MG ff Mere papa ki dulhan part 18 on 92 - Page 8

Originally posted by: kamnagupta7

👏Prologue is interesting.

waiting for d first part.

welcome to d new writer.😊

Originally posted by: jasika08

nice update

Originally posted by: kamnagupta7

😆Lovely update

maan Mai kitna attitude hai yaar.😉

prerna is sweet bt naughty.

wo hungama karne wali ladki jarur hi hamari geet hai.

HI fariya...
this is gunjar...today onwards ur new reader dear...
i would try my best to be loyal ok by commenting 😃
first of all a big welcome hug to u as a writer dear🤗
i just loved ur story yaar..
its just simply superb..
the highlight was perena...
i has just fallen for her tantics..
hayye kitna cute hai bilkul geet ki tara...
and msk hayye fariya u have just said all those things wht we see in maan..😉
kitna superb hero banadi maan ko ki abb wo sari ff's ki maan mai award winner hoga..
and look hear u have allready given him the best businessman award wo bhi international😃
just lovely dear...
and dadi hayye kitna drama queen bangayi dadi tho aur kyu nahi banengi appni pothi PMSK jo hai abb unki saath
aur tho aur abb geet bhi add honewali ha😉
maan attitude hayye maardala..
just great charecter potration by u fariya...
hatts off to u.. 👏
and adi and maan bonding was just so great...
and sasha has got a good lecture from maan
but poor that secretary..lekin agar wo nahi jaayengi tho geet kaise ayengi na😆
and maan that thing abt girls..
maan babu dont forget perena hai ghar per and jaldi geet bhi annewali hai ok..
fariya just lovely story dear...
dont get nervous ur fantastic yaar...
eagerly waiting to read next parts..
continue soon dear...

Originally posted by: umamaaneet

dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful start dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

updates !!!!!!!!!!!!

part 1 was hilarous prerna and dadi scene 😆😆

mujhe bhi aisi maan hi pasand hai(international wala 😉 🤣)

maan love prerna alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but maan keep space for geet also ...she will be coming 😛 😉😆

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Part 2

it was funny too!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

enjoyed reading it dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️

Oye ye line kya tha???????????? ki ladkiya khud mauka deti hai chedne ka!!!!!!!! 😲 😡

tum nai piti tho i will beat maan !!!!!!!!!! 😡 😆 how could he say when his own daughter is there 😡

Eagerly waiting for next dear!!!!!!!!!!!

Do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uma...

P.S- I know u r feeling nervous dear...i can feel ur tention in writing but to tell u truth u r writing very nice...there is no need to feel nervous or bad k...ur r giving us someting a story ...then y the heck u should feel nervous re...goli maar usko aur bindass hoke likho k...😛 😉 😆

Originally posted by: christipie

nice part daai nd pari r big devils

maan ki meetng re schedule im sure dat chudel sasha hv did it nd poor assisstant of maan got fird

koi nahi abhi geet aayegi aur sabka band baajegi waitng 4 d nxt part😃

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

For this first and new FF

Lovely start

Prerna is so cute

Loved prerna-dadi-nakul part so much

Maan is full of anger and attitude

Loved geet,s entry

Loving ur first attempt,atleast u r trying 'Mujhe tu ye bhi nahi aata"

Originally posted by: icskwt

lovely part fariya...maan was engry for the meeting ...adi is maan friend ...yeh bahut aacha kiya fariya adi ko maan ka friend bana kar koi to hoga jo use samjhega aur uski galti bhi use batayega,,...

maan late for meeting...ek ladki ne use chadne wali ki wat laga di aur raste main bheer bhi jama ho gaye...thats good...

wonderfully written part and do continue soon...

Originally posted by: hemangigazal

awesome story

loved prena she is so cute

lolz dadi crime in partner

nakul bechara

Originally posted by: achu66

Congrats dear for the new story
Wonderful updates ... Loved it
Prerna is do cute and our own chatter box is super cute
Dadi, Prerna and nakul are partners in crime...poor maan uska kya haal hoga in teenoke saamne
Yeh slap kisko mil raha hain... Waiting to know that
Waiting for more updates