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Posted: 11 years ago
#31


mujhe bi nahi pata😆
after getting some ideas i will continue dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on ur first OS! interesting prologue! update soon


thank you dear🤗
will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Congrats for your first story :)

Nice pro



waiting ...


thank you dear🤗
will try to update soon😃
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thank you dear🤗



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Originally posted by: mirror1521

hehe...
dishu tujhe b bhut chadh gaya...
congrats buddy
today u proved to b a good junior...😉
all the very best

pro toh achha hai...
bass upd jaldi dena 😉
till than i will think how to kill beena 😡
😆

nice baby...keep it up


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🤗 senior...aapi junior hu na😉
i will try to update senior😃
beena...naam kaisa laga😉😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you dear🤗

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Originally posted by: Mahimaan

res


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devil ki aadat lag gayi 😆


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ha mommy
aap,senior,angel...sab meri guru hai😃
love you🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

Nice start

Prologue 👍🏼


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Hi dears...idea aagayi😆
and nowhere is PART 1...I don't know how to start the story so i wrote something as prologue...SORRY, but now i have to continue with that prologue only...so pls forgive me😛

Geet Hui Maan Ki...




PART 1

Beena: You are such a characterless girl Geet.Tujhe sharam nahi hai meri pati ke peeche hamesha goom rahi ho.I have never seen a b**** like you till today...shouted Beena standing in the middle of the stage gaining everyone's attention...and eyeing Geet with furious eyes.

Geet was shocked to hear that...

everyone present there too was shocked hearing Beena's words...

Maan who was fuming in anger just dragged her and roared...just shut up your bloody mouth Beena...this gained the reporters attention too.the whole media was present as it was a very big party organised by the Khurana Constructions to celebrate the success of their MD, the world's no.1 business tycoon MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

All the reporters just surrounded Maan and Beena just like bees.But Maan's entire focus was on Geet who was completely broken and crying bitterly...

Rep1: Mrs Khurana for what you are accusing Miss.Handa?
Rep2: Is it something related to your personal life?
Rep3:Why Mr Khurana is shouting at you...is there something between Mr Khurana and Miss.Handa??...
and the reporters were going on with their questions...
Beena just showing her fake tears and standing with her hidden smirk...
But for Maan and Geet their whole world stood still.The two souls are totally broken ...their hearts cried that why God gave them this punishment...what did they do to deserve this punishment in their life..was it a sin to love someone...why love this much painful...

someone shown thumps up to Beena...for that she just nodded in acceptance...
Beena's thoughts: becahra love birds...how much they have to suffer 😈
par kya karoon mai...just for the purpose of money i married you Maan..and i know your 1st weakness..your dadima,how easily i tricked her to force you to marry me...pura ka pura pariwaar pagal hai...just you are surrendering to love blindly giving an evil smile....and your pyaari ashique Geet...how will i let her to spoil my mission...i know that you love her so much maan and she also does...and maine uska pura faida utaya 😈..
kal saare properties maine mera naam kar dia Maan...coz of your foolish Dadima's req you too accepted it...itna accha pootha banna sahi nahi hai Maan...ab mera raasta clear hai...ab deko mai kya karthi hoon...

Beena just came out from Maan's hold and marched towards Geet.she just dragged her infront of the media and shouted...
Beena: sab log dehko is characterless ladki ho...jo mere pati k pyaari lover.jiski wajhe se meri puri zindagi bigaad gayi.iske wajhe se mera pati mujshe pyaar nahi kartha.bolo Geet aur kya kya kia tumne... kisi aur ke pati ke saath...chi...sharam nahi hai tujhe...pata nahi aur kis kis k saath roz soothe gai ye...paisoon...just then a sound of SLAP echoed the hall

Maan was not able to bear these words against Geet...he just slapped Beena hard and roared JUST UP BEENA...agar ek aur shaabdh bola to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...he just turned and saw geet who was standing as a lifelesss body with just a blank expression in her face ...the eyes which were the mirror of her soul was blank...suddenly a fear engulped maan...just then Beena shouted..

Beena:dekha...dheka sabne kise aur ladki k liye mera pati mujhse haat utayaa...just another SLAP sound echoed(me )just at that time Dadima entered the hall...and was shocked to see that..

Maan roared: Bakwas band karo Beena...tujhe kya lagtha hai ki mujhe teri baare mai kuch nahi pata..bolo..mujhe teri sab sachai pata hai...agar tum bool gayi mai tume yaad dila detha hoon ki mera naam MAAN SINGH KHURANA hai...teri har moves mujhe pata hai...Beena was shocked...and he said with an evil smile....ek surprise tumhe batana mai bool gaya Beena..jo papers maine kal sign kia all were FAKE😈... this came as another shock for Beena...and do u remember you too signed some papers yesterday...those were our DIVORCE papers...
ground slipped beneath Beena's feet

Dadima: What the hell is this Maan...Beena is your wife and you are behaving with her like this...and Beena told me everything about Geet...chi kaise ladki hai woh...tum dono ka love is FORBIDDEN Maan..how can a girl love others husband..and you too Maan how can you love other girl when you are having your wife..
Beena was little revealed hearing Dadima supporting her,she went and just hugged her and showed her fake tears...Dadima continued...inte hone ke bawajooth bi ye ladki yahe kadi hai(pointing towards Geet).iiski inte himmat.sach mai she is a characterless girl...
Maan shouted ENOUGH DADIMA aap sach nahi jaanthi hai...Geet was not able to bear this..she just ran away from there...Maan was hell shocked he shouted Geet ruko and ran behind her...all the people started gossiping and the media started to create their own stories...

Precap-geet mera haath pakado geet and he extended his hand to her...nahi maan our love is Fordidden Maan and it is a sin...i am leaving Maan...nahi geet aisa math bolo Geet...

nxt will a very small update i think so

NOTE:dears 1 thing i like to say to all ...this is not a rona dhona story😆...u will believe it after reading the upcoming patrs and mostly i will try to finish it today itself😛
and all tomatoes .chappals and eggs are welcomed😆 pls post your precious comments😃

SORRY for spelling ,grammar and hindi mistakes😃


to all dears...who have commented and liked this...



Edited by disha31 - 11 years ago

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