~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd || - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
So some senses did knock into her.,,,

The way the aunty said i hope with those words she could slap her even if she did not have the right...

Geet was self minded and she never thought tat she could ever be wrong.. her way of living was wrong even if she was a orphan coz knowingly or unknowingly she was making maan also into a orphan.. and at least she realized tat she is wrong and now hope she changes
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
very nice start
new concept
like very much
read both parts
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

heyyy gundi

wah wah i am here that was truly surprising to me also lolzz after long time i was actually in IF

we met in ur rooh and used to chat i would be bulley u for updates wow those days were precious the way u wilk reply to me cutely for my non stop demand of updates uff i miss it

those were the days i dont know FB i dont know any one here when i came to FB got frnds got many accusions shit

kash mai yaha hi hothi kisi se nahi mili tho

i miss everything my peaceful alone being myself in IF asking for updates sigh

here i came up again was actually feeling alive must say

i have same excitement to read ur story and ur pace the story took away my Heart again

maaneet were replica of present generations this is situation many facing
geet is modeen era gal and orphan she needed some one to guide her to make her live actually for her love
getting normal thing in stories like maaneet love story but after that how we will mabage is the question
here comes slip of words causes mu for them even geet started thinking maan ruiling her lolzz

hope aunty will guide her like mother and maan needs to understand she is orphan he must makes her understand about family values and bondings

being alone she is thinking in practical and being family head as per now maan is right in his thoughts

but they needed understanding bw them and only love can hold back there bond
i love this story it was practical
sparkle




omg!! such loving and lamba comment thanks sweety😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sdlife19

So some senses did knock into her.,,,

The way the aunty said i hope with those words she could slap her even if she did not have the right...

Geet was self minded and she never thought tat she could ever be wrong.. her way of living was wrong even if she was a orphan coz knowingly or unknowingly she was making maan also into a orphan.. and at least she realized tat she is wrong and now hope she changes



now i love the feel of writing this story didu :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
congrats on the new story!!!!!!
loved both the parts !!!!
its good that geet started to understand maan's needs!!!!
thanks to auntyji's words!!!!
now she is learning cooking too!!!!
good improvement in geet!!!!!
update next part soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
As commented earlier with time and advice and guidance she will understand !!!

Glad she is trying ti understand things and working out.
Nice chapter




Plz update your other works too, its a kind request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

As commented earlier with time and advice and guidance she will understand !!!

Glad she is trying ti understand things and working out.
Nice chapter




Plz update your other works too, its a kind request.



ill defo do that dont worry just two more days😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awsum update
luvd d way d story is going
aww geet is so cute bt is tym independent bhi
bechara maan fas gaya family n geet k bich me
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Finally realization struck her and she's willing to learn
Marriages usually break because of the lack of realizations and understanding. If u are willing to understand the POV of another person, I am sure marriages can be saved!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its a nice part😊..aunty is really nice...now geet is feeling guilty ...moreover she started learning cooking for maan update sooonnn

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