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PART-1
ARAKU VILLAGE...Morning...
Slightly dawn..birds cripped welcoming sun to warm the nature ...its rainy season...A beautiful young girl of twenty plucking the flowers by feeling them..to sell in the village..after completely filling her basket ..she took one flower and inhaled its scent..Rose..her beautiful plump lips curved into a dazzling smile...her ear caught sound
of water chims...she turned to her left walked over some distance...ooo mother nature..how r u? yesterday i din't come did u miss me?i missed u alot...sorry i was having
fever...the waterfall sound became violent acknowledging her and asking her well being..dont worry now iam fine..she took one flower and kept it in her plat..she slowly turned around and showed that to mother nature..how iam i looking?...thunder bolted saying "ur most beautiful girl "...the girl blushed crimpson...but suddenly tears gathered her almond hazels..she looked up complaining to mother nature...r u making fun of meee? i dont want ur pity...that i cant look at u but u can rigghhht!!!!!!!!!! y did u made me blind?...i too want to se uuu... flowers,birds,water,my people...everything...when will iii!!!!!!!!!!!! or ever will iii????????? she shouted top of her lungs at nature.. sky started pouring for her ...as if crying along with her
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Maan's house...
Maan was geeting ready for his 99th wedding proposal to visit bride's house...savitri entered his room
Maan beta aur kitni der lagaoge jaldi tayyar hona...late horaha hai(maan how much more time will u take...get ready fast its already time...)savitri chided him for being late...
hogayi aayi bas do minute aur (its over aayi ...just two minutes more...)maan one last time looked into mirror...while savitri shook her head seeing his excuses...this is routine for them as maan is concious for his looks as always he will be rejected ...
Adi came there to take maan and savitri ...aayi come fast i bought auto its waiting common common ...adi dragged them out of house and all three started for their destination...
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In auto...
Abe tu na...apna muh band rakhe mat beth ...ladkiyonki tarah sharmata hai tu .mard ban ..iss bar koi gadbad nahi hogi ...(abe u dont sit quietly before bride...u will shy away like a girl...be a man..this time nothing will go wrong ok.. )adi chided maan as well as consoled him that nothing goes wrong...while maan nodded head...
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Bride's house...
Maan ,adi and savitri got down from auto...and was entering bride's house suddenly adi sneezed there gaining a glare and punch from maan
u have to sneeze now only...dont know what will happen there...maan was praying to god ...
Are how can i control sneezing...dont worry nothing will go wrong...adi consoled him where as in real he too was fearing and praying that all should go well...
All the three entered house exchanged pleasantries ...snacks was served ...
Are ladki ko to bulayile ...Adi said to all while busy munching samosa...the girl arrived ..maal was not lifting his head being shy...
Abe tu dekhna uppar(abe see up)...adi pinched his thigh hard...making maan scream a little...
aauchh!!!!!!!!! maan looked up girl was beautiful...his heart sank thinking will she agree him...
Adi and savitri asked questions and the girl answered them all..
umm i want to talk personally with him...girl said boldly making everyone gasp...
no its not possible ...girl father scolded her...but was soon cut off by maan
its ok...girl and boy both are equal ...she has every right to ask...maan consoled him ...all looked at him with pride...he was really a gem...they showed a room both went inside...while all stayed outside with baited breath...
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Room...
Maan was feeling shy and was blushing ...he was looking everywhere but the girl...
umm u can ask what u want to ask...maan breaked the ice...
Girl took a long breathe ...i cant marry u!!!!!!!!!!!!! she dropped a bomb on maan's head...
as soon as the words came from her mouth maan was rooted on the spot nothing was reaching him ...but soon he gained strength and asked in shaky voice...
Why? did i do anything wrong...or due to my defect ur saying this...i dont have any bad habits ...he looked at her hope fully...
no no its not that ...u dont have any bad qualities i know...and the way u talked and ur principles ...all shows that u have a golden heart...who evr marries u will be very lucky...defect is in me...i love some one and iam three months pregnant ...my parents are not allowing me...!!!!!!!!!!!
Maan was shattered ...he staggered back ...he looked horrified at her...
Please understand me and reject me...i beg u pls...the girl fell on maan leg pleading desperately...that made maan come to to reality...he lifted her up...
its... its ok...i will say no to the marriage...he said gulping the lump in his throat and exited the room...
As they both came every one started bombarding them with questions...
We will inform u tommorow morning ...maan said while looking at girl father...who looked disappointedly at him...
Maan what are u...adi started talking but was cut off as maan lifted his hand to stop...and he exited their house
Savitri and adi gave a sorry look to all and went behind maan...
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In village...
Geeta was selling her flowers ...one lady neared her...
geeta beta how are u...yesterday u dint come...i got to know that u got fever now how is ur health...the lady(pushpa) placed her hand on her cheeck fondly...
Ji maasi now iam completely fine...take flowers i bought for ur pooja...geeta handed her flowers...
Thanku soo much beta...may u get world's full of happiness...pushpa kissed geeta's fore head ...
geeta bid her bye and left to sell the remaining flowers...suddenly one man came running to her...
Geeta beta geeta beta !!!!!!!!!!!!!! man shouted for her...
Kaka kaka what happened ...y r u shouting? geet asked him...
Wo wo...umm beta ur father is dead...as usual he drank yesterday today we got his body on road...
but nothing reached geet...she became numb with the news ...one and only soul whom she can say as her own was left may be he does not support her by working may be he is a drunkard but he was her father...her basket fell down and flowers scattered on ground like her life...today she became an orphan...
Beta beta ...the man shooked her making her come to reality...she just ran with her whole strength some times tripping on ground ...she reached where her fathers(mohinder) body is placed...she sank on her knees and broked down in loud heart wrenching cry...
Baba baab baaaba...get up pls get uppp!!!!!!!!! she screamed waking him up...but her pleas went to deaf ears...
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At Bridge...
After they maan and all reached their house...adi got angry and left the house without talking...
but again how can he leave his best freind he need to find what happened...he went in search of maan and soon he spotted him at bridge sitting and throwing stones into water...
Adi marched towards him ...he lifted maan and shook him hard ...
What the heck was that maan...tu kyu mana kiya shadi ko(y u rejected for marriage?) ...girl was also nice na...from so many days we r dying for ur marriage and now...tell me...adi shouted at him
Maan jerked off his hands of him and turned his back to adi...he cant lie looking into his freinds eyes...
Nothing ...i dint like her...Maan dismissed him...
Hahahah u dint like her...dont say lie to me maan...i know u...dont give me silly reasons...what happened...did anyone said anything to u?tell me na...adi was continuously bugging him...maan couldn't take that any longer his patience broke and he shouted o top of his lungs ...
She is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!
Silence prevailed for some time...only the sound of the echo spread there!!!!!!!!!!
Tears formed in maan's eyes...she is pregnant...he whispered shooking his head dejectedly...
Adi was shocked would be the understatement...he gave a painful look at his freind and placed his hand on maan's shoulder...maan wipped around and broke down hugging adi...
Y adi y always me...maan whispered hugging him...
Listen to the song to feel it 😛
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AFRAFHtU-PE[/YOUTUBE]
Aanewala Pal Jaanewala Hai
Ho Sake To Iss Mein Zindagi Bitaado Pal Jo Yeh
Jaanewala Hai Ho Ho
The soon to come moment is about to go...
If you can, live your life in this...
moment that is about to go.
Aanewala Pal Jaanewala Hai
Ho Sake To Iss Mein Zindagi Bitaado Pal Jo Yeh
Jaanewala Hai
The soon to come moment is about to go...
If you can, live your life in this...
moment that is about to go.
Ek Baar Yoon Mili Maasoom Si Kali
Ho Khilte Hue Kahaan Pushpaash Mein Chali
Dekha To Yahin Hai Dhundha To Nahin Hai Pal Jo Yeh
Jaanewala Hai Ho Ho
Once, (I) just met this innocent blossom (bud).
Blooming, (she) said,I am leaving happy.
When I look, it is right here,When I search, it is not here.
This moment that is about to go.
Aanewala Pal Jaanewala Hai
Ho Sake To Iss Mein Zindagi Bitaado Pal Jo Yeh
Jaanewala Hai
The soon to come moment is about to go...
If you can, live your life in this...
moment that is about to go.
Ek Baar Waqt Se Lamha Gira Kahin
Wahaan Dastan Mili Lamha Kahin Nahin
Thoda Sa Hasaake Thoda Sa Rulaake Pal Ye Bhi Jaanewala
Hai Ho Ho
Once, this moment fell from time somewhere
There I found this tale,The moment is nowhere
By making you laugh a little,By making you cry a little
This moment is also about to go
Aanewala Pal Jaanewala Hai
Ho Sake To Iss Mein Zindagi Bitaado Pal Jo Yeh
Jaanewala Hai Ho Ho
Aanewala Pal Jaanewala Hai
The soon to come moment is about to go...
If you can live your life in this moment that is about to go
The soon to come moment is about to go...
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One week later ...geet's house evening...
After mohinder's death geeta became more silent...she stopped selling flowers and became little pale...since two days his death geeta's house owner started his wicked tricks to make geeta his...he has his dirty eye on her before too...but now no one was there for her...so, he thought of torturing her for rent ...and make a deal ...
Geeta's distant relatives are in city...so pushpa suggested her to take their help and go to their place...girl without support can not easily survive alone in this cruel world...geeta too agreed with her ...she took her dairy of phone numbers...and went to call them...
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Maan's Phone booth...
Maan was sitting on his booth...and was thinking of his life...geeta came came...
Suniye(listen)....geeta called him ..making maan turn towards the most sweetest voice he heard till now...and he felt a gush was wind hit him...his breath caught ...who is this angel...first caught his attention was her doe eyes which shows pure innocence...he was totally lost in them...then her cute little nose which scrunch when she talks...her rose bud mouth...evreything of her is fascinating for him...his gaze again shift towards her EYES ...but then there was no expression in them ...they were hollow...his heart cried why!!!!!!!!!!!!...his imagination broke when geeta spoke again...unlike maan she cant get anything going around her...
Suniye...zara ye number karke mujhe dijiye...(pls dial this number and give me)...geeta requested him...while maan got confused...then it dawned upon him that she is illiterate...
ohh so ur illiterate a? dont worry i will dial and give......he took her dairy...
No iam blind......geet's blunt answer made his heart beat stop ...how!!!!!!!!!!! y? how can god be this cruel...was the only thought came in his mind...his eyes became wet soon a tear escaped for a complete stranger...he dont know what this feeling...he dont even want to think...he was getting angry but not pity...
ok ok i will dial the number ...maan replied her in rude tone which actually soothed her because she thought like others he too will show pity which she dint want...maan dialed the number and handed her...
Hello raju mama...mai geeta bolrahi hu(its me geeta) ...how r u...wo wo papa di died geet voice chocked at the end..
wrong number !!!!!!!!!! was the answer she recieved followed by BEEP sound...they cutted the call not wanting to burden themselves...her own relatives abandoned her...she placed the call amount and ran from there crying on her ill fate...
Maan was shocked listening about her father...but he dint understood what happened y she ran crying...he felt difficulty in breathing when he saw tears in her eyes...he cant bear them...
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At the same time near hill...
Gurmeet was on his bike waiting for lara...he was continously calling her but she was not lifting her moblie...he was feeling annoyed...
ye ladki hamesha apna cell buljati hai ye phir kaha rakh deti hai(this girl always forget het moblie or leave some where...) he saw here and there for her glimpse but she dint come...
he was worried for her safety...she have to come through jungle...
Lara came running to him and hugged him wih great force...while gurmeet smiled...contently...
How many times should i tell u dont forget ur phone...sometimes it becomes urgent...if any problem arrives then...if i say i will come means u refuse fearing ur bald father 😆....gurmeet scoffed at her...
What ...u called my father baldy u u...u u...lara pointed her index finger at gurmeet glaring at him ...
ha me me... what u will do dhrasti....gurmeet smirked at her...
my name is lara ...lara davis!!!!!!!!!!! understood.....lara huffed at him...
ya ya i know ...but for me ur drashti ...drashti gurmeet chowdary. 😉...i dont like lara bara(no offence)....he said proudly...it is the name he gave her...
How... we still dint get married sir....lara raised her eyebrow smirked at him...
acca then fine ...here we go...gurmeet removed his chain from his neck and took out a cross from his pocket which he brought to gift lara...he attached cross to chain and placed around lara's neck...making her gasp...tears clouded in her almond eyes but gurmeet dint let them fall down by placing his palm below her chin
dare u cry again...how many times i should tell u ...ur eyes r mine ...ur tears ,happiness every single thing even ur life all are mine as UR MINE...gurmeet pulled her by holding her shoulders looking in her eyes passionately...
Lara smiled at him and hugged him hard ...both stayed like that for some time...gurmeet parted from her after sometime ...
Hmm now tell me how u came? gurmeet enquired lara...
asual jumped from window ...mom is not allowing me to go out now.....lara lifted her hands defeatedly in air...
How dare they...thats y i said i will talk to ur parents ...but u. will not agree...gurmeet saw her in anger...
Till u reduce ur anger i will not agree u to talk to them ...dont know what u will do....lara shook her head...negatively 😆
Hmm fine..... he pulled her to one rock and sat both sat down ...he took her hand to caress her...but then got shocked as well as angry seeing her tattoo of his name on her delicate wrist...
what the hell is this!!!!!!!!!!...he roared glaring at her making her jump...but then tuned his back to her not wanting to get angry on her...
She placed her wrist in front of him and removed her duplicate tattoo 😆...gurmeet got another shock and looked at her amused...
dint understood bhuddu ...hmm i did this to annoy my parents...if they can remove ur name from my room wall means i can place this permanantly on me ...lara smiled tirumphantly...
Gurmeet looked at her lovingly kissed her forehead ...while lara opened one of his shirt button jerked it a little and kissed on his heart where her name was permanantly placed through original tatto...😳..."DRASHTI"
And u ...u can tatto my name and y not i...u can feel pain and i should not right....she pouted turning her back at him...
gurmeet hugged her from back...kissing her on shoulder...
Yes i cant allow any scratch on u...i cant see u in pain...he whispered huskily biting her earlobe...while lara blushed...
She pushed him gently...but seriously gurmeet u should control ur anger...how many times i should give lecture to u......she chided him
I am trying ...see i never show my angry on u...gurmeet saw every where but her...
I am not talking about me guru...iam worried about us...till when u will be like this.....she looked at him frowning ...
Do one thing when ever u will get angry count numbers u will calm urself...lara gave her suggeston while gurmeet rolled his eyes...
Most outdated...i already tried but no use.....gurmeet said annoyingly...
Hmm ok then count no of times u kissed me.....lara winked at him...both started laughing heartily...
Umm now that we got married our view ...we Groom should KISS the Bride right and i dint even kissed u on ur lips till now all are on cheek forehead neck ,ear...gurmeet was shamelessly saying but was cut off as lara placed her palm on his mouth ...but then she got scared looking at his naughty and desire filled eyes ...she knew she is in danger and she pushed him running while gurmeet chased her...
Listen to the song to feel it 😛
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=On6sUrFXW00[/YOUTUBE]
imagine maaneet in song 😉
Ivvu ivvu okka muddu
ivvalendi adagavaddu
vaddu vaddu antu pote chinnadaana
eppudanta ichedanta
kannemuddu ichukunte chinnavada
pellidaka aagavanta
kallathote pellayyindi challe
aadyantamuu leni
amaraanandame prema
ye bandhamuu leni
tholi sambandhame prema
prema divyabhavamu
prema daivarupamu
prema jeevaragamu
prema jnyanayogamu
manasuna pare selayeru prema
alasata teerche chirugali prema
haddulevi lenidi andamaina prema
oo allari prema ika aadinchaku nannu
oo takkari prema ika lalinchaku nannu
neku nenu sontamu
naku neevu sarvamu
nevu naku dehamu
nenu neku pranamu
pratiroju ne udayanni nenu
pratireyii ne nelavanka nenu
janmalenni marinaa prema peru preme
Soon he caught hold of her pushed her gently against tree and cornerned ...he bend down inhaling her lavender smell and kept lowering down to her lips which seemed painfully slow...drashti was breathing heavily...her heart was thudding loudly in her ribcage...but felt jolted when gurmeet's lips rough lips touched her plump ones ...both felt desire stabded their insides...she felt her butterflies are dancing in her stomach ...he entangled his fingers with hers and placed them on her side...while other hand gripping her petite waist...drashti's fingers gripped his shouldres while other gripped his hairs...he sucked her upper lip and cutely bit there making her gasp ...taking chance her entered her territory ...they tasted each other while their toungue's danced in sync...She moaned his name while he licked her to sooth her ...
not able to bear his sweet torture she bit him hard making his lips draw blood...showing mercy she sucked it slowly...Devil gurmeet hissed at her...but soon swooped down to her mouth to continue his previous game...they both parted when they were breatheless...and hugged each other
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Precap-Geeta in maan's house and the love saga starts 😉
Geeta- suniye ji dinner is ready 😛
Next part 2- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4138562/nee-chupule-naa-uphiri-maaneet-ss-part-2-page-25
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NOTE-See i fullfilled every maaneetian and gurtian dream right by this kiss 😛 😉 😆
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