MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 91

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan really loves her but he isn't able to accept her because due to her he lost his father & sister.
Maan no wonder got a shock when heard geet saying that line🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
lolz..geets language shocked maan
he stayed with her whle n8
he cant acept her nor shove away
bcoz his love made him lose his family
he cant forget geet too
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
feeling bad fr maan n geet...pyar hai magar kya karein...

superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update maan love geet but cant accept her bcoz his love his baba died he cant 4get but they sleep in peace geet talk with maan in his language lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 23

geet , three time cut call but look meera eyes and dial number when maan vocie come from other ...hello , phone is verge of fall down geet just look to paper and read it in one go

" apunko yaha ki air suit nahi kar le rahi hai so jaldise apunko yaha se lake jao" smaja kya bhidu apun geet bol rahi hai and cut the called

Other side maan who is in meeting chocked with his coffee geet and this language and next moment he slip coffee from his shirt ...he hell shock with her voice and language

All looking him like alien like she got to horn on head ,he glare them and say cold voice meeting after one hour hogi I need privacy all run from there because all get that volcano is going to burst

Maan try to clam himself and took mobile and check last call to confirm yes its meera di number than how she talking and in this language, he mummer doc se confirm karna hoga sir pe hurt hone se kya language bhi bhool jate hai

How she say such word apunko ,bhidu and all kaise how he is lost in so much thought and his thought broke when again his phone start to get ring he took that without watching number and say hello Msk speaking

Other side kya bhidu apun girl hoke bhi terko hint de rahi hai and tum itna bada ghochu (daffer ) kaise ban gaya yaar jaldi aa jo bhidu dekh tu zaldi aa gaya to tumko ke chumma (kiss ) mil jaayega

And thud maan mobile slip from his hand and broke into three pice ...he look to mobile like he watching any ghost he feel like he watching na na hearing some dream so chek reality he pinch himself and criedd ahhh

Poor boy really hard pinch himself ...he took big deep breath to clam himself and took mobile and set all piece on place and again restart handset and he consuls all his meeting and walk to hospital to look what is happening to her

He try to entered in room but nurse inform ed him that patient get discharge

Now he get angry like kya ho raha hai he march to house

And driectly went to meera di room but get shuttered and he turn his back and mummer sorry ...he is so embressed

Actualy both sharing kis* ,,meera back to maan but he get that he run to his rooom and scold himself she is not alone now ,maan shudhar ja aise knock kiye bina kisi ke bedroom main

Other side somone closed meera room and that room fill with laugh its merra dev ,along with dagadu and geet , actualy dagadu and geet hide in room and meera and dev making drama of kis*

Geet make pout like they troubling maan , meera roll her eyes and say geet stop to make such face ye sab tere liye hi ho raha so tuje bhi maan aisa kuch de de ...she wink to geet and geet turn all red with tease and she run to her room now she have to start her drama no 2 na

She sleep on bed and thro glass on floor like its fail ...

That sound of glass and next second maan stnading there with so much worry already confused soul with call ,than kis* and now this sound

He so scred for geet and saw geet strugling to took glass from floor ...thou geet feel bad to make such drama yes she having pain but not so much but baba dagdu and meera face come front of her and she continued her drama like they teach her

Maan took glass and pour some water in it and give to geet geet took that and drink that and sleep like she not know him

Maan get more confused ,sach main ye sab bhool gayi hai kya ,lakin meera di and maan cheek turn red in shyness after reminding that closed moment of meera

And somone say kiska tnought kar rahe ho kya , maan nodded in yes and say in upsate mind ha KIS*

And he trun to look that person and his eyes winded in shock

next part till night in new thread

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Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update ab to sab milke maan ki band bajane wale hai.
Edited by florald7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update

all are making Maan so confused

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates👏👏



i read 22 & 23 now only😉



maan meet geet in hospital😃



maaneet slept peacefully😉



geet shocked maan😆



poor maan😆



all r planning to unite maaneet😃



update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update mahi
bechara maan ka kya haal hogaya😆
again geet cald maan aft listenng dat he ill get chumma bechare ke haat se mobile hi girgaya😲🤣
when he went 2 hospital geet was dischargd nd when he came 2 meera's room meera nd dev were kissng nd maan ran 4m der😳
it was plan of dagdu nd nw geet's drama no.2 startd😃
abhi ye maan kisko dek kar aisa expression de raha hai😕
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update mahi...
just sooo hilarious..
bechare maan ke saath khel rahe hai yeh sab..
OMG geet ki wo language bhindu 😆😆😆
bechara maan tho gaya kaam se...
wah dagdu ji kya training ha appki geet tho perfectionist hogayi ha bolne mai..
aur man bechara dhoudtha doudtha chela ayya hospital
lekin geet tho discharge hogayi..
ghar pahucha tho ek aur shock mila maan babu ko..😆🤣
he came 2 meera's room meera nd dev were kissng nd maan ran 4m der😳
hayye meera and dagdu ji ka plan super hit..😃👍🏼⭐️
wah geet ka plan 2 shuru...
maan bechara poor aconfused soul bangaya..
continue soon...
eagerly waiting to whats next...

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