DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 14
awesome dear...
Geet and her antics...
bechara Maan...
but hes after Sam that am not able to compromise...
always used to Maan chasing Geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 15
awesome...
Geet doubts him so much...
and Maan his intention is different...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update... dev is so nice and helpful or just pretending like this???
sam drove so fast and they reached near jungal...
maan ko to ana hi hai help ke liye par kiski geet ki ya sam ki ?
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...geet in jungle aur maan na aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!!Geet is angry on Dev after the mall incident...Dev told about his situation she forgive him.
.Geet suspecious Maan's intentions towards Sam...she curiously know about Maan...Geet-Sam and Pinky are in jungle...hope Maan will save them on right time...missing Maaneet moments..
Loved it so much...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 21

Sam keeps driving crazily...

Geet hears some unusual sounds that increase her fear...

Sam looks at Geet...

Sam: Geet, kya hua? Tum itne chup kyun ho?

Geet: Sam, mujhe lagtha hai ki humme wapas jaana chahiiye

Tasha: Geet, tum itna kyun darthi ho?

Sam: haan Geet, this is safer than the city, yaahn ka janwar toh insaan se bhi behthar hai

Geet: janwar? Kaisa janwar?

Tasha: sher, balu, haathi

Pinky: mujhe toh Bandar se hi dar hai, woh hamesha hummare kahne ko cheenkke jaatha

Tasha: pinky, tumme abhi bhi sirf kahne ki chintah hai?

Geet: Sam, ye koi mazak nahi hai, chalo hum wapas jaathe hai

Sam: Geet, hum hamesha yahi nahi rukhenewale hai, bas thode dhoor jaathe hai aur wapas chale jaathe, teek hai

Geet: teek hai

They come across a stream...Sam stops the car...

Everyone jumps out and ehad to the water except Geet...

Geet ko tehelna nahi aatha haina?

Sam: Geet, tum bho aao

Geet: nahi

Pinky: Geet, tum ayhi beito, aur snacks bag ko sambalo, tehelne se zyada bhook lagtha haina?

Tasha: Pinky tum bhi apne snacks ke paas betikke Geet ko company do

Pinky: hare, wait for me guys

Geet follows them and she also wants to enjoy just like them...

Sam: Geet, ye bahut shallow hai, tum bhi aao

Geet: anhi anhi, mein yahi teek hoon

Sam winks at tasha...tasha samaj gayi...

Tasha secretly goes behind Geet and pushes her into the water...

Geet bajut dar jaathi...

Pinky: Geeet

Sam helps her get up...

Sam: Geet, dekho, pani bahut kam hai, it's only knee high

Geet: Sam, mujhse nahi hoga, tum ajanthi haina mein pani se kitna darthi hoon, mein tum logon ko disturb nahi karna chahthi hho, you enjoy, I will wait near the car...

Geet leaves that place immediately...

She is afraid that Sam would definitely try some pranks ...

Maan just comes and finds Romeo and Manisha standing alone...

Maan: Romeo, gadhi akahn hai?

Romeo: woh , sameera m'a, lekhe gayi

Maan: kya?

Manisha: sam baby sab ko lekhe chali gayi

Maan: Romeo, tum driver ho ya Sam?

Romeo: woh , humme ullu banakke chali agyi

Maan: tum logon pe barosa karna hi bekaar hai, Mr,Khanna ko kya jawab doge?

Romeo: Maan pls, hummare madat karo

Maan: teek hai, tum log ayhi wait karo, mein unkko lekhe aatha hoon

Romeo: thanks

Maan: tumme resort ka patha maloom haina?

Romeo: magar woh log iss atraf gaye hai

Maan: what? Jungle ki taraf?

Romeo: haan

Maan: tumme rokha kyun nahi?

Romeo: hum toh yahan kadhe the, Sam m'am gadhi lekhe bahut tez chale gaye

Maan: aur tum dekhthe hi rahe?

Romeo: iss atraf koi gadhi bhi anhi aatha, hum kya kar sakteh?

Maan: ye tum Mr.Khanna ko bathao

Maan tries to call him...then he stops,,,,unkko pareshaan kyun karein?

Pehle inkko jaakke dektha hoon...

Maan sets out to the jungle...

Maan goes into the jungle hoping to find them soon...

He comes across the car and gets out only to see it empty...

Maan is worried, ye log kahan chale gaye?

He goes in search of them and finds Geet ...

Geet is standing there fully wet trying to dry her duppatta in the wind...

She unties her hair and enjoys the cool breeze...

Maan just keeps staring her...sorry yahi pics mille...you imagine the BG...

He can't take his eyes off her...

He is mersmerised by this wet beauty...

He slowly moves closer...

Geet is waving her duppatta...

Maan gets near her from behind and catches hold of her hands and turns her around to look at her beautiful face with the water droplets still droping from her hair ...

Geet is shocked to see Maan and she lets off her duppatta...

She is electrified by the touch...and she just stares him...

Maan moves her hair aside and looks into her eyes...

Maneet eyelock...mahi...

They are lost in each other for a minute and they feel some strange bliss in their closeness...

Some new feeling confusing both , but wanting more of that hidden pleasure...

Still wanting to explore each other more deeply...

Caught in the unexpected trance Maan forgets Sam for a moment...

He wants to continue this... take her in his arms and hide her deep inside the jungle where no one would find them...

He wants to have her for himself...take her far far away fron everyone and keep her for himself forever

Geet realizes what's happening...

She steps back and tries to take her duppatta...

Maan tries to help her...

He takes it and gives it to her...

Geet: tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet just utters those words just for the sake of irritating him but she is very haooy to see him there...

She felt so relieved to see him...she was so scared till she met him...

Now she need not worry for she has got her backup ready...

She is back to her sherni avatar...agar Maan paas hai toh Geet kyun daregi?

Geet: kya dekhthe ho? woh halo, Mr.Maan Singh Khurana

Those words bring Maan back to his senses...

Maan: pehle tum bathao, tum yahan akhele kaise aayi? Sam kahan hai?

Geet: woh, sab wahan naha rahe hai

Maan: what? Iss jungle mein? Woh bhi akhele?

Geet: tumme yahan kissi ne nahi bhulaya

Maan gets angry...

Maan: tummara dimag karab ho gaya hai kya? iss jungle mein tumlog akhele kya karne aaye?

Geet: ye hummari gadhi hai aur ye hummara picnic hai, tumme kyun problem hotha hai?

Maan: Geet, behas mat karo

Geet: tum yahan kyun aaye ho? chale jao yahan se, abhi, warna mein chillakke sab ko bhulaoongi, Saam, Pinkyyy

Geet starts to shout...

Maan shuts her mouth...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...

Geet is scared...

Maan: jaldhi jaakke sabko bhulao, humme jaana hai, Khanna uncle ka phone aaya tha

Geet: kya? Uncle ne tumme kyun call karenge? Tum joot bol rahe ho

Maan: tum pehle sabkko lekhe aao, humme ghar jaana hai, abhi

Maan stares...Geet runs off...

Geet goes and tells them that Maan has come to take them home...

Tasha: what? Hummara picnic?

Sam: ye kaun hotha hai humme rokhnewala?

Sam is very angry...

Ye Maan hamesha mera peecha kyun kartha hai? ek din bhi mujhe akhele nahi chodtha, wph kya apne aapko mera bodyguard samajtha hai?

Ye sab Dad ki gakthi hai, jab dekho Maan ko bhulathe hai...

When the girls come back wet Maan turns back and leaves at one, he waits in the car...

Geet sochthi hai...dekho kaise nautanki kar raha hai Sam ke samne? Itne dher toh mujhe kaise gur raha tha?

Geet suddenly realizes that it was not only Maan who lost his control but also geet...

Par woh mujhe aaise kyun gur raha tha? Aur mein bhi?

Mujhe achanak kya ho gaya tha? Nahiii...aaise kuch nahi hai...

Meinne kuch galat nahi kiya, haina babaji?

usska nazar hi bhura tha, mein kya kar sakthi?

Aur issi tarah uss din picnic cancel ho gaya uss Dhust Danav ke wajhe se...

Jab tak hostel mein the tab tak sab kitna kush the? Jab chaho jo chaho kar sakthe? Bas raat ko bahr nahi jaa sakthe, par din mein toh koi problem nahi thi, ye gahr toh ek first class jail ki taarh hai, aur ye Maan uss jail ka warden, haina babaji?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 16
awesome dear...
so Maan was actually stalking Sam?
yaar when will this end?
cant see Maan going behind someone else other than Geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 17
awesome dear...
lovely...
who was Dev talking to and about whom?
and he took her sim too?
Geet is so innocent...
and Geet mistook him to be the caller?
or is he really?
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear 👏


awesome ⭐️


maaneet moments are fantabulous and hot...☺️


waiting for next


love


uma...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update.. both lost in each other for a moment

already waiting for next 😊

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