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Posted: 10 years ago
part 16
After some time he found braked bangle near tree so he got down from horse and look and try to hear sound and he heard some faint sound like someone struggling ...he without any noise start to follow that sound and when he reach there ,he found himself on fire ,so much anger , that bas***** brij bend on pinky bhabhi who is their with mess cloth almost nu** his blood boiled in anger and he march to brij

And before brije get what is happening he attack on brij with sword , that give deep cut on brije back ...he cried in pain maan push him with his leg ,don't know form where he get so much power ...brij fail on ground with thud ...maan cover pinky first who almost nu** and unconscious , verge of fainting she murmuring in painful voice

Usne muje chuke muje malin kar diya , main ab unke kabbil nahi rahi ...bhiya ,main apne app ko bacha nahi saki (he make me impure with touching me , now I am not pur for hIm (adi) ,I can not save myself i...bro )

Maan hug her tightly , like he want to hide his sis from all , he mummer kuch nahhi hua hai kuch nahi ...maan make her sit near a tree and attack on brije with double speed maan hand ,leg braking each bones of brije body he cried ,in pain please chod do muje but maan no wear to stop after looking pinky ...its uncontrollable for him ,his every punch

Taking brije to way of death which he deserved he brake soul of innocent girl who is ammant of his adi bro

Maan ki zimedari thi wo , his next punch make brije dead , his all movment stop but maan punching him again and again he is so hurt ,angry that he don't get brije is dead , dead

Maan stop when he heard pinky painful cry ...he stop and push brije body to other side and run to pinky , he called app thik ho chalo utho ghar chalte hai utho ...

Pinky - a tear fall from her eyes ab main unke kabil nahi rahi muje kisi aur ne chuha aur dekha bhi bina clo--- but maan put hand on pinky mouth and nodded in no ...aisa mat bolo bhabhi , bro bahot ache hai wo nahi souchenge aisa kuch ,bahot pyyar karte hai wo apse

Pinky - nahi bhiya sab kuch khatam ho gaya muje pata hai wo bahot ache hai ,isiliye muje lagta hai ,now I am not pure for him ... And she again fainted their , maan hug her , main fail ho gaya , apko protect nahi kar saka

And maan cried in loud voice BAAABA apka beta haar gaya , wo apni sis ko nahi bacha saka, baaaba sun rahe hai appp Veer khurana ka beta haar gaya aaj apni jimedari puri nahi kar saka ,baba he cried loudly in agony of defeated ,pinky ki halat

He somehow control his tear and put her on horse , but he is confused kaha lake jau bhabhi ko ,she don't want to go to home ...at last he took her to their secret place and sprinkles some water on pinky face ...to brought her in hosh ,he make drink her some water , now pinky get her hosh and went away from maan and sit near wall of of temple her all lost ,painful face

Wo full of life pinky to kahi kho gayi , maan feel like yaha koi aur hi hai uski pinky bhabhi nahi hamesha hasne wali , shy full of life , adi bro ki zindagi

Maan ask with shaky voice , app ko kuch khana hai bhabhi

Pinky nodded in no ...

Maan turn his face , bite his own plam to control his cry , wo to pinky main abni sis dekhta tha uski ma ki parchai , ma to chali gayi usko chod ke akela ...abhi pinky bhabhi aise zinda lash ...this pain , blood start to come from his palm but he don't feel any pain

He went little away ...he is confused that ...pinky ko akela chod ke jau ya nahi he is scared if she done something ...

He all lost in thought N not get that someone come their , bangel sound broke his tought and he turn around and land escape from his feet its , pammi aunty ,brije wife

Looking to pinky with winded eyes , maan face turn so cold and hard ,he went to stop her but next moment pummy took pinky in hug and start to cried ye kya ho gaya , muje nahi pata tha wo tume isliye apne sath , muje laga wo tume bazaar lake ...maaaf kar do muje please maaf kar do

Thou maan don't want to trust but he think ,pammi also women how she think so bad for pinky ...

Maan , make his maind and say pammi aunty app yahi rukogi main dadi ko bula ke lata hu

Pammi nodded in yes with teary eyes

Maan went to village ...he entering near village someone push him hard and , 4 ,5 person attack on him its so sudden he can not protect himself and within 5 min he is tied to a tree near baba Samadhi

All villager r gathering there and giving disgust look to him , maan get confused and shuttered with this and same time he found pammi there maan closed his eyes with regret he trust wrong person but now damage is done

They all start to make allegation isko mar do , kisi aur ki biwi ke sath chi chi , brije ko bhi maar diya , lanta hai , veer baba ka beta aisa ...chi chi

Their each word , something changing in maan , smoothing braking inside him ...his eyes only glud on baba statu ,he don't say anything not single word

Pammi - app log hi iska faisala karo ab

Villager - usko mar dalo

But one voice stop them all its maan dadi ...usko punishment sirf adi dega

All know she is veer mother and awyes give right decision all nodded in yes maan look to dadi eyes , and get relif his dadi trusting him

Villager - ok in two hour adi willl be here till than all u went and come after two hour ,isko achi tarah band diya hai , ye kahi nahi jaayega

Dadi face so cold and hard before maan say anything she went from there now only pummy is there ,she say with smilrk only two hour maan

Maan give her cold gaze and say , pray that I should die ,nahi to pata nahi main tumare sath kya karunga pammi handa

Pammi feel scared for while but she put brave face

That two hour death for maan slow death he sceing reaction of adi and geet

After two hour adi along with all villager gather there adi so much shocked to react any thing , the people who come to call him ,their talk , a land escape from his feet and now maan tied like this so much injury on body

His mind ,heart is not ready to accept this , no never , maan and pinky but villager

And sabse bada sawal where is pinky ...that thought make stop heart bit of adi ...he give painful look to maan and come near him and ask with painful voice

Wo kaha hai maan , wo thik hai na maan ,usko kuch hua... but maan not saying anything ,adi again ask but no ans , pinky face and word come in front of maan she took promise from him



adi grab maan coller and ask with angry tone maan pinky kaha hai maan maan bend his head



adi try to clam himself please maan bolo kya hua tha ye villager tume maar denge wo souch rahe hai ke tumne pinky ke sath kuch galat kiya fhir brije uncle ko mar diya bolo maan

Same time maan eyes fall on geet , maan look to geet eyes and ask in cold voice app kya souchte ho ...

Pami - adi wo kya bolega jab uske mann main chor hai

Village - pammi sahi hai adi beta ,wo criminal hai mar do usko , ha ha mar all start to say

Adi - pull his hand to indigated stop and say ,iska faisla kal punchayat karegi

All nodded in yes and went away to their home now ther only maan , adi and geet is their

Adi - abhi to sach bolo maan ...please wo thik hai kya

Geet heart racing like anything she feel so scared maan life in danger , bhabhi is missing all this

And maan question to her ...

Maan - at last say , I can not main chah kar bhi nahi bol sakta ,

Adi - get fustrated and said , maan samjo sabki life bikher jaayegi

Maan - sab kuch bikhar gaya hai bhiya ...sab kuch

Adi - plesse stop this puzzal and bolo pinky kaha hai meri wife

Maan - with cold voice wo mar gayi hai ,she is dead

Adi froze in his place and start to go back side with shocked and cold face ...geet try to call adi bhai but he walk walk away far away ...

Geet who all confused with all this but she is firm that her bila can not be wrong and bhabhi thik hai

Maan eyes again ask her same qustion , is she trust him ...

Geet come near maan and open him from tree ...radha ka vishwas attot (Unbrakeble ) tha apne khanaji pe , to mera kaise toot sakta hai ...geet ka maan pe vishwas hamesha rehega ,maan look her with shock so much trust on him in this age

Geet bend little to maan and kiss his forehead , eyes and lips slitely ,and mummer jao app yaha se tabhi iss village main wapas aana jab apke pass apki begunahi ka sbaoot ho meri bhahi ke sath

Ye geet khurana apki raah dek rahi hai apke ghar main

...ye hamesha yaad rakhana ,mere kaanji ka galat hone ka sawal hi nahi utha to ...she hug maan tight their hug may be last hug ,maan took her in tight hug

He feel so proud of her ...she trust him so much ...

Precap ---

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part mahi
lovd maaneet' relation its pure 😃
adi tho naughty hogaya nd pinky blushng 😳
usske uppar geet ke qus 😆
all had nice time nd nxt dat adi went back 😊
maan's 6th sense is telng him dat smthing bad is gong 2 happn
nd it happnd brij took pinky forcefully nd when maan saw he attackd brij 👏
precap is 😲 waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update mahi..😭😭
maan saved pinky from that brij..
and punished brij...
brij is dead yeah he got his reall punishment😡😡 which he deserve alot..
pinky is so broken...😭😭😭
maan took pinky to there place..
pinky is so lost and maan is breaking inside seeing his sis like that...
ho god pammi cam ethere and acted as if she cares..😡😡
how can she stoop so low...
she made villagers against maan...😭
villagers tie dhim to tree and beat maan😭😭 why they doing like this without knowing wht has happen..
dadi said that adi will decide wht punishment should maan get..
adi reached and broken to se maan like that..
maan said pinky is dead..
adi is soo broken listening it..
bu tgeet has a lot of vishwas in her bila..
she freed him and asked him to go away...
and she will be waiting for him...
really proud to see geet so strong..👏👏
she is beleving that her bhabhi is alive..
continue soon mahi..
eagerly waiting to see next...
great update..⭐️⭐️
Edited by gunjar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional part mahi😭
maan killd brij 👍🏼 bt is angry on himself as he was nt able 2 protect his sis😭
maan took pinky 2 their place nd der pammi came nd startd her drama😡
when maan went 2 village he was beaten up by villagers nd pammi was behind dis😡🤬
adi came nd askd maan 2 say smthing bt maan kept quite as he had promisd pinky😭
when adi forcd maan he said dat pinky is dead😲
bt geet trustd maan 😃 she said dat her maan can be never wrng nd she ill wait 4 him until he cms back nd proves his iinnocence😃
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is not able to save pinky from Brij.
Maan killed Brij.
Maan is not able to see pinky crying lyk this.
Pammi is disgusting.
How can she do this with any girl.
Pammi blamed maan in front of villagers..
Adi is broken thinking of pinky death.
Geet trusted maan.
She sets him free nd ask him to prove himself innocent.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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That B*****d Brij almost r****d pinky. 😡Though Maan reached there but till then Brij had made pinky a body without soul, Maan broke down bcz he couldn't save her . 😭Maan killed Brij and he deserved tthat punishment. 😡 Pinky think she didn't deserve Adi bcz someone else has touched her , She didn't want to go home and face Adi . So Maan take her to secret place but Pammi also reached there and she made villagers believed that Maan misbehaved with Pinky and they beat Maan and tied him with a tree . Adi also reached there and asked about Pinky but Maan said pinky Iis dead and he broke down and left from there . Geet trust Maan and she freed him from rope and told when he will has the prof of his innocence then come back twith Pinky.
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh no brij ne kya kardiya pinky aur maan ne tho usko sahi time par bachaliya par kaise bahar leaaye pnky ko as she is hating her self and doesnt want to see adi in this condition. yeh pammi ne kya kardiya. poor maan ab sab ussi ko blame karrahe hai. pinky ko kya hogaya. thank god geet ne maan ko support kardiya and now he will definetly prove himself and will return back to geet. hope adi understands maan's turmoil.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Starting was so nice but end me ye kya twist de diya???
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Posted: 10 years ago

pammi was bad

pinky is safe
continue soon

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