MG OS :Geet Hui Maan Ki....Last Part -page 23

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Hi dears😃 I am DISHA...
After reading a lot of Maaneet FFs,SSs and OSs i cannot stop myself from penning down something about our MAANEET😛
So i am here with my 1st OS,it may have 2-3 parts too,pata nahi 😆

just for now i am giving the starting...if i get some idea i will continue😆😆

GEET HUI MAAN KI...




Prologue...(😆i am the 1st to write prologue for os😆😉)

Beena: You are such a characterless girl Geet.Tujhe sharam nahi hai meri pati ke peeche hamesha goom rahi ho.I have never seen a b***** like you till today...shouted Beena standing in the middle of the stage gaining everyone's attention...and eyeing Geet with furious eyes.

Geet was shocked to hear that...

everyone present there too was shocked hearing Beena's words...

Maan who was fuming in anger just dragged her and roared...just shut up your bloody mouth Beena...this gained the reporters attention too.the whole mediawas present as it was a very big party organised by the Khurana Constructions to celebrate the success of their MD, the world's no.1 business tycoon MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

All the reporters just surrounded Maan and Beena just like bees.But Maan's entire focus was on Geet who was completely broken and crying bitterly...

Rep1: Mrs Khurana for what you are accusing Miss.Handa?
Rep2: Is it something related to your personal life?
Rep3:Why Mr Khurana is shouting at you...is there something between Mr Khurana and Miss.Handa??...
and the reporters were going on with their questions...
Beena just showing her fake tears and standing with her hidden smirk...
But for Maan and Geet their whole world stood still.The two souls are totally broken ...their hearts cried that why God gave them this punishment...what did they do to deserve this punishment in their life..was it a sin to love someone...why love this much painful...




Dear i really don't no how to continue this...but i will try my level best to give.i am really poor in writing.so please bear with my mistakes...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

TEASER LAST PART
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congrats for the start

prologue really interesting ..



waiting for u to update ...


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Originally posted by: tabby999


congrats for the start

prologue really interesting ..



waiting for u to update ...


thank you dear...🤗
hope i will get some idea soon😆

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sure u will lot of ideas ..
waiting for u too update ..😆😆
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My friend,
Welcome to the world of writers.

I'm truly happy for you dear...😳😳
The prologue..
Hmmm.. it seems so interesting and you made me impatient to read the first chapter..
Now I'll be like a shadow for you. I will be behind you till you update...
Wish you all the best my friend on this new journey as a writer. May you become a famous writer soon...

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Originally posted by: tabby999

sure u will lot of ideas ..

waiting for u too update ..😆😆


thank u thank u...😆
pls don't expect a lot dear..i am not that much good in writing😉😆
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THANK U DEAR🤗
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Originally posted by: disha31


thank u thank u...😆
pls don't expect a lot dear..i am not that much good in writing😉😆

at least u r writing ..i don't know even W of writing ..
so all the best...
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Originally posted by: tabby999

at least u r writing ..i don't know even W of writing ..

so all the best...


😆
thank u dear for your wishes
i yo don't know...from monday onwards my clg will start😭 don't no whether i will get time to come here...so i will complete this soon😃

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