me this


part 14


part 15


part 16 - 80

part 17- 85

part 18 - 92

part 19 - 96

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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characters


first cute princess of MSK PREANA SINGH KHURNA



iske barey mein kiya bato angry like dad aur shararat aur masumiyat ka packet hai




SAVITTERI DEVI SINGH KHURANA aka dadi aka par dadi aka sexy partner in crime of parena




dadi k liya parena aur maan unki zindagi hai parena ki har wish puri karti hai but she know the limit too har generation ko samjti hai reti rawaj k sath new tredation ko bhi acept karti hai agar us mein nuksan na ho belive in humanity down to earth





MAAN SINGH KHURANA




apna gabroo jawan girls drol over mat karo he has a kid 😆
MSK har jeez bardasht kar sakta hai par do chez nahi apni dadi ka jhuka howa sir aur prena ki ankhoo mein ansoo




Disha singh khurana

late wife of msk n mother of prena (some past tell later )



nakul


bhi hai he is also a partner in crim of dadi n pari uff bechara akhir mein maan ki scolding is miltey most loyal men of dadi think maan as his child



geet handa



orphan
complete her education from scholarship very intelligent iski sirf do borai hai bhut bolti hai aur chat chotri hai iska bus haley toh sirf golgappey kha k zinda rah ley (meri tarha)
full of life iska funda hai she is not alone arey puri duniya uski family hai toh kha say hoi alone





shanta tai landlord of geet



zuban jaise karela par dil jaise mom never show her love toward any one jab say unkey betey use chod k videsh mein settle hoi tab say she think agar yeh ab kissi ko pyar show karey gye toh sab chor k chaley jai gye
geet inki fav hai nooo not coz of her nature coz she never give time pai rent soo nok jhok both care each other ajeeb rishta hai inka geet say maa beti ka khao ya dost ka ya phir karaydar aur malik makan ka


adi pinky sasha tasha are same as serial kuch aur bhi hai woh bad mein

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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hi to every one u all know me as reader i am big fan like u all i am also a big fan of maaneet n when geet end i was very upset socha nahi tha na kabhi end bhi hoga phir i got link of IF here i found soo many stories on maaneet muje toh ff ka matlab bhi nahi pata tha jab mein yaha aai I know i am dum kiya karo brain tortoise ki speed say bhi slow hai 😆
itna sarey writer ki stories read ki muskan ,tichmg ,lakshmi di zoha priya mahimaan aka my devil pooja n umma disha vrinda di desigirl lot more itna sarey nam hai lete pages fill hojai gye par update k badley aur phir mujko jotey chupal mahi ka k is liya res karwaya tha
u all my inspiration so herre is my story ka pehla part waise iam very confuse so bear me plz

Note : i am not professional writer when ever i learn i learn this form if any scene is resemble to any writer story plzz tel me i will remove it soon
PART 1

morning 7 30 here are our princess n doll of dada sleeping peace fully in a princess bed she love Disney princess so her room full of disney cartoon character n toys
when door sound clink she open her eyes

perena : dadi let me sleep plzz i dont wana wake up

dadi : princess get up it late phir hume mat kahiya ga k apne ape dad ko wish nahi kiya unka office jane say pehley u know na today is the big day for ur dad

thuddd
ohhh no
how i late today dadi dada best day n iam late no way dadi ap jaldi nahi a saktey the
dadi was 😲 (ek toh khud late uthi us par muje hi uff maan teri beti )😡
dadi back with her thought pari came from wash room pari voice dadi kiya kar rahe ho DK (dilip kumar ) k samney bad mein dekhna 😳😆 abhi chalo🤣 aj kal k bachey did dadi blush

hear it is the most charming n handsome men maan singh khurana waitng for his princess wish world wait for him his one look with out appionment he is not meeting any one not even prisedent (thoda zyada horaha par mujko ase wala maan pasand hai )
today is the big day maan got inter national award for best business men in world he is the asset of natoin sharp minded no one beat him
( bhut tareef hogai )
dadaddd a she is running like a marathon stop princess u get hurt dhere chali dehan say satir hai
but no heed on dadi word
maan smile to see her princess she came close to him maan bend
tightly hug maan dad all the best dad u rock it my dad is best ever
yep princess ur dad is best maan said
Prena dad i am so happy n she start her non stop talking (maan future mein geet ko handle karna asan hoga lol)
he is admire his princess n her non stop talk
dadi take care maan all the best

maan went for function he is not allow prena to acampany him coz of securty reason

here dadi n prena
dadi soo pari tell me why u came back from ur camping

pari is liitle bit nervouse of dadi talk but cam her slef
pari ; dadi bola toh ap ko papa ko itna bara award mil raha hai how can i saty there (she went for camping but came back there is reason tell in other part )

dadi know saome thing fishy she never talk maan papa only when kuch karbar hoo
reamin quite coz when pari is back from camp she is lost some where a sad ness in her eyes which dadi never saw before
dont want to ask more so change the topic

dadi : tell me what sharat you did ? there that u cam back huuuh 😆 ask little mishchifes tath made pari angry 😡

pari: ohhh dadi u think iam sharati no way dadi iam not haa wase bhi waha mein kiya kiya bus ek ladki k bal mein chew gum chupkey humrey trainer ki shoes laises ko ek sath tie kiya aur pure camp mein frog chud deya sab lag bhag nea lagey
itna hi toh kiya bas aur kiya kiya mein a haa is ey sharati kahey gey ap

dadi 😲 😲😲 😲

pari kiya howa dadi ap muko asey q dekh rahe hoo jaldi chalo na bhok lagi hai
they go for break fast
prena mind satrt to next sharat

after some time
she is siting her in room talking to disha pic
perna mom aj toh bach gey warna dadi nai toh incurey kar laini thi camp ki
I miss u mom 😭
plz kanaa ji take care of my mom daddo said na she is taking care all but not her slef
(she is hobby to talking with god
hehehehe mein nai geet ki adat isko dedi akhi maa bati ek jasi hoti hai )

dadi came to her room she wipe her tear dont let dadi saw them
hmm toh bateye kiya irade hai ab ap k

prena 🤔 dadi itna time hogya nakul kaka ko stya nahi

hum ei bhi yeh soch rahai they itna time hogya kuch sahrat toh karni chahai ( bachey toh bachey dadi bhi poor nakul)


here in kitchen nakul prepare lunch both came their nakul saw them n satrt thinking
NAku; yeh dono ek sath zaror karbar hai nahul aj teri shamat tai hai 😕

dadi nakul kiya bana rahi hoo lunch mein
nakul : dadi ap ki liya veg soup with out spice n baby k liya chicken karahai n parathey

nahi bilkul bhi nahi hum nahi kahi gye woh phika khana making yack face dadi refuse pari gegile to saw dadi antic
preana mumer drama queen dadi

Nakul : dadi ap ko mera zinda rahne acha nahi lagta toh bol do mein kudkushi kar loga par maan baba k hathoo nahi maro ga 😭
unhoo nai sakti say mana kiya
dadi interp between

Dadi naul ap humarai liya kam kartey hai ya maan k liya

NAkul dadi je mein apki har bath mano ga par yeh wali nahi plzz dadi jee maan baba mujko mar delay gey agar unko pata chala k ap nai spice food khay hai
making cry face
Dadi nakul hum nai khe diya so keh diya hum nahi kahi gey aur wasey bhi aj maan lunch par nahi hon gey toh fikar kar nai ki zarorat nahi

prena hai na nakul kaka kheney do dadi ko aj toh woh bhi celebration ka day hai dada ko itna bara award mila hai toh plzzz she said soo much cuty n innocently

NAkul st : baby itni sweet bol rahi hai nakul kuch karbar hai mat ai unk batoom mein warna toh jnata hai kiya hoga he is thinking

prena came close to him yell in his ear nakul kaka apni girl friend k sapney dekna bad kar

TO BE CONTINUED



here is the first part thoda small hai i know kiya hai na mein thoda nervous hoo scen put kar na itna muskil hota hai boss
hope u all like my finger cross if get time next jaldi mil jai ga

ps note my mamu phopo aka bua is very ill plzz pray for them




Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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HI to all big wala thank you for liking

NOTE
Am not a professional writer I learn every thing here so any one thing that my story n scen are match with any of writer plzz tel me i lwill remove it
plzz tell my fault n my lacking too if any thing it not good say it open ly my english is very bad bear my english
sorry in advance

PART 2

maan in car working on lappy his mob ring
he recived his cal it was from client

client GM mr khurana
maan good morning mr chopra
client mr kurna mein nai ap ko thank you kheney k liya phone kiya tha
maan knot his brows 'he continue
client ap nai itna short notice mein humri next week honey wali meeting re shedule kar k aj lunch mein rakh li us kliya thank you
maan body stiff but he said it ok mr chopra not a big deal
client thank you mr khurana n congrats for award u are the best n u proved all the time
Maan yes mr chopra msk is the best he said with so much proud any thinh else mr chopra
client nomr khurana nothing more wase bhi hum lunch mein toh mil hi rahai hai baki detail hum wah discus kar le gai
Maan ok bye mr chopra he said with rudness cut the call
cleint st he is so rud but awesome B men

MAAN driver kadi tezz chaloa he order angrly
driver yes sir he spped up th e car n miss call some one
they reach KC maan step out from car his BGS follow him ( back ground mein msk ka entyr music )
he inside the lift n close it
in side office every one run for his or her life coz maan mood is off n no one want today to lose their job ( shock how they know his mood hehehhe simple driver miss bell watch men who ring the siren it mean maan mood are off yeh idea geetika mein tha lol mein yaha use kiya lakhsmi di miss her😭😭😭)
maan lift stop on his florr every one satnd up n wish him GM
but he answer nobody (kitna bow kahey aga )

Maan adi sahsha came to my cabin in 10 minutes

yes sir both said
he left from there n went inside his cabin
MAAN came to my cabin right now he called his sect
a girls wear short dress came his cabin
girl u called me sir

Maan yes i called u agai he said with greeth hi s teeth now tell me i n what timming my meeting with mr chopra
listen this girl relax it normal he ask about meeting
girl smile foolishy sir next week hai apki meeting
maan bang his hand with his desk n stood up
MAAN ohh really my meeting with mr chopra is next week right
girl jee sir she is sweating to see him angry his red eyes maan close his eyes n cam himself
Maan ohh really he smile n said you i type some thing for you specially for you
Girl St sir nai mery liya apna hatho say leter type kiya wow i am dreaming she pinch er self ohhc
MAAN loo take this
GIRl smile n take it n open
she was 😭

sirrr yeehhh kiyayaya i mean yehh toh mera teerrrminnation letrer
Maan q tumhai pasaan nahi aya hmm ab tum aram say ghar betho aur mu par drool over karo hah
girl nnanahi saiiir mein ra mistake
maan tum hai yeh bhi nahi pata tumhari galti kya hai right girl noded
it makes him made he shout
maan zindagi mein pehli bar msk ko kisi clent nai uski meeting re schedule hojaina k braye mein batya hai aj pehli bar msk ko apni meeting k re schedule hone ka nahi pata aur tum hari himmat kaise hoi meri meeting lunch time mein raknaey ki mein nai tum hai apni secartery is liya nahi naya k tum muj par drol over karo kam kar nai k bajai
girl sir mein meeting nahi rakhiii siirrr plzz mein ap ko kabhi dekhoo ge nahi suchi (yeh abhi bhi dekney ki bath kar rahi hai kam iska sasur karey ga)
sir give me last chance plzzz
maan msk ki dic mein galti ki mafi nahi is get out of my cabin right now
out side cabin some staff bechari n other acha howa chali gye mk k itna close thi
she came out cryinggg
inside maan water gulp down in one goo to cool him self adi sasha knck
maan came in
they came n stand infront of him see his gussa adi sweating n sahsha saw him n roll her eyes like what
Maan Adi meri ek new sect ka intezam karo jaldi ur dehan rahai is bar agar meri sectery nai kam kar nai k badley muj par drol over kiya toh tum hari kheer nahi
Adi jejej sir
MAAN sahhsa mombai project k blue print ka ha hai mein nai tum hai kal khat tha aur bhi tak waoh meri desk par nahi aaye
sasha i will give u in evening sir
maan what sasha what is this i never expect this from u how can u be soo un profesanl
sasha mk actualy ermm my asist us nai meri morey desingn ko kharb kar diya jis ki wajah say muje dobra bana par is lya late hogya puting her fault in other head her fav hobby chudail kahi ki
Maan i dont care sasha what happen but i want the file on my dsk befor lunch
sahsha ok mk i will never dispoint u not today
Maan i know sahsa but remmeber msk ko dis POINT kar nai ka Anjam tum janti hoo
Adi HEheheheeh maan adiii adi sorrry sir
sahash is angry to hear this but keep mum n give seductive smile n left
sahsa chudail apni sab par hukam chalati hai maan ki absence mein maan par huge crush hai but she is loyal empolye of maan he trust her smart hai good architecture in KC
Adi chal ab yeh bata itn a gussa q hai jawaala mukhi ki tharha (😲😲 yeh adi hi hai abhi thodi dear pehle toh mein mein kar raha tha)

MAAn sab ka sab laprwah hai sarey nomenai hai mer office aur toh poch raha hai k mein angry q hoo
Adi chukle maan relax waht happen
maan that stupi d sect us nai meri meeting re sehcdule kar k lunch time mein kar di how dare she she know it every thing but nahi
Adi ohhh toh toh us bath par gussa hai maan meeting mein nai re schedule ki hai mr chopra ko urgent london jana tha unk i beti ka accident hogya hai aur is meeting ko woh chod nahi saktey they it important so i re schedule it
Maan what u Adi u know it that i cant go at lunch time phir bhi
Adi I Konw aur mein ause bhi bata diya hai woh maan gye hai ( kon mangye hai maan ki life mein ko agya hai )

MAan ya ohh i see tabi koi phone nhai aya uska i will see both of u when i am back n now go to wrok office mein bhut kam hai

Adi chala jao ga pekhley apne dost ko hug to kar nai de he came close n give atight hug congrats iam soo happy u did it itn a bara award mila tuje he said with chocked maan chukele to see him emotional
ADI left hand of maan his jigree dost his bro evry thing adi know maan betre then evry one he study maan but not took any favor from maan he is man of morals

Maan acha ab chal meri sucess par emoitnal aur senty mat hoo adi kon belive kar ga men ho kar ro rahia hai
Adi o shape man ro nahi saktey yeh kon sa concept hai aur waise yeh khushi k ansoo hai samjah
Maan ok ok wase how u make her undertsand huh
adi 😃😃😃 secret hai nahi bato ga

maan ok go back to ur work

Adi oook siiririr

he left to save him self coz he know if he satnd there maan will caught him
maan sit his chair n start his work again after some times sahsa came in his cabin
Sasha mk ur file maan take the file said her to goo
he complete his work n left for meeting

his car stop on raod what happen driver he aked
pata nahi sir dketa hoo
there is jam on rad his drivr ask some one
what happen itna crowd q hai
men arey kisi ladkey nai ek ladki ko chad diya aur woh ladki
maan call his driver what happen
driver kis ladki ko ladkey nai batameezy ki hai ayr ab woh ladki nahi road jam kar diay hai
it ok driver rout change karo he told him driver again sat in care change the rout
maan st yeh ladkiya bhi na pehla khud lako ko chance deti hai chednai ka (😡😡 yeh mera hath say pita ga )
he saw some girl back who cluch boy coler n beat him
stupid girl he said sab ko preshan kar diya (😭me )

back to road

kutey kamina ullu k phtey gahde teri itni himat k toh muje chedey haahha
boy sister maaf kar do aj k bad apni wife ko bhi touch nahi karo ga 😲😭😆
girl tuje chodo tuje tu jaise ladko ki wajha say hum ladiya ghar say nahi nikalne say darti hai agar tuje chod diya na to baki bhi teri tarha ksii ko chede gye rok aj mein tear kya hashar karti hoo
slpap dishoppp slap


to be continue

so this this secon d part plzz tell me how it is n plzz agar kisi k pas koi sugestion hai welcome plzz tell me finger cross
waitng for ur response

jinho nai first part nahi read kiya plzz woh bhi read kro plzzz me waitngg g

🤗this for my devil n pooja who help me in pm



Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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THank you all 🤗

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sorry in advance
Part 3
Back to road
kutey kamina ullu gahdey teri itni k toh muje chedai hah 😡
BOY sory sis aj k bad apni wife tak ko nahi chedo ga maaf kardo 😭
Girl maaf kardo tuje tum jaisey ladko ki wajha say hum ladkiya ghar say darti hai tuje chudiya na baki bhi teri tarha dosri ladkiyoo k chedye gye tera toh mein woh hasar karo ge ruk slap tissh dishaaam one more n then some one call police they reach on spot n try to realise boy from girl hold chudo badamji hum samhal legai ab
Girl bari jaldi agai 😡😆 Police men madam je chodo law ko hand mein mat samjehe ( wah je ab law yad arha hai inko ) Other passenger chudo beta je ab police agai hai na chu do
Girl take along breath n remove her hands from his coler jao usko lakar
a boy came n give her water
Boy di shant ho jao aur yeh thanda pani drink karo she takethe glass n glap in one go
Boy diii aram sayy kya kar rahi ho galey mein phanda aji ga she smile to his care for her
GIrl kuch nahi honda chutoo aur tu suna kya hal hai saub thek hai na
Boy sab thek hai par apko kya howa
Girl muko kya hona hai main toh wase ki wasi hoo acha abhi mein chalti hoo kam hai talk u later
Boy ok boy see u soon evry one gap them like who they are n girl little minut before she is beat a boy like a devil now talk with a boy like angel
gilr kiss chuto on chicks n left from there to her destination ( other boy kash mein uski jaga hota 😡 abhi ek ki dhulai say kuch learn nahi kiya )

IN car maan think about the girl his POV
kiya zarorat thi us ladki ko asy sab k samnai us ladkey ko pitnay ki mana k us ladkey nai galti ki par usey pitna k badaly woh usey police k hawley bhi toh karsakti hai asey ladkey kitna khatarnak hosak tey hai aur woh ladki uska to roz ka ana jaana hoga bus mein agar us ladkey nai badla liya toh 😡 aur usy nuksaan phuchya toh ladkiya bhi na dimag say kam leti nahi (😡 yeh toh bezti kiya jaraha hai ) chod maan toh q us k bare mein soch raha hai he snap his thinking n reach meeting venue took his call n call some one
other side hello
Maan hello princess
PAri hello dada ap kase hoo apki meeting hogai aur ap nai apni sect ko nikal diya n she bite her tongue cover reciver yeh kiya bol diya pari toh nai maan other side get shock to listen this she remove her hand bye papa mein rakti hoo ha ap apni meeting attend karo seee u
maan said pari what u said before😳
Pari kuch bhi toh nahi papa mein ani kya kha
Maan pari do you know u cant make fool pari cut him said Pari yayay no one make fool msk i know dada woh mujko nahi achi lagti thi 😔 woh apko asey dekti thi jaise kha jai ge maan chukle to hear her crib
Maan pari asi bath thi PARI think maan angry on her
Pari soor this time maan cut her said agar nahi pasand thi toh ap dada kp pehley bolety dada usko pehey hi nikal deta Pari get surprize to listen this
Pari suchi dada u not angry on me
MAAn y i will angry aur woh bhi apni pari par kabhi nahi par ha dada yeh jana chatey hai k ap ki adi chachu nai pari ko manaya kaise (maan take his meals with pari he love to sahre his eating time with pari that why he get angry to listen about his meeting at lunch timing ) aur ha apkey pechey jo dadi kahdi hai un say kahye ga k dada bhely hi lunch unk sath na karey par dadi wohi veg soup hi la gi lunch mein samjhi
Dadi 😭 st bhagwan hum nai ap say itna intelligent pota nahi manga tha pari laughe to see her complaining face n said kuch nahi hoskta ab partetey bhool jaiye😉
MAan pari tell me beta
pari dada zayada nahi but he promise me that he will take me for outing n choclate n doll house story books meri doll k liya dresses icecream maan mouth wide n start to curse adi i kill u adi for spiol her so much (lol yeh spoiling ki batey kar raha hai )n more her list is going n going but he stop her n said ok pari talk u later dada ki meeting hai unko jana hai bye luv u see u in the evening
pAri by dada ummmah n call end maan meet with mr chopra n they start their meeting

In km
hum nahi khai gye yeh veg soup aur yeh kachdi did i tell u that maan call nakul n said to make kachidi for dadi heheheh
nAkul kah lejai dadi je ab koi faida nahi maan baba ko patchal gya hai toh yeh hi kah lejiya
Pari ha dadi kah lejiya
Dadi ap toh chup rahi ye ap nai hi kahatha dadi today dada is out he is not came for lunch
PAri toh dada kiya luch pai arahi hai nahi na mein nai yeh thodi kha tha k dada apki food ka BGs nahi karai gey
Dadi mumrer dal badloo
Pari hear it dadi is mein meri kya galti k mery dada aur apkey pota itna intelligent hai 😃😉 aur waise bhi aj evening celebration toh baki naa so chil abhi k lia yeh eat karlo
DAdi na baba na ab hum apki batoo mein nahi aai gey

TO BE CONTINUE
so here is next part every one want who is the girl i will tell next update tab tak k liya bear me n think who that girl 😃 i konw yeh short update hai light prob lem kar rahi hai buht it is third time i type again jab bhi half type hota light chali jati 😡 i liya chuto wala updat



Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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THANK YOU ALL WHO LIKE MY WORK 🤗
NOTE
I am not professional writer learn every thing from here ,If any one think my work Matched with any writer tell me I will remove soon
plz tell my fault n my lacking too if any thing is not good tell openly MY English😆
is not good so bear my English
sorry in Advance

PART 4

Tonight is the big event @ HOTEL PARADISE (name is my imagine ) Evry Business Men n Media are presnt in this event to watched MSK live (arey itna bizzy hai yaar msk usko dekna bhi muskil hi nahi namumkin hai 😉) It is rare Scene for them to see him with the Pristigece award (jealouse hai sab k sab under ki bath) It a live telicast show evry one watch it at their home

Reporter from XY : jasie k ap log jantey hai aj sham world best Business men award jo k MSk ko mila hai uski mein evnt hai sab ko be sabri say intezar hai Mr msk ki arival ka Msk young dynamic Business men evry teenager made him his mentor he is Proud of our country he will be here in some moment

MSk arrived at hotel media run to catch him he step out from his car his BGS cover him

Reporter xy : sir ap ko itna bada award mila hai isk barey mein kuch how u feel

Next one : sir ap iska credite kisey dena chatey hai

Next one : we hear that u got girl friend ask siilly query

they satrted their question back maan BGS cover he reached the main hall n give answer to them

MAAN : Ap ko ap sarey awalo k jawab bad mein mil jai gey plz let move from the hall i will Press confrence n give my veiws there Excuse
HE move from there

IN KM dadi PARI n all watching him dadi felt so proud to watched maan ki sucess she is emotional pari saw her

PARI : mery dada kitna handsome hai na

DAdi in emotinal terence said ha beta n then realise what she said what
Pari Laugh

DADI : pari beta apko nahi lagta ap kuch zyada bol rahai hoo 😡

PARI : awww dadi mein aisa kiya bola ab mere dada handsome hai toh handsome hi bolo gi na ab beautiful to bol nahi sakti na 😕 😆

Adi also presnt there n chukle with pari words

Adi : msk Handsome hai par pari chachu ap say bhut angry hai ap nai humra wala secret dada ko bat diya n think Ab woh mera band baji ga 😭
Pari : dada nai pucha toh mein kya karti 🤔 aur ap jantey ho na Pari dada say kuch nahi hide karti 😉
ADi rooll his eyes to se her natak n dadi scold both to distrub her

DADI shhshshs chup rahey ap dono ki fighting hum bad mein dekhey gey pehley humein humre pota ko dekne dejiya

IN event

MAAN name announce he reach in satge to the award from President it was proud moment for evry Business men he recived the award n take mike n satart his speech (mujko Award function ki zayda knowlege nahi isliya no detail )

MAAN : Tonight I got this award it was dream of evry one to reach this high this n i got this I am the best IS award ko get karnai mein aur KC ko World best Company banay mein meri sataff member ka utna hi hath tha jitna mera they loyalty n hard work brought KC here n Last not the least my two Beautiful women of my life meri dadi n my daughter they are my world i can do any thing for their smile n hapiness
Evy one claping n he get down rom satage people want to meet him but he care dam he just out from there are all just gaping him ( attitude msk ka koi kuch anhi karsakta )

Car stop at km he out n run to meet his family n pari came out hug him tight maan lift her n turil around she laghed dadi n adi also came out to see dada beti moment

PARI u DID it i am sooo happy u did it yeyeyyeey u r the best

Maan : yes PRINCES ur dada is best

he left he r made her stand beside her n came to dadi for bless

Maan dadi i did it i am so happy he chocked he is sooo emotianal ( a men can be rough n togh from out side but infront of his mother he is like samll child )

DAdi cares his head n said yes u did it i am proud of u my child She also emotianal
Pari ADi is silently watching them Adi also feelig same his eyes get moist

pari : dadi dada n adi chachu ap logo ka melow drama khatam hogya toh cheley hum log late horahi hai aur dadi ap serial k actor say bhi zayada worse acing kar rahi hoo

Dadi mouth O like what iam bad actor agar meri shadi nahi hoti toh DK ki anarkali mein hoti 😡 aur yeh

Adi maan control their laugh not to get scold from dadi

Pari : ohhh hoo Ab chalo bhi late ho rahai hai i want cleberatin na dada itna bara show her hand award mila hai cleberation karna toh banta hai n PARI KHURANA WAITING SOOO MUCH ARE U GYZZ MOVING OR NOT

said with so much attitiude n gussa

Adi mumer to maan : teri beti atitude dena mein teri Ama hai

MAAN 😡

they left for cleberation after all PARI KHURANAH KA JO ORDER HAI

Same time At Delhi Bus stop

A girl is waitng for bus some boys came n satrt their teasing other people become a silent specter 😡😡😡 do nothing

boys arye ohhh janeman morning mein toh broose liee ki behan ban rahi thi ab kiya howa

girl Apni salmti chatey ho nah toh chaley jao bekar mein tum log bhi pitoo gye

BOYs laughted one boy came close to her n hold her hand she salp him hard
it made boys more angred ( ego pai jo hit howa )

Boys teri itni jurat he held her hair in his fist n try to kiss her girl strugling to came out from his grip n kick him he left her n she run from their to save her self

BOY ahhh teri toh pakro ausey he order other his sathi

TO BE CONTINUE

here is the part 4 i know small hai bear this plzzz i will try to write a big update slow slow

NOte idunno i hope this time u will understand thanks for comment

other reader thank you so much for ur liking my work once again

mahi n pooja 🤗


Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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THANK YOU ALL WHO LIKE MY WORK 🤗
NOTE
I am not professional writer learn every thing from here ,If any one think my work Matched with any writer tell me I will remove soon
plz tell my fault n my lacking too if any thing is not good tell openly MY English😆
is not good so bear my English
sorry in Advance


PART 5

@ resturant maan enjoying his sucess with his family ( adi is also a family n resturent is all empty msk love privancy )
Pari : dada i want burger .cake sandwish icecream n her list satrted

Dadi : pari beta first i want to talk with ur dada maan today u made me proud once again ap jaise pota kismat walo ko milat hai hum bhut lucky hai k ap humreai potey hai
she is soo much emotinal maan also get emotinal to dadi word

MAAN : dadi ap yeh but dadi did not let him complete

Dadi : humain khaney dijaiya naaz hai humain ap par Aj hum ap say promise chatey hai degey humain promise

MAAN : ap ka maan ap k liya jaan de sakta hai toh promise kiya cheez hai boliye dadi ap kiya chate hai

DADI : soch lijye maan ap bath say back out mat kije ga ( me aney soch le )

MAAN : dadi msk apni ZUBAN say kabhi nahi mukarta ( marega ye )

DADI : toh phir thek hai aj say balkey abhi say hum WOH SADA HOWA BE SWAD (TASTE LESS ) kHANA NAHI KAHEY GEY AUR AP HUME NAHI ROKEY GEY

MAAN . ADI PARI : whattt

DADI : chila kiyo rahey ho iam not daef sunai deta hai hhumain

PARI : dadi ap itni daer say hum sab ko is wajha say emotinal kar rahey they u r drama queen aur kitni kharb actor ho ap Acha howa DK (dilip kumar ) ki anar kali nahi baney warna film first day hi flop hojati

ADI : heheheheheeheh

DADI n MAAN : SHUT UP ADI
adi put his finger on mouth

DAdi making angry face n said PARI beta agar ap humri jaga hoti aur ap ko woh stupid tast less khana khana parta tab hum ap say puchtey huh
MAAN : yeh cheating hai ap nai jan boj k mujko emotinal balckmail kiya aur apni bath manwana this is wrong

DADI evry thing is fear in love n war aur emotianl blackmail woh bhi msk ko kisi mein itni daring hai aur ab toh ap nai promise kiya hai u cant back out WINK at him ( bola tha na )

maan tongh tight but grin himself

MAAN smile n said DADI ap nai bekar mein ap na promise waste kiya

DADI matlab

MAAN : dadi maa agar mein bolo k ab mein apko nahi roko ga apki woh stupid spice

PARI dada ( actual love spice food )

MAAN sorry pari not stupid spice food ok

PARI ok smile

MAAN kaha tah mei hah not spice food eat kar ney say na roko toh

ADI puting his finger makig sound eweww

MAAN : mouth say ugli hata k bol

MATLAB adi said

MAAN matalb yeh k yestarday dadi report came n i talked with the Dr n he said evry thing is normal dadi can enjoy her food

Dadi what

PARI N ADI Start laghing hehehehehehee to see dadi pouting face

PAri said while laghing heheh dadi no one mmde foool my heheh dada hehhehe u waste ur energy

maan also start laugh to hear pari word n rise his invisible coler

DADI in angry ok ok is mein itna kuhsh honey wali koi bath nahi hum toh kush hai k ab humein woh kichedi n soup nahi eat karna parega n then she stop ek minut maan DR nai ap ko KAL phone kiya it mean ap jantey they humri report normal hai uske bad bhi ap nai humein woh kichedi kaheny ko kaha grrr maaan

PARI st oyee teri dada over confedense mein kiya bol diya n she eying maan

MAAN st toh gya ab dadi tuje nahi chodne wali maan also talking pari with his eyes said help kar pari

PARI kiya karo

PARI dada apka phone baj raha hai

MAAN haah mera phone ek minut mein aya he stood to go ( apni jaan becha k bahgo )

DADI : STOP RIGHT THERE n u dada ki chamchi apna dada ko ishery dena band karo hai to MR MSK kiya huh ap ki itni jurat k u mdae me to eat tast less food now it ur turn
MAAN dad

DADI : nahi nahi ap bhol gye maan k hum apki dadi hai aur ap nai humsay sahrat ki
MAAN making cutey face n dadi smile little to see his face but control

DADi : ap nai humain tastless kahan kaheny ko kha ab apki punishment hai k ab ap pore week partehty eat karye gey no pasta n black coffee for u

MAAN no way dadi ap mujko koi aur punihment do pa r nahi dadi mein aur parthy plzzz dadi he fold hsi hand infront of dadi

DADI no u have to bada shock tha na ap ko hum say dushmani mol lena ka
ADI wow msk aur partey n with out cofee he making fun

DADI zayada khush mat hoi ap dai beta apko bhi punishment hai ap whole week pasta aur balck cofee le gay

adi cry face pari maan chulke
Adi y me but dadi cut q beta itna bekar plan banya ap nai ek kam thek say nahi kar saktey they maan ko humri lunch k barey mein kaise pata chala ap ki waj say aj bhi hum nai woh sab khaya n u MISS PRENA SING KHURNA apko bhi punishment miley gi

MAAN ADI dadi apki punishment humai manzor hai but no punishment for pari ok

DADI arey wah jag gye pOsseseive dada aur chchu thek hai dtey hum unko punishment lakin khabrdar jo ap nai humai phir say woh sab kheny ko kha
order kijey jaldi say humai bhut bhook lagi hai aj hum je bar k apni fav dish kahey gey

PARI : ap mujko punish karo gye she said with emotinal mekhan mar ke

DADI hug her n said ary nahi beta hum ko punish thodi na karey gey

PARI smile toh fir thik hai n she came close to maan n said his ear dont worry dada apki coffe machine room mein fix karwadi hai par parthey k a kuch nahi hosakta n wink him

MAAN ADI smile maan call waiter n call waiter to order their food as usaual adi dadi n pari took punjabi n maan take his boring pasta

OTHER SIDE
GIRL running continouly n talking to her fav babaji
GIRL : this not fair ap subha say meri marthon karwa rahai ho abhi thoda apni bachi ko aram karne do yeh kunda to naha dho k peche par gey
babaji aj bacha lo plzzz dekho mein na apko apni bato say apreshan nahi karo gi pura ek din ap say bath nahi karo gi
BABAJI : muje pai ahsan ( idea came from MEIN tera hero the way varun talking with god i like it they way if i dis respect any religeon say me dont want to hurt any one )
GUNDAS : also running to cath her

TO BE CONTINUE
I am sooo happy my fav writter vrinda di is coment omg i am 9 cloud but miss my devil mahi coment :( she bizy will be back soon
sorry for chuto update 24 hour no electricity
thank you once again all me want to thank indivually from pm but light prob next time paka promise
big hug to all
pm k liya pooja n mahi

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Nice prologue
do continue soon!!!
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res 😛
kya ye Fariya ki story hai..? 😉

congrtas dear 🥳

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