~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd || - Page 10

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PART 3:


After a week, like everyday Maan was leaving for work when Geet called him hesitantly. He was confused checking her in a saree ... That too so early, his desire rose to peaks as those water beads cascaded down her body. They never had physical relationship in their marriage of six months. Didn't know why he couldn't be that close to her. It had become his habit to control his desires, he wanted her acceptance on everything he does and probably that had landed their relation into this ... Her excess freedom and his excess set free nature!! He gulped hard to grip his feelings, letting out a sigh when she called him again.


Maan


Hmmm ... he stood watching her changed behavior.


Woh breakfast karoge?? It was more of a request more than an order or a command



Tumne banaya? He asked in astonishment



Hmmm ... she dipped her head in agreement



Without any complains Maan had the breakfast, his eyes shimmered by the time he finished ... Very tasty ... He praised



Geet I am really sorry for the way I yelled at you that day ... mera matlab woh nahi tha ... I know even I left you par tum meri baat nahi maanti ... he didn't wanted to use that word orphan again so he chose his words speaking this time ... agar maine chillane ke alawa samjhaya hota toh shaayad yeh sab nahi hota ... Anyway Aniee found a person who loves her ... aur main uski shaadi karna chahta hoon, help me out Geet ... please jhoonjh raha hoon sabke beech ... meri problems kam nahi ho rahe, saying he left for office.



Their last fight that happened was because Maan was getting busier to settle his sister ... he was busy searching alliances for her. And she was busy stopping him from doing that, trying to make him ignore his family. It was his frustration that made him talk such words, he regretted big time. Though he didn't make it evident that really hurt Maan.



She sat back on the chair thinking about the words he just used ... he didn't yell at her ... like she requested him to have breakfast he had requested her to help him out.



She began to take care of the house and her husband needs slowly ... with that Geet's days began to go well ... She was feeling complete being a wife at home ... Ya home!! and being a software professional at office. Her colleagues were shocked seeing her so active these days, her chirpy nature would encourage them to work more coz she stopped yelling at them for no reason.



Her mind was now into a dilemma ... What does she want from life? Why was she hell bent on divorcing Maan?? What will she do without him?? Wasn't it enough that she had to life a lonely life till an adult that now she is ruining her relationship with husband??



And like Aunty had to talk about the same issue next time when Geet went to talk her got to hear the same ... arey beta mujhe samajh nahi aati ki tumhari generation walon ko agar azaad hi rehna hai toh shaadi kyun karni?? Tumhe khud nahi pata tum logon ko kya chahiye hota hai ... Sometimes I feel it might have been better you guys don't get married ... Jitna jaldi shaadi karte ho unti hi jaldi divorce bhi le lete ho ... aise jaise ki shaadi, saath kuch nahi hota ... Geet kisi bhi shaadi mein compromise karna ek point par jaroori hota hai ... Aazaadi ki chah galat nahi hai ... lekin jaha aazaadi hona chahiye wahi ho toh acha hai ... Chalo thik hai ek kaam karo waise bhi tum aur Maan alag hona chahte ho toh sirf 10 din do ek dusre ke liye ... live for each other phir uske baad agar tumhe lage ki yeh rishta kaam nahi karega ... Aage nahi badhega toh divorce ke liye tab apply kar lena,




Geet dipped her head ... How is she supposd to say this to Maan?? She even thought of telling aunty that it would be better if she speaks to Maan instead of her ... but who is she in between to interfere anyway?? She asked for it still thinking that aunty would agree.



Dekho Geet ek baat bolti hoon recommendation ke saath koi job laga sakta hai toh woh bina talent ke kitne din tikega?? I am asking you in your language ... Work language ... think of it ... I guess its on you husband and wife to talk about the issue ... I am no one beta




Geet now understood she fails big time with relations ... and divorce from Maan means a total failure in personal life. Until now she was only thinking about the equality a male and a female hold ... She forgot that even responsibility is supposed to be taken equally by male and female.



Two weeks have passed ... Geet's office work got more demanding. She used to carry her work to home even.



As the whole office was effected was viral fever it passed onto her. She began to feel weak, fever went high ... there was no one to take care of her. Maan didn't know about her health condition, when she reached office she was fine but with in an hour she collapsed.



Office staff has admitted Geet in the hospital ... Someone called Maan, he rushed to see his wife. But he was not given permission to meet her. She was under observation for 24 hours, and something made him tense. He sat in the lounge all alone ... And this loneliness began to hurt him ... it was unbearable ... Though they were under one floor and weren't talking he used to see his wife safe and sound around him. Suddenly something scared him .. what if something happens to Geet?? What would he do being alone in life?? At some point his sister will get married and leave him ... his mother is already eight years old ... he would have no one with him.




He held his head between his hands and then remembered the house owner ... he had seen Geet talking to her now and then ... Probably she knows about his wife more than him ... probably she might help him out ... Probably she might safe his wife.



Aunty immediately came to meet him ... She saw the love of a husband ... she saw a lover in Maan who was dying for his wife every minute. She assured him that Geet will be fine ... what shook aunty was Maan was crying like a baby when Geet was just having viral fever and the doctors said she will be fine. Just that her fever was communicable they were asking everyone to stay away from her.




Aunty rested her hand on Maan's shoulder and patted ... call your mother and sister.



His eyes filled, damn the thought didn't even pass his mind ... he rang them up immediately and told them that Geet was not fine.



The next morning .. Maan's mother Smriti and his sister Aniee came to the hospital.



Precap: Same!!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its too late but never tat late..

Geet she is just so selfish and i hate tat she wanted Maan to run away from his family ignore them and probably she would not even mind if they died.. and i can still say though she somewhere realized the value of home and maan but she hasnt known or understood wat a family is coz she does not want one.. She only thinks tat she is alone and she should be alone and this is the biggest problem in her.

The Aunty though she tried her best and to some extent she was correct but even then somewhere geet did not get wat she meant.. She wanted to divorce Maan and probably she would if she had not thought a bit on it.. and Maan is also wrong coz he left his family for her but never ever he thought of making her understand tat he had a family and he had to look after them at one point. He had responsibility of his sister even if his dead was alive and this was his mistake and it encouraged geet more.

and strangely yaar they loved each other married but never ever came closer.. is this love or it was like Geet having got maan who liked her and he got geet..
Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi harika..
love the update ..
geet now taking care of her relationship ..she is thinking abt her failure in personal front and now asking aunty for suggestions ,happy that aunty went to meet maan when geet is ill ..
now she can make maan realise too abt the entire folly ..
geet making breakfast and maan asking for support ..
maan tensed seeing geet unhealthy ..
auntygave good suggestion to call maan's maa and sis ..this may help geet to bind with maan's family if maan's maa and annie take care of her ..shower their love on geet ..

thank u for nice update
waiting for next
Edited by tabby999 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan was surprised to see geet's changing behavior but more than that was happy at least she is trying to understanding his point
awesome part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m loving this concept alot
many couple faces this in real life
they forget to differentiate between personal and professional life
or sometimes between parents and wife
awsome update
simply loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update
geet is changing

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet needed reality check here she totally for get the most imp thing here she loves him gosh she is in total mess now
i really wonna thank aunty for putting some brains in to her mind
maan was already in guilt i hope he wont get to know about those divorce matter he will be shattered i really dont want thst to be happen

hope maans mom and aniee will makes her soul taste the strength of relations value of affection and love

thanks for the update in ur busy schedule even

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am loving this...slow progress and aunty g's teaching will surely help them
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan now seeing a changed geet. and geet understood what she lost in her personal life. even maan is responsible for all these because ek haath se taali nahi bajthi somewhere maan bhi shamil hai. now he understood the important of geet in his life. aunty is very lovely and maan and geet are lucky to have her

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