~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd || - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan is surprised to see Geet chnaged so much.. slowly their relation will come back on track.. hope so.. Geet beemar.. n then Maan ealized ow much sh ei imp in his life too along with family.. nice update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...

now geet understood the real meaning of marriage and trying her best to save it...

maan crying like a child seeing geet in hospital...

loved it..

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have no idea HOW I managed to miss your new story! Except that July has been seriously busy!

This story is different from your other works. I am no expert on all your stories (yet!) but this one is more ... ummm real?

There are no enemies intruding on our favorite couple. In fact this time it is Maan and Geet that are their own worst enemies.

The characterization is great. This is not the 'Maan and Geet' I am used to.

These two characters are flawed. But they are flawed by the realities of their lives.

Geet does not know what it means to be in a family, to be a part of a family. She is used to being alone and independent and fighting for everything she wants, whether it is an education or her career.

Maan goes through a tragic experience and the responsibility of being a son and brother fall on him. He forgets he also has another role in life, husband.

Their two opposing views get even more confusing with their insecurities.

Geet has been taking leaps to change her behaviour and now the ball is in Maan's court.

Excellent story. amazing flawed characters. Great writing. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional touching update..te way my maan was shock to see his geet and her changed behaviour was lovely..te way geet trying to change herself realize wat she have been doing till now was lovely emotional..te way my maan pouring his heart saying wat he need, he cant ignore any one in his family, he want his mother, his sister and his love his wife too was lovely emotional..geet too was not wrong actually she was insecure as she have been lived these many years all alone and now wen she got a relation she dont wan to leave him was lovely emotional..te way aunty asking her to give some time and making her realize wat she need was lovely touching..oh god geet was ill and my maan dont know but wen he came to know his pain thinking wat he will do without his geet, now only both realize wat they meant for each other was lovely emotional touching..te way my maan calling aunty and she asking him to call his family was lovely..i love te update so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
meri jaan di SUPERB bhi chota word coz this update was just MAGICAL di ek aur baat kahu I just love the most ke for aap hamain bata rahe ho the actual meaning aur sanctity of marriage aur di pehli baar it's the girl who needs to understand the meaning of it har baar humne dekha hai men trying to understand marriage lekin har baar men hi galat nahi hote ladkiyan bhi hoti hai aur in here geet needs to learn ke wht is the meaning of marriage aur she is learning trying to understand I understand too di ke she was an orphan aur akele rehne ke wajah se she do not understand the relationships much but di har baat ka hal sirf rishta khatam tau nahi hota aur di loved wht aunty said ke shaadi jaldi karte hai aur ek mushkil aaye nahi ke shaadi khatam maan on the BF table apologized for his beahivour aur di he requested her to plz support him as he's getting his sister married aur di again geet got busy in her work aur she got ill aur jab she was hospitalized di tau maan was helpless fearing to loose her even though now they were not talking but he knew ke she's there for him she called the aunty geet talks too aur tht aunty could see true love maan has for geet aur she told him to call his parents aur they came there supporting him calming him ke she'll be fine di I just adore this story coz it's teaching a person like me to respect aur understand aur love marriage aur the man u married to aur his family as well di me will pray for my di's success in all the ways ramadan hai di sabke liye dua karoongi aur di dying for the next update aur di mere pass FB nahi hai I don't use FB lekin mujhe teaser padhne hai di plzzz mere liye GF par teaser update kardo na di plzzz😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update harika...now geet started to think about her realtionship with maan ...may be aunty guidance, suggestions help her in it...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the update ..
i am loving this concept ...geet is changing
and trying tounderstand him and his responsobilities...
even she learn how to cook...
maan wants her help ...
maan tensed seeing geet unhealthy ..
cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏




geet prepare food😲




maan liked it😉




geet had fever😲




update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part...geet now understanding about relations and maan shocked seeing changed geet...ohh come on geet he can't neglect his family...geet having viral fever and maan crying like a baby
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Posted: 11 years ago


LAST PART:


WARNING: strictly 18+!!!


It took a week for the temperature to control ... Geet remain conscious sometimes and unconscious sometimes all through the week. Even if she could open her eyes she couldn't recognize anyone. No one was allowed inside her room coz of her viral fever.



Maan was supposed to leave to Singapore on official work ... aunty assured him that she would take care of Geet along with his family.



Both Aniee and Smriti took good care of Geet ... She was discharged after she got recovered. Geet knew that the reason of her recovery were Maan's family. Though aniee was yonger to her she learnt things which even she doesn't know.



Geet got to know everything about Maan .. from his childhood to his travel to USA which made her understand what family is and how she was living without one.



Geet joined her office back ... every night when she would return home late she used to find her Saasu maa sleeping on the dining table waiting for her daughter-in- law. Geet began to hate her timings ... even aniee used to stay awake waiting for her bhabhi.



She felt warmth in every gesture .. she loved that feeling she gets from loving Maan's mother and sister. She hated herself for keeping them away from herself and Maan.



Why didn't I get this viral fever after I came back to india?? She thought regretting the time she spent away from her mother-in-law.



Geet was in constant touch with Maan, they used to talk on phone endlessly ... Taking chance Geet would not leave to talk to him on skype even.



Suddenly Aniee came up to Geet to tell her about their departure ... Bhabhi its been long we are here, now that you are fine I think we should leave ... Ghar ka halat pata nahi waha kya ho raha hoga .. bhai ko aane mein shaayad aur late ho jayega



Geet was feeling guilty and sad when her Saasu Maa spoke ... haan bte ab hum chalte hain



Saasu maa itne din aap waha kaise rahe mujhe nahi pata ... lekin ab main aapke bina nahi reh sakti ... She said ... thought for a second and continued ... ek kaam karte hai hum teeno saath waha chalet hai aur ghar khali karke yaha wapas aajate hai



In the next week Maan's mother and sister shifted to the flat ... Maan was shocked to see Geet laughing with her Saasu Maa in the kitchen while Aniee was helping them out with cooking.



It was a surprise for him ... His wife blushed as his eyes bore into her back. She was looking sexy in a saree he thought to himself. He still cant forget their wedding night when Geet had a peaceful sleep saying she was tired ... He couldn't force her into his desire knowing she wouldn't like it. And then they got busy with jobs ... Their little romance came to a halt when they landed in India.



Their fights had no end ... Maan didn't even remember when he had a great dinner. He was only staring at Geet she was eating sitting opposite to him on the dining table. He learned how his mother and Aniee changed his wife, he regretted the way he chose to fight with Geet. He could atleast try to explain ... he thought she would accept his family. She was a kid at heart .. knowing this he ignored the way.



He couldn't control until they reached their bedroom ... When he saw Geet trying to pull out her pallu from the pin ... he hugged her from behind kissing her neck violently.



Geet was indeed tired ... but this time she herself wanted to give in. He almost tore her saree in desire, she blushed red feeling her blouse being pulled out.



She hid her naked self in his arms ... I love you, she said tears brimming her eyes ... I am sorry Maan, maine galat kiya ... You left your family for me and when it was my turn to support you I just .... her breath got chocked ... guilt began to eat her.



Aur maine galti ki uska kya?? I am sorry even ... Sach kehte hai shaadi ne mujhe badal diya, I could talk to you .. tell you but I was all the time yelling at you for everything.



Kids always go stubborn when their parents roar on them ... They are supposed to be handled carefully ... Geet was no different. She was a kid at heart, this is how Maan used to handle her during the stages of their love life.



As he turned Geet around, he couldn't stop himself from spreading her legs to drive into her completing their marriage.



Their marriage got into understanding and compromises ... Maaneet loved each other more now. Geet proved out to be a good daughter-in-law.



Maan would go jealous, mad when he would find Geet in the lap of his mother, both would talk and talk non stop ... sometimes at night, sometimes at day. Nights would make him mad with desire and days would make him jealous coz Geet wouldn't share her Saasu Maa with Maan.



He loved his jealousy more than his madness ... he would smile and leave to office.


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Geet yaar I cant find my tie ... Maan screamed out as he woke up late so he was getting late for office. Geet came running to him with a grin ... she knew her husband was in a mood of romance in the pretense of tie. As she began to knot it Maan slipping his hand on her bare waist caressing her, Geet wriggled to let go ... He walked ahead till he reached the door ... pinning Geet against the door he locked it with one hand while his other hand began to undress her.




Maan let me go ... Aapko waise bhi office ke liye late ho raha hai ... Stop it ... She screamed but he placed his hand on her mouth warning her that he would tear her dress. She laid naked on the bed while Maan was fully dressed ... She couldn't even move feeling him lowering his zipper so that he could get an access into her. Geet closed her mouth not to let her moans reach out ... When Maan was done he stood at feet ... Setting his jeans ... tumhara punishment abse yehi hoga agar raat bhar tum maa ke saath hall mein so gayi toh ... Geet's mouth opened wide listening to his shameless warnings. She covered herself with the duvet while Maan pulled it aside and feasted on her curves biting them, sometimes with his palm molding them ... I love you he mumbled not wanting to leave for office.



Well Aniee's love story came to an end ... Maaneet are in a search of a groom ... if you have a capable alliance suggest for her



Thank you so much for the support and love on this story ... ya I would resume my work from tomorrow ... leave your comments for last time here peej😳


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago

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