MG FF- Aaiynaa.. THREAD 3 Part 29/ Pg 11 Aug 1

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(Aaiynaa means Mirror...)

New MG FF-Aaiynaa.. THREAD 1

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Uski har aadat, har harkat...

Sab thi uski parchhayi..

Jaise maano wo uska aaiyena thi...

GEET

A sweet innocent 18 year old girl, having sturdy values. Loved her family to the core but lost them at the early age of 8 years. Circumstances made her only stronger.

Usne knud ko usmein kho diya...

Maano apni parchhayi bana liya...

Apne aayine ko hi apni zindagi bana liya...

MAAN SINGH KHURANA


A 28 year old man of Principles. Does not trust anyone easily. Some hidden pasts made his life miserable but he buried them and constructed a wall around his real self.

Kya tha yeh sirf ek sapna...


Kya hoga jab tuta ho wo AAIYENA???

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Aaiyenaa is a story revolving around two individuals who are different yet very similar to each other. Due to their extreme similarities they attract to each other. But what happens when the present is marred by the past? When your mate is broken beyond repair...

Jabb aapka aaiyena hi tuta hua ho????

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A super big thank you friends, it's only due to your love and above all your PATIENCE that me is back to continue this story. .. Your love pulled me back to writing it... Thank you so much dearies for trusting me and above all bearing with me!! Hope me is able to live upto your expectations in future also!!!😳

LOVE...

Ruchi...

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INDEX

THREAD 1

THREAD 2

PART 27- Scroll Down

PART 28

SUMMARY TILL NOW

PART 29

Edited by ruchs - 11 years ago
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First of all a big walaa hug to all those who motivated me with their comments and waited for me patiently... Love you all dearies!!!
me knows its been ages since me updated and most probably many of you would have also lost track of the story but sachi mien dears, its not that me didn't try... Something or other kept on happening rendering me unable to write anything...
Even today I retyped this part, that's why its a short one... Me knows me being unfair... Ek toh updating after ages and then a short one... But trust me on this one... This is a quite important part and now its time for the climax... Most probably in 2-5 parts we get at the main theme of the story!!
Phew!! The note is bigger than the update!!!😆😆
PMs Later, maybe tomorrow!!

PART- 27

Dev Uncle, this name was etched deep in her memory. After all who can forget that one name which was maybe somehow linked to the reason for your doom in past life? She somewhat remembered his face also, though she was not sure if this Dev was that one or not...

"Bachcha... how are you feeling now??"

Dev sweetly asked the scared 8 year old who was attached to various tubes and dressed up with multiple bandages. But the little girl did not reply, she merely clutched that little pink teddy close to her heart with her only good hand.

"Sweety, don't worry. Jaldi aap ek bahut achchhi jagah jaa paaoge. Waha par aur bhi bahut saare chhote chhote friends milenge aapko..." Dev lovingly told the mini scared cutie while ruffling her hair a little, but as usual the only reply he got was that blank scared stare.

While the only thing running in that little brain was- "She lost everyone... And maybe because of this uncle..."

"Hey!!!"

Geet came out of that shuddering memory when the same guy clicked his fingers in front of him...

"So back to earth... hmmm??? I already met this little muchikin... But yet to meet that daring lady who actually managed to make THE Maan Singh Khurana's life hell..." Dev chuckled...

"Hi..." Geet whispered weakly

"Obviously you don't know me... Am Dev as in Dev Singh Khurana... Dadi's eldest pota and Maan's elder bro..." Dev finished while offering his hand for a handshake...

"Not a good idea bro... You don't know Geet ka jab paara high hota hai na toh ussmein Mike Tyson ki aatma aa jaati hai... She might just hold your hand and throw you somewhere considering how angry she is at the Saudagars!!!" Yash chimed while everyone sniggered seeing Dev's stupefied face...

Everyone laughed even more seeing Dev hastily remove his hand mumbling something about an urgent call while running away upstairs. But Geet was oblivious to all this, she was stuck at just two words... ELDER BROTHER, is he the one???!!!

"What happened Geet? Abhi bhi naaraaz ho??" Maan asked her sweetly, he could make out she was still upset...

"Ummm Nahi... Am okay, but I really need to get somewhere, main Sam ko shaam ko pick kar lungi..." Geet finally spoke as her brain functioned a little..

"Kya hua bete??" this time Dadima asked worried, everyone now was a little worried seeing her so detached...

"Nothing Dadima, wo haan... aaj mujhe uss rent waale apartment ko bhi finalize karne jaana tha, wo now since Sam is here so main hostel main nahi reh sakti na... Bass isliye... Umm I should go now..." Saying this she hurriedly took her purse and went away...

Though no one was convinced but they didn't interfere... But Maan could make out it was something related to Dev bhai... He didn't miss how her face lost colour hearing his name...But the question was how was Dev bhai even related to her or was it just the name... Dev???

PRECAP

Nightmares or some hidden truths???

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NEXT- PART 28

Phew!! Finally done... Me hoping me has not lost the touch!!!

If you guys find anything amiss, just let me know dears!!!! Trying to get back to my schedule but for sometime will concentrate on this FF, maybe 1 or two Twisty updates in between and yes, very soon am going to get my Kaafilaa thread reopened as well!!😳😳

Love you loads!!!

Ruchi😳

Edited by ruchs - 11 years ago
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Awww thanks dear!! Me glad to see at least my one reader!!!😳😳😳
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it u omg itna time k bad update
ia m sooo happy
finaly got the updat e
congrats for new thread n awsummm
update

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continue ur other work tooo
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awsem updATE KUCH ZYADA HI SHORT THA
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good to see you back
and you updated
interesting update
now Dev is he from Geet past
so many questions
cant wait
please cont soon

Edited by kuhu18 - 11 years ago
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yohooo!!! Sam is back but brought sadness and nightmares along... nice work dear... continue soon...
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hai yaar..welcome back.happy to see your update after a long gap..lovely part..pls cont soon..

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