MG OS :Geet Hui Maan Ki....Last Part -page 23 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely teaser.. waiting for update dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely teaser

ab update bhi jaldi dedo😉
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lovely teaser, update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Disha 🤗...hi...thank u for the lovely teaser...so finally Geet hui Maan ki 😃...was so worried about her...update when u can...dont stress...we will wait...all the best for your new year at college 👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice teaser. Will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
dishu dear wait for my comments a little more
i have read it already😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
looking forward to finding out how Maan and Geet came to this situation. Already hating Beena!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲
Dish is this u ?

Iam totally shocked yaat!

What was that? Mahi use to scold u for reading this things now ur writing all this more clearly than wikipedaia...!

Geet iam thirsting- raw word
😲 😆


Truly darling ur the first one who is giving pro & teaser for OS 😆

Now dont tease more and gv update fast

Love u always

Ur basanti/uma
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Hi dears😃..so are you waiting for the LAST PART...after reading it all your chappals,eggs,tomatoes are welcome😆 😆

Geet Hui Maan Ki...



(banner credits goes to my angel(gunjar)..love u dear🤗)

Last Part

Maan just entered the room and saw his beautiful lady of his world,his Geetu. Geet just had her bath and was looking fresh as a flower.Maan came from back and just kissed her shoulder where her skin was exposed. Geet was startled by his kiss.Maan blowed air in her ears and said huskily...its me jaan and a pink cue formed on Geet's cheeks.Then it suddenly hit her that she was angry on him.she started... Maan how many times i told you that i won't talk with you..u brought me here and now not telling when we will go home...Maan made a baby face...Geet everything i made for your happiness only na and he got an angry glare from her. Maan gulped his saliva...poor boy afraid of his sherni wife...but Maan toh Maan hai,he knows how to cool down his wife...just huskily....jaan i am thirsty...she gave him a glare and asked so what??so what...why are you asking such silly things and slowly he slided his hands around her waist and turned her towards him...Geet was not ready of this sudden move he just scooped her in his arms...



Geet I think you gained some more weight...and got a slap form his sherni...so this much courage you have got Mrs.Khurana he asked with his one brow raised...Maan put me down... Geet wriggled in his grip...don't try what is impossible thing Geetu and just winked at her...and he just placed inn the bed and pinned her under him...her all wriggles went in vain...maan leave na..said an angry Geet... but he only increased his grip on her waist...this much anger is not good for health meri sherni...Geet somehow escaped from his grip and tried to go...but maan was too fast..he caught hold of her hand and turned her towards him..the whole room was in complete silence...only they could hear each others heart beat...maaneet's bodies were gluded to each other...Geet just closed her eyes ...maannn moaned Geet as he brought his lips close to her...shh..Geet I told na I am thirsty and just he was about to take her rosy lips...Stopp...shouted Geet...Maan was shocked hearing her shouting...Geet now why are you shouting...what happened now?? asked an angry Maan...

Maan.. see all are confused...what?? who is confused now??Now just you are confusing me Geet said Maan.He was highly irritated now..first no kiss then her confusing talks...ufff...



Then the reality dawned...Geetu everyone will understand it...nooo!!! Maan how they will understand see all the faces..clearly showing that they are confused...even I will be confused if I am in their position...Maan just slapped himself on his forehead...and murmured everything is coz of this choti devil(its me😆)...Geetu close your ears...why??asked Geet suspiciously ...Geettt...ok ok..i will and she just closed her ears...Maan just turned his back towards Geet and said...so all my sweet hearts are confused with the events...and gave a killer smile



...so nothing is my mistake in this...everything is coz of that devil..and he murmured coz of her my kiss and made a baby face...and said don't worry sweeties...everything will be cleared now...and winked and turned back to see a fuming Geet...


Maan why were you calling all as sweethearts and sweeties...huh...just answer me now and gave a deadly glare and threatened him...Maan keep one thing clearly in your over smart brain...except ME...all are your brothers and sisters...keep that in your mind...Maan chuckled seeing her and took that complaining rosy lips into his...


(so all my buddies are confused...😆 😆)

Flash back...

geet aur thoda try karo saying this he extended his hands but geet's hands slipped from and she fell down from the cliff GEEETTT!!!!
Maan cried and she disappeared from his sight..for Maan his world stopped...and on the other side Geet fell down and was covering fully with blood...she just muttered Maann...and just closed her eyes...

CUTTT!!!!...shouted the director...Superb Geet..Well done Maan!! and atonce she opened her eyes and gave her beautiful smile to all and stood up...ouch ... Geetu what happened??are you fine...asked Maan who was really worried about his wife...Maan its just a little cramp said Geet..Geet you just keep quiet...Spottt..shouted Maan at the top of his voice...the spot boy just ran and came with a spray for Geet...

Maan just lifted her in his arms and rushed to the vanity van...placed her on the couch and he sprayed the spray on her legs...Geet just hissed in pain...Maan too felt the pain...Maan asked her to take rest for sometime and he went out...Geet was feeling thirsty so she tried to take the jug which was on the table...so she got up from the couch..at that time Maan entered and rushed towards Geetu what was the need to strain this much...see already you r having pain in your leg...phir is stunt ki kya zaroorat thi...said Maan...Maan woh water..so only..and 1 thing watever u want to say say it in Eng...you no na that i don't understand Hindi much...how much difficulty i am facing in speaking my dialogues in hindi...and she made a baby face...


Maan made her sit and brought water for her...Geet sorry baby...seeing you straining in this condition i couldn't tolerate...and ha..ok...really sholly for talking in hindi...how can i forget that my Geetu don't know hindi..and chuckled seeing her facial expression...

That time the Director and Producer came to see Geet.Geet how are you feeling now? are you alright asked the producer...Geet replied with a smiling face that she as fine and got a glare from Maan...I am soo proud of you Mr and Mrs.Khurana...you two are just brilliant actors...and your name,character,look everything is just perfect for our show...you both are just perfect in both real and reel life...and Maan about what u asked...yes the producer accepted...go enjoy yourselves and after returning we can continue our shoot...saying this both Director and Producer left the vanity van


Maan wat they were saying..after returning shoot??where r we going??geet was going on with her questions...Maan slowly came near her and whispered....Geet don't you think that we left a very important ritual that we must do after marriage... whatt??...offoo Geetu just be4 1 month we got married..don't u think its time for our HM...hearing this Geet blushed...Maan just pecked her cheeks...Geet so today ni8 we are leaving to Paris...hearing Paris Geet just hugged Maan tight...thank u soo much Maan...u no na...how much i love Paris...say thank u in my way Geetu demanded Maan ...Geet became shy hearing his demand..maannn pls leave na...no Geetu way come on i am waiting...Geet just came near Maan and pecked his lips and buried her face into his broad chest...

Flash back ends...


Maan and Geet were panting heavily after sharing a deep kiss...Maan I LOVE YOU...said Geet...I LOVE U TOO Geetu..said Maan and pecked her forehead...


Geetu how much lucky i am to have you in my life...Maan not only you but i am soo lucky to have you in my life...Maan nxt what wil happen in our serial...did Producer or Director said anything??...Geetu anyways in all the serials hero and heroine will become one na...in our serial to that only will happen but in our own magical way baby😉 said Maan ..and Geetu for our nxt coming track we shoul work hard now..why Maan?? asked a confused Geet hearing him...Maan just huskily said Geetu nxt track is Jr.Khurana and hearing this Geet blushed furiously...both just hugged eachother and laid down in the bed...



Geetu though our serial name is Geet Hui Saabse Parayii...in real life Geet Hui Maan ki na...

😳The End😳

NOTE:dears 1 thing i like to say to all ...this is not a rona dhona story
and all tomatoes .chappals and eggs are welcomed😆 pls post your precious comments😃


SORRY for spelling ,grammar and hindi mistakes😃




DOES ANYONE WANT EPILOGUE??😆😆


Edited by disha31 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab update! superb end! thanks 4 a lovely OS! Wonderfully written!

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