MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
maaneet are suffering. feeling bad for them.😭
bechare meera n dev..😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update loved it
maan he marry geet but notready feel bad 4 geet , he went geet room he still care 4 her lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read ur Os...lovly..bookmaring..dis ll comment once i hav cmpleted all parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Hope soon all problem will be solved.
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lovely emotional update mahi really good
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 20

Dagadu went near dev and took his hand in his hand and mummer itna sad mat ho thoda time lagega lakin sab kuch thik ho jayega bhiya

Dev sadly nodded in yes ...

Maaneet reach to office with other route geet hide her sindoor she know maan don't want this relation so... adi and maan just ignore her present in office , she get all instruction by another people

Adi went in maan cabin - sir I want to talk with u

But maan cut him if u want to talk on personal issue than in my house not here mr sharma ,adi nodded in yes and went from there

Other side geet who working in her cabin and , maan can see her but now he don't want to face her ,so at last he send her to old room office to rearrange all file and geet went away from there thou she feel dizzy because in all this she miss her diner and BF also

But she know it is her luck she get that maan don't want to her in front of him that's why he send her here , her one decision wo bhi apne ma ke liye ...destroy so many life ,adi painful face come in mind of geet ,and tear escape from her eyes

Its passed 4 of evening and geet working like robot in that room ... she want to forget all and work is good option for that, but without eating anything since last night at last take toll on geet and she fainted in that room she lost her balance and hit with corner of table ..blood come from her forehead

After few minute maan get call from meera about his lunch ,but he make excused on name of work ,meera ask wo geet kaha hai ,than click maan yes she don't come back from that room for lunch also other side meera mummer , kal raat se she not eat anything kya karu main in logo ka

Maan scare for while and cut called and hurriedly run to that room ,his heart cover with fear , wo thik hai ke nahi ...he entered in room with thudding heart and fear

And land escape from his feet when he saw her all behosh and blood coming from her forehead ,he turn numb for while some how he run to her and took her in hug he try to stop that blood

He just dialed number and its adi ,he called out in top of his out called ambulance fast , fast ...other side adi get alert with maan voice he called ambulance and next moment maan with geet in arm standing in parking , adi and Vicky get shock with geet condition , thou adi not accepting her but he never want to see her like this and maan painful face with tears , something show adi ...adi remember pinky face for while he face same fear , agony lost of his life his love

They reach to hospital in between Vicky call Dagadu and ask him to brought meera di in hospital

Doc start to treat geet

Maan Vicky and adi standing outside , meera come there with dadgadu

Meera - what happen ,kya hua how she get injured

Maan say her all that she working lonely in that room ,meera shot a angry glare to him ...

Meera taunted them kya tum log humanity bhi bhool gaya ho kya ... maan gulp hard ...

Meera turn to Dagadu and say in cold voice muje yaha jada log nahi chiye tale them to go away from here I can

Handle her properly bas tum ruk jao

All get this massage from them but this time .. they r on fault maan don't want to go but he know how hard to change meera di decision

Adi and Vicky return to office and maan went to house ,he need privacy ,he went to look dev and found dev hurt eyes same pain hurt which he feel for pinky

Maan get today he hurt a brother ,brother of geet ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

next part in some hour

please try to finish thread

part 21
Maan get with dev look he hurted a brother who want to look his sis happiness maan bend his head and went to his jim

He want to relif from this pain like his soul with his life wo kitna bhi denied kare ,he love geet and this only fact wo accept kare ya na kare

Jo hua wo bahot galat hua ,lakin in sab main geet ki galti itni hi thi that she act like doll of mohinder handa and that trash their love in very bad way he lost his family

Maan start his exesrcised very hardly , ye phiscial dard uska mann ka dard kuch kam kar de ...he don't get for how many hour he is in jim with his work out

Pream ki yaatana

Love or pain

Other side doc done some stitches and start saline to geet they suggest to put her for day ,Dagadu brought all medicin etc etc both saw geet lost face , she don't pinch once in pain ,khalipan ,but her eyes again and again moving to door like she waiting

Meera and Dagadu feel hevy with heart both soul Maaneet in so much pain

Dagadu - bhabhi wo nahi aayega

Geet give him confused look

Dagadu - wo khurana nahi aayega , wo dikhata sher hai but he is chuha in front of meera di , wo kya hai na meera di usko yaha se bhagaya hai , and he don't have guts to come back ha jada se jada road pe aa jayega ,hospital ke pass

Now both look to him and dagdu pointed to window where bmw is standing

He ask with naughty tone ku meera di tere bhai ki hai na ,meera di nodded in yes

Meera di make puppy face - and mummer ,main angry thi na tab

Dagadu - kya angry di in dono ko nazdeek lana hai ya dur karna hai

Meera - wo galti se

Dagadu think for while and say meera di to went to home and us bmw ke samne se jana

Meera nodded in yes and give pick on geet forehead ,geet want to say something but meera stop her and say don't geet , its needed we have to brake shell of Msk

And meera went from there ,here dadgadu tale geet to pretent sleep

Maan who can not stop himself to coming to hospital get surpriced with meera went out ,she went to home direaction ,he know Dagadu with her but after 5 min he found Dagadu also in parking now he get hiper ye kya hai

How he come dwon when she is all alone in room he marched to Dagadu where he counting 5,4,3,2...1 msk is here

Dagadu give him smile and ask ,kya hai msk aise ku dekh rahe ho

Maan - tuze abhi uske sath hona chiye tha na ,yaha kya kar raha hai

Dagadu give confused look and ask kiske sath

Maan - wo wo ...but how he show care for her

Dagadu enjoying maan restless , handa kya wo to so gayi hai

Maan grab Dagadu shirt and gritted his teeth wo handa nahi hai and march to geet room

Dagadu shake his head ,like kya dost mila hai past main atacker aj ko kharab kar rahe hai

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazng update mahi
maaneet went 2 office maan nd adi maintaind distance 4m geet
other side geet is wrkng witout hvng her bf nd dinner😲
maan sent geet 2 old room 2 re arrange d files as he doesnt want 2 face her😡
finally geet wrkd like robot nd faintd nd got hurt on forehead😭
when meera tld abt geet maan got scard nd ran 2 d room where he sent geet nd saw a unconscious geet😭
maan adi nd vicky took geet 2 hospital nd meera too reachd der nd she was angry on all nd sent dem away👍🏼
when maan saw dev he realsid wt he hv done bt wts d use geet is hospital nw😡
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update mahi geet fainted and ended in hospital meera angry on maan and adi kisiko bhi geet ki fikar hi nahi yaha maan is restless he straightly denied she is handa handa nahi hai to khurana bhi to nahi hai decide dude what u want waiting to see how msk shell breaks
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update mahi geet gets hospitlised coz of maa and adi meera angry on them but our maan is restless for her meera ke dar se road pe hi khada hai hospital aane ki himmat hi nahi hai he said she is not handa bhai hand nahi hai to khurana bhi nahi hai decide msk dude what do u want dekhete msk ka shell kab aur kase toota hai

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