~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd ||

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Awesome update⭐️👏...Maan's mother and Annie's care and their love made her realized her mistakes...Finally Maaneet are happy with family😃 loved it😳

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

It ended so soon

But it was amazing

The thought process and troubles, desire to solve dem, everything...

Aunty was d best. Character...

Finally everyone got a complete family...

V want equal rights but don't want to share responsibilities...so true

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angel0912

@angel0912

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Wow amzing ff it's actually happening nw a dayslove the way aunty guide geet lovely

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Harika 🤗...what is this?...u started and ended a story...how did i miss this ?...sorry for the late comment...i am so proud of u for writing such an amazing and realistic story...much needed for this generation...it is not always me and myself in life...the joy of giving and sharing with family ...the satisfaction and contentment it brings can't be explained in words...so glad Geet found out where she was wrong at the right time with the help of the house owner aunty 👍🏼...her falling ill and realising the value of family ...Annie and MIL moving into the flat...Maaneet milan ...Maan's jealousy and naughtiness 😳...everything was written so beautifully ...awesome story my dear 👏

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

nice concept...
beautifully explained the emotions and their realization...😛
love the akhri khat ...👏👍🏼
waiting fr epilogue...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

part 3
nice part...
Geet is changing...
and Maan is seeing the difference...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Wow now this was indeed an Epic tale

at first I seemed to dislike Geet as she always agrued with Maan to leave India so that they can live their life but I failed to understand that Geet been an orphan had no clue about family life so it was not intentionally done by her .

when Maan got them a apartment than too she was lazy did'nt bother about household duties neither did she attempt to take care of Maan

but again she was not at fault as Maan screaming at her just can't help the situation but she had no knowledge about these things while Maan had the knowledge and all he had too do was make her understand that marriage also has its responsibilities.

well Geet was lucky as the homeowner had taken it in her stride to advice and teach Geet

after Geet came from hospital her behaviour had changed with her inlaws and that added into the marriage strenght .

you had depicted Geet's character so well from someone been

not selfish rather ignorant of relationships grew into the main pillar

of family relations and happiness with unlimited love .

Well Done on a Marvellous Story

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

beautiful and lovely end... Loved this short story...

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nishnal

@nishnal

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

1st u have justified wid geet's character in the story...i appreciate it way to much for the way u made ys show diffrnt angle of geet...when she starts understanding things in better way,...our maan again busy wid his work...bt...truely loves geet alot...