'Nee Chupule Naa Uphiri' Maaneet SS PART 2 PAGE 25

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"Nee Chupule Naa Uphiri"
Ur Gaze Is My Breathe(english meaning)




Hello freinds,


Here i am again to bug to with my new SS ..pls guys support me with ur love in this too..i try to not disappoint u all...pls share ur views ...it motivates me pls


Love


Uma...🤗


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Note-Dont worry guys title is in telugu but story is in english and hindi only 😆



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prolugue


ARAKU VILLAGE...Morning...







Slightly dawn..birds cripped welcoming sun to warm the nature ...its rainy season...A beautiful young girl of twenty plucking the flowers by feeling them..to sell in the village..after completely filling her basket ..she took one flower and inhaled its scent..Rose..her beautiful plump lips curved into a dazzling smile...her ear caught sound
of water chims...she turned to her left walked over some distance...ooo mother nature..how r u? yesterday i din't come did u miss me?i missed u alot...sorry i was having
fever...the waterfall sound became violent acknowledging her and asking her well being..dont worry now iam fine..she took one flower and kept it in her plat..she slowly turned around and showed that to mother nature..how iam i looking?...thunder bolted saying "ur most beautiful girl "...the girl blushed crimpson...but suddenly tears gathered her almond hazels..she looked up complaining to mother nature...r u making fun of meee? i dont want ur pity...that i cant look at u but u can rigghhht!!!!!!!!!! y
did u made me blind?...i too want to se uuu...flowers,birds,water,my people...everything...when will iii!!!!!!!!!!!! or ever will iii????????? she shouted
top of her lungs at nature.. sky started pouring for her ...as if crying along with her





Her surrowndings are full of colours ...she is full of life...but will she ever be able to see those colous????????????????


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A man in late twenties sitting at the edge of mountains throwing stones down the valley...he was again rejected for marriage...it was 98th time he got rejected...who will
marry a lameman(limping) like me...iam not good looking or not even rich...he was feeling very depressed..and dejected...Maaan!!!!!!!!!! a voice caught his attention and he turned back...


He can see all colours of nature but will he ever able to fill colour in his life????????


*************** to be continued************** 😆
Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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HE- A very shy and introvet man..runs a mechanic shop and telephone booth...age 30..born with polio in his left leg ..98 times rejected for marriage...educated till 7th class... but haves a heart of gold...he is MAAN SINGH KHURANA...(dont worry guys i will make his hair cut...and make him grow his beard 😛 😆...i too like MSK style... 😎)




SHE-A beauty descended from heavens ..fill evry ones life with colours but she cant see
them...born blind..age 20...very poor ..sells flowers in village..but have a very high power
of hearing and can recognise things very quickly by feeling them...studied till 5th class..very innocent..lives with his drunked father...she is geeta kumari...






Lara -Catholic christian ...age 21..MBA student..very crippy and bubbly..enjoys life to the
fullest lives with her parents..loves gurmeet alot...



Gurmeet-Hindu...age 28..software engineer..very angry and impulsive man but good at
heart..lives with his parents...loves Lara madly...





Adi- Maan's freind...Educated till intermediate but lazy to work...always depend on maan
for money...loves maan alot ...scolds him for being shy and over honest..helps him for marriage proposals...




Savitri - A widow and lives with maan...she was saved by him when she was thrown by
their sons...maan gave her shelter...loves maan like her son...wants him to settle in life by
getting married...




Mohinder-Drunked and geets father...takes money from her for his needs...never care for anything...but loves geet...



Anju and david-Lara's parents...against her love as gurmeet is hindu...


Satya and Sangeeta -Gurmeet's parents...accepted lara and loves her very much...



Khalan-A gunda of village...a complete womanizer...very cruel and kills anyone who
comes his way...






P.S-This story characters and conceptandCOPYRIGHT (c)belong to surya movie"sundarangudu".....but it is slightly different from the movie...climax is totally different 😛


NOTE .1-

Now all its a shocker right...double acting maaneet yeh 😉...but main characters are maaneet only...now dont ask me logical questions like are ther siblings or not 😡 🤣 no they r not having any relation...i repeat no relation...it is based on a movie...only main story line thats all...every thing is my imagination only...i know i already have one FF in my pocket but from yesterday my hands were itching to write another one...till night i thought of another my own story but suddenly while iam sleeping my imagination got this one 😆 so i wrote this...this one i will give updates late...coz of my time and FF...😛



NOTE. 2-

Ohhhk let me clear may some know this story thinking i will keep it as sad story ...BIG NO...i will stop writing but no sob stories before writer i am a reader ...i can never bear saddy saddy stories...i will change track a little a the end so that all will be safe...and about drasti all r thinking y not her...coz first i thought to keep story as it is so if i keep lara as drashti means all will murder me 🤣 ...but now i will change it to drasti only ...in update 1 only u will know

Guys my story contains all flavours drama,comedy and LOVE.Its main motive to show is strengh of love.All in all its intense story...

i hope u all like it 😃 and din't dissapointed u all !!!!!!!!!!

Love

Uma 🤗





Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congos 4 new story
Edited by _CookieMonster_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new story

nice start
different story geet blind and maan lame ..
sound interesting ..
waiting for this one...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow interesting..yaa i know tis movie..i love it..wenever i see surya and jo , tat love pair, surya (raghav) ki possessive love for his joo in te movie , i will see my maan in him..love u for taking tis story but little sad thinking abt te track..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrates umma for the new story..👏.totaly new concept...so double role intersting...😊waiting to read further...
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geet maan
lara n raghu yeh ek jaise hai yyy story mein twist n turn hongye ufff waiting for this congrats

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