MG FF- Aaiynaa.. THREAD 3 Part 29/ Pg 11 Aug 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice update

yaar was geet 8 years when she met her so called dev uncle.. i ,mean how big is dev


You can say Dev is in mid thirties!!! So ay that time he was around 25-27!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi buddies!! Still trying to get into the flow of writing so please bear with the short updates!! Though its a promise I will try to make longer and quicker updates!!!😳

A big thank you for such a sweet response!! I was dreading that I won't even get now like, so no hopes for comments! But I got so many!! Thank you once again dears and a big walaa hug for motivating me so much!!!😳

I understand many actually maybe almost all of you have lost the story line, so I will put up a summary before I update next. Probably by Monday!!😃

My dear writer friend sdlife, asked me the age of Dev, he is right now in mid thirties so at that time when Geet was 8, he was around 25-27!! Hope that answers your query dear!!😳

There were many more queries but wholly me didn't answer them because all your questions will be answered in next few updates!!!😳

PMs for this part will be by tomorrow maybe!!!

PART - 28

Was it the peaceful serene environment, the sweet occasional chiming of the bell or the fresh smell of various flowers, Geet didn't know, but this place always gave her the peace and much needed space to clear her thoughts. When she sat on her knees with a candle in her hand having an eye-to-eye talk with Mother Mary, she always found herself sharing even her deepest secrets. Though a true Hindu by birth, but it was a Church where she actually found herself in, anytime she needed guidance.

And today was one such day. It had been almost 2 months since she last came here. She had moved on in life, trying her best to shed all that burden of the past. But today that one word had brought all those painful memories back to her. She was back to square one all because of that one name, DEV.

"Why mother, why??? Why is this name intriguing me so much? There must be lakhs of Devs in this world. Then why am I relating this one to him???" Geet questioned the divine figure of Mother Mary while closing her eyes, letting those tears of anguish finally fall freely.

"Prin..Princess... Promi... Promise me... beta... aap darr... darroge... nahi... Aap jiyo... jiyoge... Meri princess... Haa.. haar nahi maa.. maanegi..." rasped a badly injured Rano while extending her shivering hand towards her daughter who herself was crying in pain...

"Promisss me... pri.. princess..."

"Prom.. sob...promise..." cried the little one...

The next thing she knew was she being pushed out of the window and the car roll down the cliff milliseconds later. The only two words she uttered before passing out were- "Maa... Papa..."

Geet hurriedly opened her eyes and gasped as those memories came back to her. She was just eight but that one promise to her mother was what made her fight for her existence till date. She never accepted defeat at any challenge life threw at her.

"Mother, I cannot bring them back. I know. Then why is this entire thing making me so restless? I don't even want any revenge because I don't know whose fault it was. They why is it taking a toll on me? Why do I feel that something bad is going to happen soon? Why???" Geet whispered only to get the silence as always.

KHURANA MANSION

Downstairs everyone was busy making Adi and Pinky turn beetroot red by mercilessly teasing them but Maan was pacing on his personal terrace. He knew that his Geet had undergone a lot in the past, and if his instinct is correct then today something happened that reminded her of it.

"Main toh yeh tak nahi jaanta ki aakhir tumhare past main hua kya tha? Kaise main tumhara dard kam karoon Geet? Kaise?" Maan questioned himself while combing his hair backward, with his hand.

Both of them had questions, but there are some questions that are best left unanswered. Because some answers raise the question on your mere existence.

PRECAP

A Glimpse Of Nandini!!

Okies!! so this is the next part!! Hope me is able to build up the suspense!!!😉😉

Me will try to put up an update and summary both very soon!!

Love you dears!!

Ruchi😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for your reply dear...

Does this mean Dev is somewhere responsible for the loss geet had... and will it effect geet and maan's relation now.. will she lose him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

Thanks for your reply dear...

Does this mean Dev is somewhere responsible for the loss geet had... and will it effect geet and maan's relation now.. will she lose him


he might or might not be responsible dear!!😆😆😆

But one thing is for sure that Geet's past is going to unravel soon!!! About her and Maan's relation, me not know!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Welcome back sweety :)
lovely update asalways :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrast on new thread Ruch
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Posted: 11 years ago
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28

Superb one
waiting to knw Geet past
cont soon..thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm 4 Part 27 bt read n commented already! Js sw u updatd 28 nw! interesting update! Wonder wt Dev did? Emotional Geet! Hope this does nt affect Maaneet's relationship! update soon! Well written

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi ruchs ..
love ur story ..
read in one go ..
full of laughter and emotions ..
maneet first meet at college was suprb ..
geet with samrat emotional ..geet is really great here ..she brought up a infant when she herself a kid ..
love maneet bonding and care for each other ..
samrat genius ...


awesome work ..
waiting for ur updates ..

one more thing ..please give long updates ..
part 27 and 28 was too smal l...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awum update
dev did some thing with geet???
share her heart with mother marry
maan also rest less to think abput geet
waiting for next plzzz update kafilaa too n twist in dewangi

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