MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 88

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing parts

thank you

Maan is so much angry on geet that he don't want show his love to geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan eet to office
geet is fully engrossed in work
maan wants to keep geet away
but it ended in wrong note
geet fainted
n maan rushed her to hospital

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Posted: 10 years ago
devs hurt eyes makes him know the mistake he has done
he went to see geet
but standing out in fear of meera
she too left so maneet can get together
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 22

Maan grab Dagadu shirt and gritted his teeth wo handa nahi hai and march to geet room Dagadu shake his head ,like kya dost mila hai past main atacker aj ko kharab kar rahe hai

kya yaar past past karte rahte hai and apne ajko and kal ko destroy ker dete hai , ganpati bapa bacha lena inko

maan march to geet room with thudding heart he reach in her room and found her sleeping ,he feel relax , that she is sleeping he softly caresed her injury very softly a tear fall from maan eyes

he satart to talk pata hain muje I am hurting u , without your any crime kya karu lakin khud ko guilty maanta hu meri pyyar ke wajse I lost my family ...ager main pyaar nahi karta to mere baba and di mere sath hoti aj ,ye thought muje na jine de raha hai na marne

us dine muje pata hai wo tum nahi koi aur bol raha tha with your word ...but uske baad jo bhi hua ...adi ka face , di aur baba ke bejane lashe (death body ) ise sabne muje tod ke rakha hai geet ,todke ...sabko meri succes ,mehane ,padai dikhati hai lakin kisiko ye nahi dikhata wo har ek silly things ke liye hasne wala Maan , robot MSK bane ke reh gaya hai

muje mere pyaar ki bahot badi saja mili hai geet ...na to main tume bhool sakta hoo na apna sakta hu ...geet ...adi ka face muje hmesha yaad dilata hai our love distroy adi love ,snach his life his love , I am sorry geet ,but chakher bhi main tume accept nahi kar sakata sorry some tear fall on geet hand ,she so want to weep that tear ,hug him console him but she know its not write

maan put his head near geet on bed and don't get when he sleep there like baby , geet so much want to touch his face ,erase all pain of his life but ...

prem ki yaatana

love or pain

she also sleep ...both soul get beautiful sleep after so many year its peaceful sleep in sleep maan took geet hand in his hand

dagadu saw this and went away to inform meera , who happy like child and hug dev in happiness ,poor boy stubble with her sudden hug ...dev give naughty look and meera turn shy but she control her heart and tale what dagadu tale her both happy for maaneet

next mroning maan get up first and look their hand a small smile come on his face ,he pick geet forhead and went from there

after some time when geet open her eyes ,she start to search maan but he is no were she thought for while is that dream or what she is so confused and don't get two people smile on her face expression its meera and dagadu ...

meera - nahi nahi wo sapana nahi reality hi tha

geet look with shok to them and red hu come on her cheek ,meera hug her and say I am happpy for u

geet - di , bhaiya I want my maan back

and dagadu jump on his place ,ye hui na baate ab aayega maza

geet - but I want first forgivness from adi bro

and both nodded in yes

a smile come on dagdu face ,meera ask what is cooking in your mind

dagadu ..give phone to geet and say her dial maan number and say what is he saying

dagadu - bhabhi say him : " apunko yaha hi air suit nahi kar le rahi hai so jaldise apunko yaha se lake jao"

geet eyes poped like boll aise lauguage she cried babaji

meera who try to hold her laugh brust in laugh

geet cried di

dadgadu karna padega bhbhi jarrori hai

geet - took deep breath and say practice karu kya first

both nodded in yes

geet - wo yaha ki hawa humako raas nahi aa rahi hai to kya app hume apne ghar le jane ka kast karenge

now dadgadu make O shpe mouth and mummmer bhabhi bhai ko pass lana hai bhagana nahi hai

geet look to meera di who nodded in yes

at last dagadu write it on paper and show her and give her meera di mobile

geet , three time cut call but look meera eyes and dial number when maan vocie come from other ...hello , phone is verge of fall down geet just look to paper and read it in one go

" apunko yaha hi air suit nahi kar le rahi hai so jaldise apunko yaha se lake jao" smaja kya bhidu apun geet bol rahi hai and cut the called

Other side maan who is in meeting chocked with his cofffee geet and this language

part 20,21 on page 145

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update mahi absolutely loved it maan wants to accept her but he cant coz he is in guilt geet talked with maan in his typical mumbaiya language 🤣 loved maans reaction waiting more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 20

Lovely update maahi di...
Maan wants to avoid geet...
So he send her to old room...
Bechari geet... She has not esten anything...
Atlast she felt unconscious and hit her head...
Maan is so guilty & shocked seeimg her in blood...
😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 21

Nice update di...
Maan hurt himself by doing vigorous exercise...
Geet looking at door waiting for maan...
Meera & dagadu plan how to make maan came near geet...
😊

Sorry for the late reply di...
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update dear, wanted to maaneet together soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 22

Maan pours his heart out...
Geet wants to sooth him... Console him... But can't...
She decided that she will bring her maan back to her...
Just lovely update di...
❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Updates

Its such a difficult situation Maan loves Geet yet he does not want to
accept her all he does is shows her that he hates her yet this is
impossible to do
Maan should not blame his love for the lost of his father and sister
yes its true Geet came Mohinder to accuse Maan but she had no other
choice and yes perhaps this news did kill Maan's father and sister
but Maan and Geet's love was pure so I just cannot see that because
of this news they would have died maybe something else happened
but even if both died because of whatever Mohinder and Geet said
Maan and Geet should slowly start to form friends just to ease their
pain

Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago

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