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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear!!!!!!!!!!


this is my first comment on your story!!!!!!!!!😛



i like ur stories alot!!!!!!!!! 😛


they are lovely,funny and emotional too!!!!!!!!!⭐️


they have all features!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


great going!!!!!!!!!!!!


coming to update its superb dear!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️ 👏


mr.khanna kuch ajeeb types hai kya...uski beti se bhi zyaada wo maan pe latto hai!!!!!!!!!! 😲 🤣


kab maan ka aur mystry khulega with geet!!!!!!!!!!!!😛



mujhe ye dev suspicious dikhta hai...i mean wo negative ho...just a guess!!!!!!!!! 😆


do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!


love


uma...🤗
Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
is dev good or bad
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Sab log maan ke peeche😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
sab log jane anjane maan ke bare main hi soch rahe hain...
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Posted: 11 years ago
post in the new thread dear...

FF Daily Updates Thread 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4115693/ff-daily-updates-thread-12
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 18

Maan calls Dadi...hare hummare Savithri Devi khurana...

She is in Mumbai...still young(?) and active taking care of Khurana Constructions...

Tabhi toh Maan aaise awaara bankke goomthe rehtha...

He is yet to be crowned as the prince of KC...

As of now it Queen raj at KC...

Annie is there helping dadi...

And she has got Arjun alongside...he is her childhood friend and would be husband...

Annie's sagayi honewali hai...

Aur woh apne pyaare bhai ka intrezaar kar rahi hai...

Maan: dadi, how are you?

Dadi: so you still remember your family?

Maan: Dadiii, Annie kaisi hai?

Dadi: fine bete, do din mein usske sagayi hai aur aapko abhi abhi usski yaad aayi?

Maan: sorry Dadi, I have got some important work

Dadi: aaise kaunsi kaam hai bete? Aur aapko kaam karne ki kya zaroorat? Aap bas Mumbai wapas aayiye, ab humse nahi hoga, hur aap jaanthe haina ki hummare palpitations aksar raise hojaathe hai

Maan smiles...

Maan: haan haan Dadi, par mein ye kaam chodkke nahi aasaktha

Dadi: kaam kaam kaam? Hum kaam nahi karthe hai kya? duniya mein sirf aap kaam karthe hai kya?

Hum kuch nahi jaanthe, humme apne Maan wapas chahiye, bas

Maan: Dadi, meinne kissiko wada kiya hai Dadi, aap chahathe hai ki mein apna wada chodkke wapas aaoon?

Dadi: whatever? Aap kal aarhe hai ya sagayi bhi humme kudh aapke bina manage karna padega?

Maan: nahi dadi, mein kal pacca Mumbai aaraha hoon, mere tickets bhi aagaye hai, aap bas Annie ko samjayiye

Dadi: lo, aap apne behen se hi baat karlo

Annie: bhai, aap Mumbai pohunch gaye? Mujhe patha hai, aap mere liye gift kareedhna chahathe, right?

Maan: haan Annie, mein kal zaroor gift lekhe aatha hoon, tumme kya chahiye?

Annie: kal? Lekhin bhai aap aaj aanewale the?

Maan: I'm so sorry

Annie: mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni, aur mujhe aapki gift bhi nahi chahiye

Maan: Annie, don't worry, I will be there at the right time

Annie: OK then, you carry on with your work,annie ki sagayi apne aap ho jayegi

Maan:Annie...Annie...

Annie cuts the call

Maan leaves for Mumbai...he will have to stay there for atleast a week to console Annie...

It's winter holidays and Pinky and Tasha went home...

Uncle was abroad and he wanted Geet to stay with Sam...

So Geet stayed back...

Sam is happy that she got back her freedom...

But Maan is always thinking of Sam...

Maan Mumbai mein hai par usska mann toh yahi Delhi mein hai...

He keeps calling Manisha, Adi and Romeo to know what Sam is doing...

Sam is enjoying herself...she is more interested to be left alone...

just she and her music...no one to disturb...

Geet too leaves her alone...she has been tired of being followed all the time...

She needs this break...

In the meantime Dev meets Geet often...

Sam is happy listening to music and staying at home ...

Uncle doesn't want Sam to leave the house, Maan is also not there, so it's better for her to stay at home...Sam doesn't complaint, as far as she is free from Maan she is happy...

Geet finds it boring sitting at home...

Geet has started her evening walks with Dev...

Geet starts enjoying his company...

One evening...as Geet and Dev walked along the lonely lanes enjoying each others company...

Geet: toh Mr.Handsome ka kya hua?

Dev: I think, ussko kissi se pyaar ho gaya

Geet: what? That rascal loves me? Usski ye himmat?

Dev: oohhh wwohh Geet, tum usski baat kar rahi thi? Mein apne baat kar raha tha

Geet: what?

Geet blushes...

Geet Khurana's photo.
Dev: maybe I'm in love with someone?
Geet: mr.Handsome, atleast now you should tell your name

Dev: Dev, Dev kapoor

Geet: Dev, nice name

Dev: sirf naam achcha hai?

Geet smiles...: abhi toh sirf naam achcha lagtha hai

Dev: chalo koi baat nahi, jaise bhi ek shuruaat toh hui haina?

After the holidays Geet can't go for her walks with Dev...

She is missing his company...

Pinky aur tasha bhi wapas aagaye...

Aur hummara MSK bhi wapas aagaya...

Dev keeps calling Geet often...

Sam, Pinky aur atsha ko shak hotha ki ye kaun bar bar Geet ko callkar arha hai?

Sam thinks that maybe it's that caller, still bothering Geet...

Sam: Geet, kaun tha?

Geet: Mr.Handsome

Sam: what? He still calls you? Tum usse pyaar karthe ho? ye kab hua? Geet, this is silly, how can you trust him?

Geet: hare Sam, ye woh nahi hai, he's my new friend

Sam: friend?

Geet: haan

Sam: kaisa friend? Aur tumne mujhebhi bathaya nahi?

Geet: itna bhi khaas friend nahi hai

Sam: din mein so bar phone kartha aur tum kehthi ho ki khaas nahi?

Geet: kya?

Now Geet realizes that she had become addicted to Dev's talks...

Sam: if you don't want to tell me, then no problem

Sam gets angry...

Geet: hare aaise koi baat nahi hai, I'm not sure myself, I'm scared, kya yahi pyaar hai?

Tasha: silly girl, ye pyaar nahi hai toh kya?

Pinky: lekhin woh tujhe ek bar bhi dinner pe nahi lekhe gaya?

Tasha: silly you, you should marry a chaatwala, roz wahi tujhe kila saktha

Pinky: Tashaaa

Sam: Geet, are you serious?

Sam is worried about Geet...

She is so innocent...she doesn't know what is good and what is bad...

Geet: patha nahi

Sam: what? Geet, you must be kidding

Geet: if I'm in love you must be the first person to know, haina?

Sam: Geet, you better be careful, iss umar mein toh humme patha hi nahi chaltha ki kab humme kisse pyaar hojaatha aur kyun?

Geet: Sam, kya baat hai? aajkal tum pyaar ka bashan dene lagi ho

Geet winks ...: shayad tumme bhi pyar ho gaya?

Sam: pehle tum apne barein mein socho aur pehle mujhe usse milna hai, kab milaoge?

Geet: Sam, pehle mein usse baat karthi hoon, I know he loves me, but what about me? I'm so confused

Sam: tum pehle ussko ghar lekhe aao, phir mein tumme bathathi hoon ki sach mein tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai ya nahi, teek hai

Geet: teek hai

Dev is out of town and Geet promises to bring him home as soon as he comes back...

Next ady they go for shopping...

Manisha and Romeo bhi saath chalthe hai...

Mr.Khanna ke orders...Sam kahin bhi akhele nahi jayegi...

They go to a mall...

Romeo tasha ke peeche pada hai...

Manisha and Pinky KFC chale gaye...

Sam wants to buy a suit for her b'day...

Geet helps her choose...

They are at a boutique...

Sam is in the trial room...

Geet is waiting outside...

Dev calls...he's back...he wants to meet Geet immediately...

He is at a nearby shop...

He wants to get her a ring...

Geet hesitates...Dev wants her to choose...

This is the first gift that Dev is getting for her...

Geet couldn't say no to him...

Sam just hears everything...

She just comes out...

Sam: Geet, kaun? Mr.Handsome?

Geet blushes: haan

Sam: kya baat hai?

Geet: kuch nahi, tum pay karkke aao, mein abhi aathi hoon

Geet goes to see Dev...

Sam too follows her...

Maan calls Romeo finding their house locked...

Romeo tells him that they are at the mall...

Maan also comes there...

He wants to see Sam...

Maan: Romeo, tasha

Romeo: Maan?

Maan: Sameera kahan hai?

Tasha: she is at the boutique, you don't disturb her now, I warn you, hare rukho

Maan rushes to the boutique and finds sameera missing...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
both maan n dev r very confussing

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update!!!Annie is angry on Maan about that he have no time to spend with her...Dev wants to buy a ring for Geet...Maan searching Sam in the Mall...loved it so much...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful part... confused??? yes dear...akhir yeh ho kaya raha hai????
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey!!!!!!!!!!😛

superb update dear 👏


but really eager to know the mystry...


its becoming confusing now 😕


ye maan ko sa******a ke piche ghoomna band kar vavao 😡 😆

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