DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part...maan searching sam in mall uff when he will leave her
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
missing maaneet😭
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Part - 19

At the mall...

Pinky is at the food court while Tasha is at a designer boutique with Romeo ...

Maan is frustrated finding Sameera missing with her friends...

abhi bhi Maan ko Geet ki yaad nahi aayi...

Maan asks Pinky and Tasha...they also didn't know about Sam, they say that she was with Geet only...

Maan gets very angry with Geet, it's always Geet who keeps troubling Maan, how nice it would be if Geet isn't Sam's friend, Maan would have been much happier then...

Maan bahut pareshaan ho jaatha...

Sab Sam ko dhoondhthe hai...

Maan calls Sam...par sam ka phone manisha ke paas hai...

Maan is really pissed off...

He scolds Manisha & Romeo for being so careless...

Maan calls Geet...he had no other option left...

Maan knows that Sameera will be with Geet only...
kya karein? Maan ki kismet hi karab hai...
Geet: halo

Maan: Sam kahan hai?

Geet: mall mein

Maan: yahan nahi hai

Geet: what?

Maan: tum kahan ho?

Geet has followed Dev's instructions and has taken the wrong way...

She is staranded at some place...she finds it scary out there...there is no one there...

Geet tells Maan where she is somehow...she tells him the landmarks she had crossed and Maan got where she was...it's a dangerous place mostly known for the notorious goons...

Ye ladhkki wahan kyun gayi?

Ab Sam bhi wahi hogi...iss pagal ke wajhe se Sam kahin mushkil mein fusjaathi toh?

Maan can't imagine what would happen next...

He just rushes to his car and drives as fast as he could...

Maan locates the place and he goes in search of sam...

Maan: sam...sam...

Geet calls Dev...

Dev: sorry Geet, mujhe koi urgent kaam hai, I'll call you later

Geet: Dev...halo...Dev...

Maan just comes running...

Sam bhi aajaathi...

Koi gunde unkke peeche kar rahe hai...

Sam: Geet

Geet: Sam, tum yahan kya kar arhi ho?

Sam: kahan hai woh?

Geet: kaun?

Sam: Mr.Handsome, tum usse milne hi aayi haina?

Geet: he is not here, he had some other work

Sam: joot, tum mujhse nahi milaoge?

Geet: sshhh, koi aaraha hai

Those goons chase them...

Maan comes in time...he is relieved only after seeing Sam safe...

Maan pehle Sam ko wahan se lekhe jaatha...

Sam: Geeet

Maan: tum jao
Maan is very tensed...he is worried as if his life is in danger...
Maan holds Sameera's hands and forcefully takes her with him...
Maan may not bother about Geet, but Sam can't leave Geet alone...
Sam tries to go back to Geet...

Sam: nahi, chodo mujhe, Geeet

Maan gets angry...he stops and shouts...
Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?

Maan stares...

Sam had to go...

Romeo bhi peeche peeche aajaatha...

Maan: Romeo, tum Sam ko lekhe jao, sambalkke

Maan is very worried...

Romeo takes Sam back...

Bechari Geet fusgayi...

Ek gunda Geet ke haath pakadtha...but Maan returns to save Geet...

Maan had to help her for Geet is Sam's best friend and Sam will never forgive Maan if Geet is hurt...Sam will automatically blame Maan only though it's all Geet's stupidity that got them into trouble everytime...
Geet: bachao...bachao...
Maan rushes to help Geet hearing her voice...
Maan punches him on his face...

He pulls Geet and takes her to a safe corner...

Maan: tum yahi raho

Geet Maan ke peeche hi jaathi

Ye ladhkki toh kissi ki baat nahi sunthi...

Maan fights with them and saves Geet...

Geet bahut dar gayi...

Geet ka duppatta kahin ghir gayi...

Maan takes it and covers her...Geet is still shivering...

Maan's heart melts seeing her frightened like a child...
Maan embraces her and comforts her...

Maan: tum teek toh haina?

Geet: hmm

Maan: gabrao mat, woh log chale gaye

Geet holds his hands tight and rests on his shoulders...

She just needed this now...

Adi comes...

Adi: Maan...Maan

Maneet step back...

Maan: Adi,Sameera kaise hai?

Adi: she's fine, she is in the apartment

Maan looks relieved...

Adi: Geet, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: hmm

Maan is still staring her, he is really angry with her...
Maan: chalein Adi?

Wapas jaathe waqt...

Geet is very angry with Dev...

Ab ussko itna zaroori kaam kya ho saktha?

Maan: tum wahan kyun gayi?

Geet: mein?

Maan: haan, tummare wajhe se sameera kathre mein fasagyi

Geet: mere wajhe se?

Maan: tum hamesha aaise kyun karthi ho?

Geet: kaise?

Maan: itna stupid ladhki ko meinne aaj tak nahi dekha

Geet: kya?

Maan: kabhi toh apne dimag ka istemaal karo, ab tum bachi nahi ho, samji?

Adi laughs...

Geet: babaji? ye kaise aadmi hai, ek ladhkki abhi abhi apne jaan aur izzat konewali thi, ab uss par itna bhi taras nahi hai?

Ghar jaane tak Maan Geet ko aaisa hi sunathe rehtha...

Geet apne khaan bandh karkke beitjaathi...

Adi feels bad for Geet...he supports her...

Adi: Geet, next time careful rehna, teek hai

Geet: hmm

Maan looks at her in the mirror...

She is very upset...

But Maan can't forgive her for getting Sam into trouble unnecessarily...

Na hi ye wahan jaathi aur na hi Sam isske peeche peeche wahan jaathi...

Aaj agar Sam ko kuch ho jaatha toh Maan kya karega?

Jaise bhi Sam ko iss pagal ladhkki se dhoor rakhna chahiye

Tabhi toh Sam sudhar sakthi, warna isskke saath rehkke woh bhi kabhi kabhi bewakoof ban jaathi...

Maan keeps staring Geet, as if she has commited some crime...

Achca hua Maan sahi waqt pe pohunch gaya, warna shayad aaj Geet apne galthi ke liye zindagi bar pachthakke rehthi...

Itne mein bhi Geet ko Maan ki chot ki chintha ho rahi thi...

He is bleeding...he has hurt his hand while trying to save her from the gundas...

Geet looks at his hands ...

Maan hides it from her...he doesn't want her to think that he did this for her...

Isse koi galatfami toh nahi ho jaaye? Mein toh ye sirf Mr.Khanna ke liye kar raha hoon...

Aur patha nahi aajkal mujhe kya ho raha hai?

Mein kitna bhi koshish karoon ye ladhki mujhe bar bar distract karthi rehthi...

Aaj bhi dekho, mujhe toh isse dhoor hi rehna padega, warna mere nishani galat ho jayegi...

Aur MSK har jaatha, ye nahi ho saktha, MSK kabhi bhi kissi bhi kaam mein har nahi saktha...

Maan issko bhool jao aur apne kaam pe dhyaan do, tum yahan isske liye nahi aaya hai, tum yahan Mr.Khanna ke liye aaya hai aur tera nishani Sameera hai, ye nahi...

Geet bahut bechain hojaathi, ussko ek anjaan dard mehsoos hotha...

Geet ko bahut bhura laga, lekhin patha nahi kyun?

Shayad Maan jo bhi kehtha hai teek hi kehtha hai?

Shayad Geet ko thoda aur savdhaan rehna chahiye tha?

Shayad aaj usskke wajhe se Sam ki jaan ko bhi kathra ho jaatha...

Geet keeps thinking about what Maan said...

Mr.khanna calls Maan and thanks him for saving his daughter...

Just then Geet also thinks that she should thank Maan for saving her...

They arrive at the house and Geet gets down and walks towards Maan to thank him...

Maan doesn't want to face her...Maan leaves in a hurry...

Geet keeps looking at him till he disappears...

Adi: Geet, toh mein chaltha hoon, gud night

Geet: gud night Adi

Adi: tum isske barein mein zyada mat sochna, issme tummari koi galthi nahi hai, you go and take rest, you are so tired

Geet smiles...: teek hai

Geet feels that Adi is so kind and concerned, not like that Dhust danav...

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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ME FIRST ...
nice part...bechari geet karne kuch jati hai aur ho kuch or jata hai...
yeh maan geet se itni nafrat kayun karta hai ???
cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Ye maan hamesha sam ke baare mei hi soch tha hai
Poor geet wanted to say thanks to maan but he walked away
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...why he is so concerned for sam
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh humesha aise kyun hojathi hai geet karna kuch chahthi hai aur kuch aur hojathi hai aur maan uspar gussa hojatha hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!!!!!
why maan is behind sam, what is his hidden motive????

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 20

Geet's terrible encounter at the shopping disturbs her very much and she keeps thinking about it all night...
she is surprised that Maan came to her rescue despite of their hatred...
maybe he wanted to prove his might and impress Sam...he has already impressed Mr.Khanna and this might be his tricks to win over Sam's heart...
He was more concerned about Sam but he also didn't want Geet to get hurt...he saved her and in the process got hurt himself and made sure that Geet she is not hurt...he even got angry only b'coz of her stupidity and her careless behavior running into trouble all the time...
Geet couldn't believe him entirely, he might have faked the whole event in order to get closer to Sam...and to some extend he has succeeded for Sam might not be impressed but her father is...
Next day...Dev comes to know about the incident...
He feels guilty that it's his fault to leave Geet like that...
But Geet had taken taken the wrong way by mistake and Dev had some emergency and he left...

Dev calls Geet...

Dev: Geet, are you alright? I'm really sorry Geet, I shouldn't have left , sorry Geet

Geet: tumme ab koi zaroori kaam nahi hai kya?

Dev: Geet, what happened? Who log kaun hai? kyat um unkko jaanthi ho?

Geet: why are you so bothered? You are too busy, I can take care of myself

Geet bahut naraaz hai, she cuts the call & switches off her mobile...

Dev waits for her near her college and tries to apologize...

Geet ignores him...but Dev must talk with her ...

Dev needs her more than anything and wants her to know the truth and why he had left...then she can decide for herself whether to break up or not...
But Dev can't leave Geet, she is so special for him...
Next evening Dev follows Geet after college...

He stops her and corners her...

Geet: mujhe jaane do

Dev: pehle mere baat ko suno

Geet: mujhe kuch nahi sunna

Dev: lekhin tumme jaanna hoga ki kal mein kahan gaya

Geet: mujhe kuch nahi jaanna

Dev: Geeet

Dev shouts angrily...he is desperate to talk, he wants to speak with her somehow...and so he gets angry...

Geet sees him getting angry for the first time...

Geet stops to hear him...

Dev: ye dekho

Dev shows a card...

It's a tahnkyou card given to him by a little girl Tanya...

Dev: ye kaun hai?

Dev: kal isske papa ka accident ho gaya, he needed blood, my friend called me, I went to give him blood, now he is fine, Tanya is just 7 years old, she already lost her mother, tum bataho, ab meinne kaunsi badi galthi kardhi?

Geet: woh...meinne galat samja

Dev: tum toh hamesha mujhpe shak karthi rehthi ho

Geet: lekhin kal toh meinne tumme bahut miss kiya tha, agar uss DD ke jagah tum hothe toh mein kitna kush hothi?

Dev: agar mujhe patha chaltha ki tum musibat mein ho toh mein tumme chodkke kaise jaatha? Mujhe toh kal raat hi patha chala ki aaisa ho gaya, mein toh raat bar tummare barein mein sochkke kitne pareshaan tha? Magar uss choti bachi ko akhele chodkke kaise aasaktha? Aaj subah hi usskke papa ki hosh wapas aayi, she was so happy, she made this for me

Geet: kya mein usse mil sakthi hoon?

Dev: kyun? Tumme yakheen nahi hotha?

Dev shows some pictures of the girl and her father on his mobile...

Geet: mera woh matlab nahi tha, I'm sorry

She forgives him...and she likes his helping nature...

he is always like that, he has helped Geet many times...
Geet realizes that Dev is truly a very kind person and it's not just about Geet alone, slowly Dev makes way into her heart...
though Dev gets closer to Geet, Geet's mind is only drawn towards Maan...
Geet wants to know more about him and his intentions, why is he here?
her suspicions grow bigger as she gets to know him more...
Geet starts to notice Maan and his acts unknowingly...she is kind of curious and also attracted towards him...his presence gives her goose bumps and she tries to avoid him...
Sameera still hates Maan since he is after her 24*7 invading her privacy...
she wants to get away from this snooping and be a free bird as she always used to be...
That Sunday...

They plan a picnic to a nearby resort...

Sam had called her dad and made all the arrangements...

Mr.Khanna asked sameera to take Maan along but sam refused...

So he asks her to take Manisha and romeo with them...

Sam doesn't like this deal either...

But it's better to have them instead of Maan...

It's Sunday...they set out earlier...

On the way...

Sam: Romeo, gadhi rokho

Romeio: oar m'am, humme aage jaana hai

Sam: just stop, humme yahan photos lena hai

Tasha: Romeo, hummare saath photo nahi keechoge?

Romeo applies the breaks...

Geet: Sam ,ye jagah bahut sundar hai

Sam: haan, sab jaldhi uthro

Tasha: Pimky, kya dhoondh rahi ho?

Pinky: woh...snacks bag

Geet: Pinky, pehle photo badh mein sancks

Pinky: hare Geet, bhook se mera chehra kitna dull dikhtha haina? Thoda kahlethi hoon, haan milgaya

Geet: tum na...khathe hi raho, chalo Tasha, hum chalthe hai

Sam: Romeo, manisha tum log bhi aajao

After a short photo session...

Tasha geos and checks the keys...they are nto in the car...

Sam: kay hua?

Tasha: yahan nahi hai

Pinky: yaahn hai, ye lo sandwich

Tasha: mujhe nahi chahiye, silly you

Tasha Romeo ke paas jaathi...chabhi usskke paas hi haina?

Tasha: Romeo

Romeo: Tashaji!

Tasha: aao, hum ek sanp leteh hai, Sam, tu tayaar hai kay?

Sam: haan, haan, mein tayaar hoon

Sam winks...

Romeo wouldn't believe his eyes...

Tasha somehow gets the keys...

Tasha: Sam, ho gaya

Tasha escapes with the keys...

Sam: Manisha tum bhi aao, an tum donno pose karo

Sam: say cheese

Tasha: Geet, get in, fast

Geet: par sam

Tasha: woh aajayegi, Pinky, hatto

Sam too steps backwards towards the car...

She pretends to focus and gets in the car...

Sam starts the car and drives away leaving behind Romeo and Manisha...

Romeo: hare rukho

Sam takes off in seconds...

They take the cut road to the jungle instead of the main road...

They just want some adventure...

Romeo is scared...

He immediately calls Maan...

As Mr.Khanna had already informed Maan about their picnic Maan is already on his way...

Sam just loves this long drives...

Mr.Khanna never allows her to drive fast...

Moka milthe hi Sam gadhi churakke le gayi...

There is no stopping her...she races faster and faster...

Geet: Sam, dhere chalo

Tasha: Sam, you are too good

Sam: I know, I am the best

Pinky: hare, hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Sam: kisse patha?

Geet: Sam, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai

Tasha: Ms.Chinthamani, fikar mat karo, Sam ke paas license hai, aur yahan koi nahi aayega

Pinky: aur hummare paas khana bhi hai

Geet: Sam, tu kya kar rahi ho?

Sam: just chill, let me enjoy Geet

Sam is driving far into the jungle...

Geet is so scared...yahan toh koi bhi nahi hai...

This is not looking good...

But Sam is not in a mood to listen...

Geet just prays to her babaji for their safety...

Ab toh babaji hi hummare madat kar sakthe? Babaji, aap sun rahe haina?

precap...

babaji madat karthe hai ya nahi par babaji zaroor kissi (MSK) ko Geet ke madat ke liye bhejdenge...haina?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


but desperate to know about maan more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


missed maaneet moments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭


precap is intresting dear...!!!!!!!!!!!!😛 😉 😆


❤️


Uma...🤗


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