MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

big hug i need it
glad you like it
for me fate is so close one dear it give
me so many reader and friends like you dear
miss this story

a big hug nd salute 2 u mahi 4 writng dis story it us unique one

Hv no wrds ...endn ws jst perfct...n wat u pointn at whole law systm ws true where victm suffr more thn culprt
Ds fictn is really grt bcz u hv cover so mny imp n sensitive issue...n u hv done it wd brillnce...evn in end u pointd out deflt of our law...

On light note...
Both updte whre grt...maan n geet romnc n veer teasin pinky was hilarious...
Cute musky angr whn ignrd by maan...n finlly maan truth out infrnt of his fathr...
N endn his suffrn n all his suffrn infrnt of his dad...

In end will miss ds fictn...thnx fr such grt wrk

Awesome updates
Loved the way you finished it...
The judgement was just awesome... Dev jaise logon ko aise hi sazza milni chahiyeee
It was a wonderful story mahi and one of my favorite ...
Thank you for the PM

lovely

superb epilougs

awesome epi
maan done correct with his father
dev deserve wt he done
happy for maaneet
superbb ff

Originally posted by: vandy28

Hv no wrds ...endn ws jst perfct...n wat u pointn at whole law systm ws true where victm suffr more thn culprt
Ds fictn is really grt bcz u hv cover so mny imp n sensitive issue...n u hv done it wd brillnce...evn in end u pointd out deflt of our law...

On light note...
Both updte whre grt...maan n geet romnc n veer teasin pinky was hilarious...
Cute musky angr whn ignrd by maan...n finlly maan truth out infrnt of his fathr...
N endn his suffrn n all his suffrn infrnt of his dad...

In end will miss ds fictn...thnx fr such grt wrk

glad that you get my point
sad for say but it is true victim suffer more than
criminal huuu

and as reader your comment always encourage me dear

Awesome updates mahi...
haa i feel like i am on cloud9 reading them...
pehle musky ki masthi bhari shararath...hayye kitni cute hai yaar...
naak per gussa bilkul MSK ki beti hai...aur nautanki bhi baap ki taraha hi ha...😆
such a cutie pie...
hu teeno ki masti aur besharmi to poocho hi math mahi...sab ki sab pagal hai pyaar mai ..
ho just love veer taking sweet revenge on pinky aur phir uski chal hi uss par bhari padgaya😉😆
maan ki beaharmi ki had hi nahi ha yaar ..but i like his this naughtiness.😉
ho thank god that maan father came to know abt that cunny pammi...arggh just hate her
the way maan said to his father is truely very very true dear...
kabhi kabhi humari galthi paap banjathe hai...
maan's pov just showed how much a 5year child bear all those things dear...
just love that scene mahi ..
at last geet pointing out the law is outstanding dear...
geet word is a slap for
system kash reality mein bhi aisa hi quick justice ho hope for good...
mahi the last ending line where geet say fate of unfortunate turned to fortunate it just stole my heart dear...
sach mai isse laga ki mai wo sab meri annkoneki samne horahi hai...
mahi u made me live that momment dear...
i am just attached alot to this story dear...patha nahi kyu par harpal mai yehi soch tha rehta tha ki mahi yeh update kab karengi aur phir how geet will get justice...
u made everyones heart and their feelings come out mahi through this story...
mahi just i can say u that u have done a great job yaar...
and i am saying this with all the love mahi
no one can predict the feelings as beautiful as u,
no one can can charecterise the characters such awefully and true..
no one can take such sensitive matters as predict them in such wonderful way u do it...
really a great hatts off to u mahi...
ur the best in anything...
a big hug mahi...
and i am going to miss fate really alot...
love u
ur's
gunjar...

Originally posted by: achu66

Awesome updates
Loved the way you finished it...
The judgement was just awesome... Dev jaise logon ko aise hi sazza milni chahiyeee
It was a wonderful story mahi and one of my favorite ...
Thank you for the PM

first tale me medicin li kya

just thank dear you suport give me courage to
write like this and yes dev punishment is my dream that in our country
also criminal get punishment like this which is needed

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

lovely...

thanks dear one word se age bado dear , mahi need your big comment